Its a god story idea. There needs to be significant editing. How does Hanna go from being right beside logan to being tied to a chair right as logan opens the door to the rouges strong hold? Inconsistencies, redundant sentences. Logans going to have a heart attack with how often he has tightness in his chest. Hahaha just heard it again kinda want to count how many times I've heard its said in this two part story. Can't sit through it again. Please edit the story.
I personally love it. Regardless of it glitches. 😊❤❤
Logan was a good man who realized hidden strength. He had good supports which encouraged positive decisions. Thanks.
I’ve been looking for part 2! ❤❤❤❤❤
It's a good storyline, but an extremely large amount of glitches
Apologies for that! We are working on that!! New Uploads Will not have that Issue. That has been sorted.
Its a god story idea. There needs to be significant editing.
How does Hanna go from being right beside logan to being tied to a chair right as logan opens the door to the rouges strong hold?
Inconsistencies, redundant sentences. Logans going to have a heart attack with how often he has tightness in his chest. Hahaha just heard it again kinda want to count how many times I've heard its said in this two part story. Can't sit through it again. Please edit the story.
Very very slow story. I only actively listen for about an hour and still wasn't lost-
Well the end made no sense. Repeated chapters, chapters out of order
boring , boring. I didn't finish it.
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