Motives Project - Dollhouse - The Bedroom Demo
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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 6 ก.ย. 2024
- UPDATE: The original song has been found, please check out How Long by Paula Toledo! All credits to her for writing the real song.
A basic structure and arrangement demo for my cover, please excuse the terrible vocal quality! I live in a shared house so I had to be kinda quiet and I recorded it in my bedroom using an SM58 with no pop filter. This is just a rough outline of where everything should go, what chords go where etc.
Sending this version off to my mates who do guitar and vocals, hopefully going to get a drummer involved soon too...
funny how we found this now.
Yep!
I love these projects that you’re doing, recreating lost songs from just 30 second clips or a full minute snippet is genuinely super impressive. Keep up the great work!!! :)
It's amazing the structure of your cover is similiar to the original's
If this is how good the demo is, just imagine the final product
well its out noe
@@keebshipi meant motive's cover. he said he will release the unfinished version of the final draft.
It was better than i could have possibly imagined
oh you ate this up
BRO WE JUST FOUND IT
Paula Toledo - How long (2005)
This truly sounds pretty nostalgic yet calming. Keep up the work!✨
I'm glad there are people giving attention to this song
I'll be honest, I really only knew about EKT when it came to lost songs, i liked it's 80's vibes, but your demo, despite it's apparently "bedroom" quality, is really nice. Your voice sounds wonderful while singing, especially with how softly you use it here, it matches the songs vibes perfectly.
THIS IS SO AMAZING WHAT
i'd still love to hear a fully produced version of this
OMG. This is simply heavenly!! The fact that there's still more to be added is just incredible! Can't wait for the final product. ❤
It's so pretty. Thank you so much 😭❤️ even the lyrics make so much sense and it's giving me catharsis ❤️❤️❤️
plot twist: Paula Toledo - How Long
These are so good you have NO IDEA 😭
Your so talented and I'm always so giddy when I see you made a new post
KEEP. MAKING. MUSIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Despite it being a bedroom demo I think it sounds amazing already!!! I love what you're doing for the lostwave community with this and EKT. Also best of luck with getting a drummer since the Dollhouse part would definitely sound even better with one😎
Also I hope the final version has the "How long"s sound a little closer to the original snippets 😭by that I mean how the original singer sings every "How" with a high note, then a lower one, while you sing them starting from a lower note, then a higher one, no offense at all since I like your singing despite being kinda quiet (the snippets aren't that loud until the dollhouse part anyways lol), I don't think your vocal quality is terrible at all, I just felt I had to type this out in regards to the "How" specifically
HLWIT found!! “How Long” by Paula Toledo!!
Dude I know nothing about the lostwave scene but you simply must keep making music
We found the song like less then a month later
I really enjoy the beach reference with the mentions of waves btw!
Interpreted lyrics I added to genius:
[Verse 1]
Discarded one too many times
But you still find me alive
In the light of day, I'm swept away
By rolling waves to some other place
[Pre-Chorus]
And I don't need your help
Lookin' for release
[Chorus]
How long (How long)
Will it take? Oh
How long (How long)
Will it take me to feel?
How long (How long)
Will it take? Oh
How long until it's the way I thought it would be?
The way I wanted to be
[Verse 2]
And you watch me draw the blinds
You never let it catch you on your good side
On the edge of night, you dim the lights and fade away
We're falling out our phase
[Pre-Chorus]
And I don't want your help
Lookin' for release
[Chorus]
How long (How long)
Will it take? Oh
How long (How long)
Will it take me to feel?
How long (How long)
Will it take? Oh
How long until it's the way I thought it would be?
The way I wanted to be
[Outro]
No, I won't be a doll in your pretty dollhouse
No, I won't be a plaything that you can toss around
No, I won't be the child who lives for acceptance
No, I won't want anyone who won't listen
Ooh, it's the way that I'm living now
And I'm not givin' enough
I'll make it good enough
Ooh, and you won't be forgiven
Don't want, want anyone who won't listen
No, I won't want anyone who won't listen
looking for release
@@jammysnewadventures I’ll fix that :)
@@geggy310 thanks! glad I could help!
I LOVE THIS
i'm a pretentious jerk and even i dig this.
not joking, i'm the opposite of fun i dnt
approve of anythng but this is so neat.
made with love, u can tell.
can you make a remake of "try to smile again" like how you do with "everyone knows that"
Hope for the best in the final product
Welp, song has been found!
this is amazing
Is this cancelled now cuz the song is found?
This is going to be so fucking good when it's complete
motives be like: No full song? LAY IT ON ME!!
It sounds good!
So… even though the Song has been found, will you still upload your finished version? I’d still like to hear your interpretation ngl
It not.. it just 1:31 second video
@@Wsp192 th-cam.com/video/SjQB5mfrPpU/w-d-xo.htmlsi=ERvpKPGkLXePbh7_
dude it's totally found, check out Paula Toledo - How Long (2005)@@Wsp192
after hearing the real version, i still actually prefer this interpretation! hope you'll still release a final version
I've sent an email to Paula asking her how she feels on the project, I'll post a community update once I hear back! Lots more different songs to come next year though.
Even as a demo this goes oddly hard as hell (of course that’s the case with demos)
We need a remake of La Cancion de Alicia!
Your voice is so good :)
yo my man, if it’s possible can you upload the original ekt remake that has you’re original voice? stuff genuinely slaps dude. keep up the nice work.
Sorry if I'm asking to much, but did you know that "how long" was found?
No worries, and yes I did! I have emailed the artist about the project and I'm hoping to hear back from her before I post any more versions of How Long.
So.. i really hope i dont sound harshly annoying or very demanding to you-
But motives, would you ever decide on remaking "dance for hours a day/dancefloor was his name" in the future? :o
Its such a catchy song! And sadly theres currently no lead or clues on where that song originated since so far it was speculated to be from a live performance from the singer..
But im very curious if you would like to try to recreate it in some point since i know you might be very busy-
But i cant help but to think about your possible recreation for "dance for hours a day/dancefloor was his name" and how you would interpret it based on your lyrical work on EKT and how long will it take! But maybe someday, but im still looking forward to listen your other works on different lost songs.
Merry christmas though! ✨
Hello, thank you for your kind comment! I have definitely considered that song, I might try it after I've finished a demo of 'Try to Smile Again'. I've taken a little break as I've been ill, but I hope to get back to things in the new year. Have a great holiday!!
@@missingmotives Omg!! This is SO unexpected, this is so exciting! ^^
not just only me, but for everyone aswell to listen to it! We can't wait to listen to your recreation to "try to smile again" & hopefully other songs your planning on recreating like "dance for hours a day/dancefloor was his name" 😁
But most importantly, i really hope your doing well motives.. please please *please* take great care of yourself & enjoy the holidays while you're slowly recover well!
(Which is very much important for you to be honest.)
we really appreciate your wonderful talent & efforts on capturing the theme & tones of these lost songs in your own unique interpretations on them!
But for now, please take great care of yourself & hopefully spend a lot of time in the holidays with your friends & family!
Once again, Merry Christmas & have a splendid new year motive! 🎄✨️
Take care :D
You guessed the name properly!
Let's see if they rebuild dancefloor was His name
this is a song
aunt jemima
this is a comment
@@nateKitsura this is a reply
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Skill 👍
Hi again, Very off topic, but have you heard of the song "dance for hour a day"?
say do you do cover suggestions?
I thought this video was from 2009
Hey can I use this for an AI cover?
I have a question: if the full song gets found, will you still publish a polished version of this?
Motives project? More like Ulterior Motives project.
i am first
i need to hear ur music tell me where i can stream