Pros: Intro More story in it Disney style Sad lines Eyes fall off Impossible colours Correct timing Own story Backwards walking Walks more faster Mickey ded Lines also makes my attention span more longer because itz a size of a damn walnut Cons: Streets dont get wonky No destroyed streets either Innacurate timing for the black screen If im being honest your version of this mouse avi is amazing Rank A
Pros: Intro Much more story Disney artstyle Depressing lines Eyes fall off Impossible colours Accurate timing Unique story Backwards walking Walking faster Oswald and Ortensia cameo Cons: Streets doesn't get wonky No destroyed streets Innacurate timing in black screen A great retake of old creepypasta Rank:A+ Comment inspired by Laemon Feez
Yo this is actually pretty good! I like the art style and in the black screen part usually you skip but this u wanna watch the entire thing without skipping.
This suicidemouse retake is alright. I praise the art style and i praise the music choice and the inclusion of old disney characters But it missed the mark on several points for me. So id give this around a 6.5 / 10. Much better then versions i have seen but its not mindblowing either. I will say tho im still happy when anyone makes any kind of suicidemouse video. Cause i love this story being relevant again
She might of, she was introduced in 1937, or maybe she didn’t exist back then and this is Maroge, is she really there, or can only Mickey see her, but Mickey isn’t real, he’s a tool used for cartoons, but him being know but everyone, them being loved by thousands, does that make them real, that is the question… Understand what I’m say cause I don’t 🤷♂️
@@FrankieSonic20 Last time was SNS 2.5 Retake, but SNS 2.5 Fanmade Owner snatch it which is fine bc it's kinda weird what name i put, so i decided to name it Retaken Night, as a SNS Fan-Mod
This is looks odd, why all of his friends alive and mini mouse is not cheating with other mouse? But the animation is pretty accurate. I’ll give it an -A tier
It represents Mickey and his fragile mind, in the beginning when Mickey was walking his friends were there, wondering what was wrong with Mickey later however they are gone and Mickey is all by himself, when Mickey “Dieds” he sees his friend are with him, but there twisted and dead, and in reality there not actually there anymore as they had left, so in other words, there hallucination that Mickey sees with his “dying breath” but if you want to know why Mickey sees them like this well, lets just say this isn’t the end for Mickey and his friends.
Each and every Mickey Mouse retake is always the same old episode where Mickey is doing nothing but walking while scary music is playing in the background why can't there be something different? Like make a happy version of suicide mouse?
Well that’s kind of how this creepy pasta goes, tho with that being said, I was maybe thinking about make a happy version of this, or possible dare I say a part 2 to this, but who knows. 🤷♂️
One thing I love is how you take in the "loop" aspect. Great job on that.
Pros:
Intro
More story in it
Disney style
Sad lines
Eyes fall off
Impossible colours
Correct timing
Own story
Backwards walking
Walks more faster
Mickey ded
Lines also makes my attention span more longer because itz a size of a damn walnut
Cons:
Streets dont get wonky
No destroyed streets either
Innacurate timing for the black screen
If im being honest your version of this mouse avi is amazing
Rank A
Thank you
@@alextriplett9414i take back my A ranking its going to S-
Eh it's a 9.125/10
well all the cons can be explained with the fact that its a *retake* and is meant to be different from the original
@@stank_o_lanternohh sorry but thank you
THIS IS SUCH AN INOVATIVE LOOK IN THE PASTA!
mickey having those kinds of toughts because he isnt real is very interesting! Keep up the good work!
8:25 the characters are abandoned now
I like this, great job man
8:05 mickey is going so fast that i cant tell if hes going backwards or not
He’s going forward, he’s just going REALLY fast,
He does go backwards at 7:23 tho
this is somehow suprisingly accurate to the story. nice put of effort man!
This is the greatest remake I ever seen in my entire life
Thank you
I like how Oswald and ortensia appear
What’s Scary & Awesome Job Pal!
Mickey .eeie yiui yiui gugu sry u
BEST MOUSE AVI RETAKE EVER!!!
I enjoyed EVERYTHING in this retake
Good Job Dude
Thank you so much, that really means a lot to me.
@@alextriplett9414 your welcome 👍😃
3:27 the way he looks at the camera is soo cute 😭😭
Pros:
Intro
Much more story
Disney artstyle
Depressing lines
Eyes fall off
Impossible colours
Accurate timing
Unique story
Backwards walking
Walking faster
Oswald and Ortensia cameo
Cons:
Streets doesn't get wonky
No destroyed streets
Innacurate timing in black screen
A great retake of old creepypasta
Rank:A+
Comment inspired by Laemon Feez
Oswald and Ortensia in the background is a nice touch
This retake is hella accurate. Correct time length- colors- Mickey speeding up, eyes rolling off his face, giant curving grin, 👍🏽
Oswald is the true mickey's brother that he was really sad about mickey
Yo this is actually pretty good! I like the art style and in the black screen part usually you skip but this u wanna watch the entire thing without skipping.
I really liked it!
I definitely want to add it to my mod
Bro became faster than the speed of light 💀
8:05 bro’s turning into sonic.
Mickey Mouse in mouse episode iswny favorite disney episod
6:58 Mickey's Mouse Trap is Coming VEHICLE aw
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Yooooooo That so freaking Scary
HALLOWEN TIME HEHEHEHHEEHEHHEHEHE
The end scared the hell out of me
Cool retake i like the added dialogue on the part where it fades to black it makes it less boring and skipeable to see
THIS IS SO GOOD!
Mickey Is Walking....Becasue He Is Gonna Get His.........§ÚÍĆÍĐÊ
7:53 9,738,829,928 km/h
This suicidemouse retake is alright. I praise the art style and i praise the music choice and the inclusion of old disney characters
But it missed the mark on several points for me. So id give this around a 6.5 / 10. Much better then versions i have seen but its not mindblowing either.
I will say tho im still happy when anyone makes any kind of suicidemouse video. Cause i love this story being relevant again
And Mickey's monologue looks like it was written by a kindergartner, with so many spelling mistakes. What is the native language of the animator?
@@numbuh1507 No clue
@@numbuh1507 rude
@@alextriplett9414 you should have just used spell check. I'm Brazilian and even I know the difference between "your" and "you're".
@@numbuh1507 it’s a mistake, we all make them, all try not to make that mistake next time, but don’t be a dick about it.
A mouse definitely goes faster and even faster and maximum faster and... (he forget he tripped)
Daisy Duck didn't even exist in the black and white cartoons.
:/ lol
She might of, she was introduced in 1937, or maybe she didn’t exist back then and this is Maroge, is she really there, or can only Mickey see her, but Mickey isn’t real, he’s a tool used for cartoons, but him being know but everyone, them being loved by thousands, does that make them real, that is the question…
Understand what I’m say cause I don’t 🤷♂️
I Hate Mickey Mouse
@@DHARI15Kuwait :(
@@DHARI15KuwaitHow dare you
this is like its own story not really going by the pasta so i like that
I still wanted to be somewhat faithful, but I also wanted to do my own thing, key term on why it’s called a retake and not a remake.
Pros: Eyes falling off, Screaming audio, Impossible colors, grin gets bigger, running, Cons: Wonky grin, Backwards movement, no black screen, killing himself, Low quality at some parts the screaming audio isn't loud
Rank: A-S
The killing is actually a pro, the pro is called "mickey commits suicide"
@@Monkboi651 Bro it's not in the original story.
@@WhatIs666 yes it is
@@Monkboi651 NO IT ISN'T
@@WhatIs666 the name is "suicide mouse.avi" and the word "suicide" reffers to killing YOURSELF
I screenshooted all almost the parts, while i do the fnf mod, of this.
What's it called
@@FrankieSonic20 Last time was SNS 2.5 Retake, but SNS 2.5 Fanmade Owner snatch it which is fine bc it's kinda weird what name i put, so i decided to name it Retaken Night, as a SNS Fan-Mod
@@SanseyRevival Interesting
Hi Dude And Hi Everyone Too
In the ending, look at minie☠️☠️☠️so creepy☠️
The flash
This is looks odd, why all of his friends alive and mini mouse is not cheating with other mouse? But the animation is pretty accurate. I’ll give it an -A tier
It’s not fully accurate to the original, I wanted to try some different things with it, but thanks for the -A tier
No problem, bro
The other kids when you sit at the wrong table at lunch 0:36
DA CORECT TIMING LOL😅😅
The depressed Mickey.
8:05 me when I have diarrhea
Ewwwww 😂
Make a red mist remake
bro became sonic
Can someone explain the final scene?because i didnt understand why minnie donald daisy and goofy are dead?
It represents Mickey and his fragile mind, in the beginning when Mickey was walking his friends were there, wondering what was wrong with Mickey later however they are gone and Mickey is all by himself, when Mickey “Dieds” he sees his friend are with him, but there twisted and dead, and in reality there not actually there anymore as they had left, so in other words, there hallucination that Mickey sees with his “dying breath” but if you want to know why Mickey sees them like this well, lets just say this isn’t the end for Mickey and his friends.
“You’re gonna die one day.”
thanks for the reminder 👁️👄👁️
Sorry for the reminder
Mark Red Mist Retake
?
Squidward's Suicide
@@thayra767 Maybe I’ll make that in the future
7:30
Mickey is zoomin
врата ада манят любопытных
BRO WHY THERE NO BACKWARDS AND eye fall of to
Um
7:23
7:28
7:28 HIS EYES MELTED!!!
8:33 ...
Unhappy happy and really happy and slime
Why did CheeseGoblin change his channel name?
I wanted a better name.
@@alextriplett9414 oh I thought Cheesegoblin was a better name...
@@WhatIs666 I also discovered someone else name was also cheesy goblin, but no one had the name Alex the Animator, so I wanted a more original name.
@@alextriplett9414 Wow they definitely had that name after yours...
Imma make ur sprites fnf version ok?
Sure you can ^^
@@sashakvasha1529but i need more time for those.
Oh my god....
But why is mickey sad?
@@Masha-Allah_Brothers his minds in a dark place in this video
FAST!
Each and every Mickey Mouse retake is always the same old episode where Mickey is doing nothing but walking while scary music is playing in the background why can't there be something different? Like make a happy version of suicide mouse?
Well that’s kind of how this creepy pasta goes, tho with that being said, I was maybe thinking about make a happy version of this, or possible dare I say a part 2 to this, but who knows. 🤷♂️
,Disney white noise,
yes i real
Mickey. Eeie vug gjy tutu guyi t7t
otra vez
Otra vez que cosa xd ?
@@hgplcountryballs6783 suicide otra vez
@@LuisGonzalez-xo9ll A
Go and make a mod to friday night funkin!
What’s with Oswald and Ortensia?
Felt like adding them in, might do more with them in the future.
@@alextriplett9414more like an Euthanasia Rabbit edition?