A breathtaking kaleidoscope of colours cascaded across the skyline; saffron, amethyst, azure, and fiery red hues merging into a vivid gradient of mesmerising display. is the semi colon used correctly?
Bleak clouds shrouded the city in a blanket of despair, a cacophony of hissing sounds struck the nearby land as though it had been engulfed by a sallow moon hunting its prey, turning the sky from an azure setting, into a sight of charcoal which had carefully lit the obsidian night sky. Forgotten, forsaken, forlorn. A morose package lay into the depths of a delivery van, squashed right at the back, lying in agony. The pristine exterior began to fade away as the years passed: it became abandoned every miniscule second of waiting. "Why hasn't anyone chosen me? I've been waiting for five long years," the melancholic parcel wonders aloud.
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@@rayangcse8508 i think so
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A breathtaking kaleidoscope of colours cascaded across the skyline; saffron, amethyst, azure, and fiery red hues merging into a vivid gradient of mesmerising display.
is the semi colon used correctly?
@@manveenkhurana6558 You'd use a Colon instead of a Semi Colon.
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Bleak clouds shrouded the city in a blanket of despair, a cacophony of hissing sounds struck the nearby land as though it had been engulfed by a sallow moon hunting its prey, turning the sky from an azure setting, into a sight of charcoal which had carefully lit the obsidian night sky. Forgotten, forsaken, forlorn. A morose package lay into the depths of a delivery van, squashed right at the back, lying in agony. The pristine exterior began to fade away as the years passed: it became abandoned every miniscule second of waiting. "Why hasn't anyone chosen me? I've been waiting for five long years," the melancholic parcel wonders aloud.
Very good imagery but I believe you are comma splicing.
@@maeveh4272 what do you mean?
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