This was something else, while the story was rushed, I really liked seeing an evil naruto, his subconscious regrets, his conscious regrets. I believe it showed that revenge and hatred all just lead to regret and sorrow, that actions also have consequences. Overall a 8/10 story. Great upload
I'd have guessed Kyuubi might have gotten some amusement in the irony of the simple fact that Minato intended for Naruto to keep Konoha safe from Kyuubi, Only for Naruto to use Kyuubi's power to get revenge, For himself, and by extension Kyuubi by proxu, got it's revenge
I know this ending was SUPER rushed but still, the idea the sasuke who had been dead for years, who is an uchiha which does give the power to control biju if they are without a host, they do NOT have the power to cut the connection between a jinchūriki and its tailed beast, epecially how ridculously powerful Naruto was in this story. So, Danzo gave the scroll to Shikimaru when they no longer even had a sharingan user let alone an Uchiha, that truly makes no sense. On top of the fact that it was never stated that Sasuke even had a MS, just regular 3 tomoe sharingan which he then instantly mastered some random Uchiha techinique that just happened to have the power to completely sever the bijuu-jinchuriki connection even though Kurama's chakra was flowing through Naruto as if it were his own, always active. Just the idea that an Uchiha could completely render a jinchūriki useless even if they had taken years to learn the technique would still be hard to take seriously, not only because if the Uchiha had always had this scroll it would have fundamentally changed many aspects of the early story for one, and secondly he just instantly mastered it with one look...lol, Great Story overall and very well written (Lord of the land of fire (the author)) and I'm sure I can speak for most people here by saying thank you for your hardwork to turn this story basically into an audiobook, much easier to digest for people that would rather listen than read. An ending (even if maybe not the best thought out) is still better than leaving a cliffhanger, however like I said I do understand it was rushed, the ending was basically just a deus ex machina to defeat Naruto that really didn't even have a foundation or make much sense which just leaves me personally (my opinion) feel somewhat empty from this ending. Sorry for the short book comment :P Still again thanks to both the author and just a shinobi 2.0 for bring this story to life :) (Maybe if I get permission, I will finish it from right after Naruto's meeting with Sarutobi up until the end with the ending being different and planned out to the best of my ability, if that does happen and I feel up to it I may even continue to involve the other enemies and nations against Naruto to give it a full and complete end, of course assuming I get premission from the author.)
The story is great but i hate in the story everyone judges naruto but if the shoe was on the other foot they would of been him or worse look at cannon sasuke if naruto didnt win he would have been a dictator and ruled all the hidden villages just because his clan was killed by the leaf not that im justify it but the worst person in all of naruto is the third hokage he in my opinion is the true evil he allowed donso to do just as evil as the snake and he has the gall to judge other and the neglect and abuse on naruto if the lord third thought naruto was family i wonder if his real grandson was the junjuriky would he allow the same to him and if he would hes a monster the same as donso and mintio was just as bad
Yeah honestly, I mean in way kinda poetic. Tbh, I’ll admit something, I’m usually not one for, i don’t really know the word for it. Well not the word I’d wanna use anyway, and I’ve seen, I’ve done things that aren’t the best, and I should feel such emotion over, I’m not the best person. But I don’t feel such emotion over those things. Well I do. But I’ve seen things and done things that won’t make me shed a tear. But somehow this story, almost did. Doesn’t sound crazy. But it’s more crazy than you know.
This was something else, while the story was rushed, I really liked seeing an evil naruto, his subconscious regrets, his conscious regrets. I believe it showed that revenge and hatred all just lead to regret and sorrow, that actions also have consequences. Overall a 8/10 story. Great upload
I'd have guessed Kyuubi might have gotten some amusement in the irony of the simple fact that Minato intended for Naruto to keep Konoha safe from Kyuubi, Only for Naruto to use Kyuubi's power to get revenge, For himself, and by extension Kyuubi by proxu, got it's revenge
Damn good story Naruto was practically backed in the corner from the tuning exams
Damn this was a good one
This was a damn great one fr
I know this ending was SUPER rushed but still, the idea the sasuke who had been dead for years, who is an uchiha which does give the power to control biju if they are without a host, they do NOT have the power to cut the connection between a jinchūriki and its tailed beast, epecially how ridculously powerful Naruto was in this story. So, Danzo gave the scroll to Shikimaru when they no longer even had a sharingan user let alone an Uchiha, that truly makes no sense. On top of the fact that it was never stated that Sasuke even had a MS, just regular 3 tomoe sharingan which he then instantly mastered some random Uchiha techinique that just happened to have the power to completely sever the bijuu-jinchuriki connection even though Kurama's chakra was flowing through Naruto as if it were his own, always active. Just the idea that an Uchiha could completely render a jinchūriki useless even if they had taken years to learn the technique would still be hard to take seriously, not only because if the Uchiha had always had this scroll it would have fundamentally changed many aspects of the early story for one, and secondly he just instantly mastered it with one look...lol, Great Story overall and very well written (Lord of the land of fire (the author)) and I'm sure I can speak for most people here by saying thank you for your hardwork to turn this story basically into an audiobook, much easier to digest for people that would rather listen than read. An ending (even if maybe not the best thought out) is still better than leaving a cliffhanger, however like I said I do understand it was rushed, the ending was basically just a deus ex machina to defeat Naruto that really didn't even have a foundation or make much sense which just leaves me personally (my opinion) feel somewhat empty from this ending.
Sorry for the short book comment :P Still again thanks to both the author and
just a shinobi 2.0 for bring this story to life :) (Maybe if I get permission, I will finish it from right after Naruto's meeting with Sarutobi up until the end with the ending being different and planned out to the best of my ability, if that does happen and I feel up to it I may even continue to involve the other enemies and nations against Naruto to give it a full and complete end, of course assuming I get premission from the author.)
Well fuck, i give you permission 😅😅😅😅
Not that it means shit, but we can pretend it does, right?
Im typing this before im even At 1 min i love the first one amd i hope for a pt 3
So this is the evil route ending.
Why did you do this to me the ending man
dam shit was fire my heart hurt
That was worth it 😂
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The Paths We Choose by lord of the land of fire
Naruto use all the Ninetails power do we become the Ninetails and that means he can’t die right I oh no
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Damn, this is depressing.
Imagine in a Military Dictatorship, thinking that the HEAD of said dictatorship can be asked to step down.
The story is great but i hate in the story everyone judges naruto but if the shoe was on the other foot they would of been him or worse look at cannon sasuke if naruto didnt win he would have been a dictator and ruled all the hidden villages just because his clan was killed by the leaf not that im justify it but the worst person in all of naruto is the third hokage he in my opinion is the true evil he allowed donso to do just as evil as the snake and he has the gall to judge other and the neglect and abuse on naruto if the lord third thought naruto was family i wonder if his real grandson was the junjuriky would he allow the same to him and if he would hes a monster the same as donso and mintio was just as bad
Trauriges ende
killing naruto off at the end was a L move on the author part, trash
Yeah honestly, I mean in way kinda poetic. Tbh, I’ll admit something, I’m usually not one for, i don’t really know the word for it. Well not the word I’d wanna use anyway, and I’ve seen, I’ve done things that aren’t the best, and I should feel such emotion over, I’m not the best person. But I don’t feel such emotion over those things. Well I do. But I’ve seen things and done things that won’t make me shed a tear. But somehow this story, almost did.
Doesn’t sound crazy. But it’s more crazy than you know.
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