too much procrastinating its a good story but too much that is not needed for the story still i lime the story but wish it wasnt stretched so much some things are explained multiple times which is unnecessary
The story has too much filler exposition....the plot is barely moving forward with constantly repeated ideas & unnecessary descriptive or internal tangents.
It's one thing for MC to support the magical culture, traditions & family education...but completely turning his nose at basic muggle education makes Harry as extreme as his father, with the same narrow-mindedness that he detests. If he can't even bother to understand a closely connected world that has a population multiple times his own, or take basic courses like maths or science, especially for his age group, he is well on his way to being a half-baked mc, whose philosophy is built on a sand castle.
Have harry rethink his Thoughts The way muggles do things especially science . I think there's a chance to use both science and magic , Since he is Like lily but on the other side of the coin . Have him and Lilly Merge science and magic Both will gain me insight of the other.
I think Harry should be a gray wizard the need to understand the dark arts but not delve into it but know how to fight against it. Understanding and knowing how to use certain magic that isn't considered light . This Harry uses it responsibly and doesn't use certain magics without valid reason. The gray magic Could you use the neutral magic Two it full capacity As. Well as the light and dark if one chooses. It's the. Best of both worlds with almost no negative drawbacks . Would the infinity of both light and dark One can Use the Weakness Of one against the other . In short, he should be made into a magical batman of sort
I can't wait for part 2 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
Next part please
More please
What is the ship
This a good story
Part 2 please
too much procrastinating its a good story but too much that is not needed for the story still i lime the story but wish it wasnt stretched so much some things are explained multiple times which is unnecessary
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Way too wordy in useless spots. Also numerous duplications.
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The story has too much filler exposition....the plot is barely moving forward with constantly repeated ideas & unnecessary descriptive or internal tangents.
It's one thing for MC to support the magical culture, traditions & family education...but completely turning his nose at basic muggle education makes Harry as extreme as his father, with the same narrow-mindedness that he detests. If he can't even bother to understand a closely connected world that has a population multiple times his own, or take basic courses like maths or science, especially for his age group, he is well on his way to being a half-baked mc, whose philosophy is built on a sand castle.
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Have harry rethink his Thoughts The way muggles do things especially science . I think there's a chance to use both science and magic , Since he is Like lily but on the other side of the coin . Have him and Lilly Merge science and magic Both will gain me insight of the other.
I like it more please 📗📗📗
I think Harry should be a gray wizard the need to understand the dark arts but not delve into it but know how to fight against it. Understanding and knowing how to use certain magic that isn't considered light . This Harry uses it responsibly and doesn't use certain magics without valid reason. The gray magic Could you use the neutral magic Two it full capacity As.
Well as the light and dark if one chooses. It's the.
Best of both worlds with almost no negative drawbacks . Would the infinity of both light and dark One can Use the Weakness Of one against the other . In short, he should be made into a magical batman of sort
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Needs closed caption the AI voice is bland and has no feeling to it . And I think Lily and James needa a wake-up call to who really is the chosen One
True but could be a lot worse
Is it gay
Next part please
Part 2