I’m so glad you enjoyed the storyline! It’s great to hear that despite the jumps, it was still a good experience for you. Thank you for sharing your positive feedback! 😊
Thank you for your feedback! You're absolutely right; having chapters and a more consistent flow would make the story easier to follow. I appreciate your thoughtful suggestion!
Don’t bother to start this audio book. You will just get frustrated. Editing is abysmal! Whole sections skipped, then followed by sections referencing skipped sections. I couldn’t believe that the claiming part was skipped. As were several key sections that were paramount to building story line. The book is great and the audio is fantastic, but too much is missing! Very disappointed.
Thank you for sharing your detailed feedback! Your points about the missing sections and their impact on the story are important. Hopefully, future edits will address these issues.
The story started off good but it's jumping missing sections I don't know why in the beginning I can't understand what's going on I mean Then she's at school then she's lying on the floor what's going on
Thank you for your thoughtful feedback! It sounds like some transitions in the story might need more clarity to help the flow and make the events easier to follow. Your input is super helpful, and I'll definitely look into making those sections more cohesive.
Great question! It sounds like there’s a lot of mystery around Leo’s death. Clarifying who was responsible and how it happened could add more depth and excitement to the story. Thanks for pointing this out!
This comment is intended to make suggestions to improve the story line. Jumping and skipping sections of the story for no apparent reason is extremely confusing. Skipping several days or even several hours with no apparent reason makes it extremely difficult to follow the story. I can understand skipping the details of the sexual events, but skipping from what seems to be a breakfast to the female lead character waking after what seems to be a fight leaves the reader/listener wondering what happened. Even with the subsequent explanation that there had apparently been a fight still leaves the listener wondering what happened. Then skipping several days from one event to a training session with no indication that there was a skip without a "time lapse" or "two days later, while training" preceding it is again confusing, even though it is noted during the training. If I were going to grade this story on a 5 star rating, I would struggle to give it 2 stars and couldn't give it more than 2 1/2. With the skipping combined with the AI narration this story feels like an eighth or ninth grade school kid wrote it. Sorry I couldn't give you a nicer review.
Who is Gabriel, introduced at 2:07:25 or about there. It sounds like her mate, who up to this point has been Alexander. How do they find out that Leo has her little brother?
Thank you for sharing your thoughts! I appreciate your feedback and understand the importance of a well-connected and complete story. I'll make sure to address the gaps and improve the flow for a better experience.
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I loved the story line. Yes it did jump around a little but it was a good listen. Thank you for posting!
I’m so glad you enjoyed the storyline! It’s great to hear that despite the jumps, it was still a good experience for you. Thank you for sharing your positive feedback! 😊
Your right the story does keep jumping around, it is hard to know what is going on. You need to have chapters also may help
Thank you for your feedback! You're absolutely right; having chapters and a more consistent flow would make the story easier to follow. I appreciate your thoughtful suggestion!
Yes I am also having a hard time keeping up with all the gaps. Will try again later ❤️
Thank you for sharing how you feel! Taking a break and trying again later sounds like a good idea. Wishing you a smoother experience next time!
Don’t bother to start this audio book. You will just get frustrated. Editing is abysmal! Whole sections skipped, then followed by sections referencing skipped sections. I couldn’t believe that the claiming part was skipped. As were several key sections that were paramount to building story line. The book is great and the audio is fantastic, but too much is missing! Very disappointed.
Thank you for sharing your detailed feedback! Your points about the missing sections and their impact on the story are important. Hopefully, future edits will address these issues.
Didn't even end, right lot of missing pieces.
Yeah i dont understand the story. Confusing
Could you please clarify or provide more details? I’d love to assist further!
The story started off good but it's jumping missing sections I don't know why in the beginning I can't understand what's going on I mean Then she's at school then she's lying on the floor what's going on
Thank you for your thoughtful feedback! It sounds like some transitions in the story might need more clarity to help the flow and make the events easier to follow. Your input is super helpful, and I'll definitely look into making those sections more cohesive.
Well I loved it but I am sorry it’s not a full book and it skipped all over
How did Leo become dead who did it
Great question! It sounds like there’s a lot of mystery around Leo’s death. Clarifying who was responsible and how it happened could add more depth and excitement to the story. Thanks for pointing this out!
This comment is intended to make suggestions to improve the story line. Jumping and skipping sections of the story for no apparent reason is extremely confusing. Skipping several days or even several hours with no apparent reason makes it extremely difficult to follow the story. I can understand skipping the details of the sexual events, but skipping from what seems to be a breakfast to the female lead character waking after what seems to be a fight leaves the reader/listener wondering what happened. Even with the subsequent explanation that there had apparently been a fight still leaves the listener wondering what happened. Then skipping several days from one event to a training session with no indication that there was a skip without a "time lapse" or "two days later, while training" preceding it is again confusing, even though it is noted during the training.
If I were going to grade this story on a 5 star rating, I would struggle to give it 2 stars and couldn't give it more than 2 1/2. With the skipping combined with the AI narration this story feels like an eighth or ninth grade school kid wrote it. Sorry I couldn't give you a nicer review.
Who is Gabriel, introduced at 2:07:25 or about there. It sounds like her mate, who up to this point has been Alexander. How do they find out that Leo has her little brother?
Story keeps jumping. Too many gaps. Give us the full story. Not worth my time
Thank you for sharing your thoughts! I appreciate your feedback and understand the importance of a well-connected and complete story. I'll make sure to address the gaps and improve the flow for a better experience.