Wow ....that was really something ...this story had everything that was needed ....well read ...well said ...bullies ...small minded people ...predagest has NO...right in this world ....everyone has the right to be them self's ....to be happy ...to love .....to be honest ...to be free ......as a straight guy ....i am proud of you ...well done ...for being you ....loved this story ...❤
Principal Harris was my favorite/favourite character in this story even though she only made a few appearances in it. There are a few connectivity issues in the story. The elderly home (Tampa Senior Care Center) where Andrea volunteers on the weekend has a picture of an arts teacher Vanessa and her ex-childhood girlfriend (Ellie) who are both employees/staff members in a group photo at the senior center at 2:00 mark of the video. Staff members equate to employees in which Andrea is not an employee but a volunteer as her work is at a high school. So when Vanessa spoke out at a high school conference, I was confused as to how Vanessa could be speaking to her about it as though she was present at Andrea's place of work. I was also confused as to why Ellie, who is an employee at the Tampa Senior Care Center, is in the hallway of the high school that Andrea works to volunteer to sit in on Andrea's parent-teacher meeting. What also wasn't clear is if the Sarah that was the only teacher at first that was outwardly friendly to Andrea if she was the fiance of Ellie? If it is a different Sarah, why not use a different name altogether? Other than the nuanced conflicts identified above for your future stories unless you decide to edit and retell/repost, the story had a nice pacing and was a very positive story that is primarily free of the agonizing angst that a coming out and coming of age story in the spectrum of sexuality normally spans. I have purposefully stayed away from going into the details of the story to maintain the mystery for others to discover for themselves. I enjoyed the story and look forward to reading whatever other stories you might upload. Thank you for sharing!
We know that here in the Bible belt, the hate now is very visional, and the educated are very vocal about what they don't know, and the denial of what is reality of lgbqia human beings. Violence is visional and is excepted and is condoned 😢😢😢
Wow ....that was really something ...this story had everything that was needed ....well read ...well said ...bullies ...small minded people ...predagest has NO...right in this world ....everyone has the right to be them self's ....to be happy ...to love .....to be honest ...to be free ......as a straight guy ....i am proud of you ...well done ...for being you ....loved this story ...❤
Principal Harris was my favorite/favourite character in this story even though she only made a few appearances in it.
There are a few connectivity issues in the story. The elderly home (Tampa Senior Care Center) where Andrea volunteers on the weekend has a picture of an arts teacher Vanessa and her ex-childhood girlfriend (Ellie) who are both employees/staff members in a group photo at the senior center at 2:00 mark of the video. Staff members equate to employees in which Andrea is not an employee but a volunteer as her work is at a high school.
So when Vanessa spoke out at a high school conference, I was confused as to how Vanessa could be speaking to her about it as though she was present at Andrea's place of work. I was also confused as to why Ellie, who is an employee at the Tampa Senior Care Center, is in the hallway of the high school that Andrea works to volunteer to sit in on Andrea's parent-teacher meeting. What also wasn't clear is if the Sarah that was the only teacher at first that was outwardly friendly to Andrea if she was the fiance of Ellie? If it is a different Sarah, why not use a different name altogether?
Other than the nuanced conflicts identified above for your future stories unless you decide to edit and retell/repost, the story had a nice pacing and was a very positive story that is primarily free of the agonizing angst that a coming out and coming of age story in the spectrum of sexuality normally spans. I have purposefully stayed away from going into the details of the story to maintain the mystery for others to discover for themselves. I enjoyed the story and look forward to reading whatever other stories you might upload.
Thank you for sharing!
Authenticity is a pre requisite to freedom
We know that here in the Bible belt, the hate now is very visional, and the educated are very vocal about what they don't know, and the denial of what is reality of lgbqia human beings. Violence is visional and is excepted and is condoned 😢😢😢
Exellent even without sexy scenes. Nice beliveble story.
there was no intimacy or kisses , it was a good story but it needs something else
Don' use Gods name as a curse please