This one had a build up almost like a thriller and then bam! It just took off. I love how the Old Man reminds me of how we arrive at that age that we feel we of no good for nobody but somehow if the Old Man did not intervene the main character would be dead. It is going to go down as one of the of the best stories you’ve acted out. Loved how even the lead scientists acknowledge the main characters’ perspective instead of just an evil scientist.
I really like your descriptions and characterizations. It's a really fun romp for a short story. I do have to point out, however, that there are a ton of things about the setting that are either understated or just completely inaccurate regarding Charon, the fact that it has no substantial atmosphere being chief and central to most of those issues. If this isn't a concern if yours, then feel free to ignore this quibble.
I'm very curious about where your stories come from, do you write them all yourself, or do you have a small team dedicated to writing these stories. I know you dont accept and read ones that are submitted to you. Wherever they come from they are all amazing, I love all creepypastas of scifi and space. Great job on your narrations as well, I look forward to hearing more as always.😊
@shanegilmore4531 It's just me and technology. Many tools these days speed up writing and help to bounce ideas. I wouldn't be able to afford anyone else, let alone a small team 😁
One thing you can draw from this do not ever give more than necessary to your workplace they don’t care whether you live or die
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This one had a build up almost like a thriller and then bam! It just took off. I love how the Old Man reminds me of how we arrive at that age that we feel we of no good for nobody but somehow if the Old Man did not intervene the main character would be dead. It is going to go down as one of the of the best stories you’ve acted out. Loved how even the lead scientists acknowledge the main characters’ perspective instead of just an evil scientist.
Tales of endurance. Epic 😎 Galactic Horrors ...
This story = a more indepth version of Alien.
Great stories and what a imagination.
I really like your descriptions and characterizations. It's a really fun romp for a short story. I do have to point out, however, that there are a ton of things about the setting that are either understated or just completely inaccurate regarding Charon, the fact that it has no substantial atmosphere being chief and central to most of those issues.
If this isn't a concern if yours, then feel free to ignore this quibble.
Your imagination is supposed to fill in the blanks wink wink 😉
The only annoying thing is: "for every one we killed, two took her place". Where have I heard that before?
Mosquito's
I'm very curious about where your stories come from, do you write them all yourself, or do you have a small team dedicated to writing these stories. I know you dont accept and read ones that are submitted to you. Wherever they come from they are all amazing, I love all creepypastas of scifi and space. Great job on your narrations as well, I look forward to hearing more as always.😊
@shanegilmore4531 It's just me and technology. Many tools these days speed up writing and help to bounce ideas. I wouldn't be able to afford anyone else, let alone a small team 😁
Yea! Life is good. I always look forward to your stories GH. I am now immersing myself into these intense and creative tales 😊
FIRST. Also im incredibly happy i found this channel
Me too!!
Cool stories. Too bad it's not an animation so we could see the creature.
Imagine being able to envision the creature in your head, without the restrictions of budgets and technology.
Maybe one day 🤔