consider this a new favorite. i have high standards for creepypastas and this one well and truely met them. it was imaginative, kept its tone well throughout, and was paced very well. all characters were used as well. very fun listen
When I worked customer service of any kind I had people say things like those customers trying to get the guy in/to their car just about every 3 customers. I wish I had worked at this shop and had a button to press too.
Why would the store people be so worried about his safety and protect him with security and have strict rules about not leaving with any customer, if they will just sell them to be killed off? Makes no sense, and literally no one would stay there after witnessing it for the first time. Too bad, story had promise.
Bc they sell their employees too so of course they gonna take care of th employees. And if they're is no employee left who th special guy wanna purchase then th manager is gonna be in trouble i guess
I don't think anyone can just leave... The manager knows who the employees are and where they live... Even if they would tell the police or stuff like that I believe they are protected against the law... It's the same vibe as John Wick where the government or authorities just ignore that dangerous organizations and businesses exist..fearing they would be killed.
Didn't like the main character much. Like, could have obviously known that illegal activity was happening, you watched a guy get moidered right in front of you, get to the end and leave the money? Didn't follow up on that tailor job offer? You're in it now girl, quitting and running away doesn't make that stuff go away it puts it in the shadows.
Kinda weird to comment this on multiple videos… just don’t watch then? Lmfao what kind of weirdo just keeps watching stuff they don’t enjoy. This is TH-cam, not a class assignment
That was a good one!
Discovered this channel yesterday and was almost done watching all the videos lol
😢Title is a fooler. A Captivating short story. Hoping another "4" suspense is set in that all encompassing niche of the Nights- Only grocery.
This was awesome! I can vividly imagine everything, and your narrative skill is simply superb!
Glad you enjoyed it!
I really hooked to this channel now😅 you're narration is spectacular ❤
consider this a new favorite. i have high standards for creepypastas and this one well and truely met them.
it was imaginative, kept its tone well throughout, and was paced very well. all characters were used as well. very fun listen
Lowkey love the background noise in each of these stories
one of my favorite stories so far.
That was a great one!! I'm hooked!
You deserve more subs. Loving your narration and stories ❤️
I really appreciate your support 💖💖
This is great, almost has like Chuck Pahlaniuk vibes in its craziness. No idea who wrote it but good job reading it.
Thanks for listening
Very starnge episode!
😭😂😂😂
You deserve a million+ subs... seriously
Thanks for the great reading 😀
Thank you, Dr. wicked hope you’re doing well this morning❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
When I worked customer service of any kind I had people say things like those customers trying to get the guy in/to their car just about every 3 customers. I wish I had worked at this shop and had a button to press too.
My husband and I want to know if there is a second part!
Ill have to check it with the author✍️
Great Story Line, loved it. Thx for the Ride ✌️💙
Creative story.
Love the stories and visuals to g0 with them.
Just got another sub 👌 Great content man.
Good one
The visual is our mind
Sounds like Edward Norton x
The wheels on the bus go round and round round and round round and round 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
That was scary.
Loved the story, HATED the ending ;(
You did gain a new sub though, I can’t believe I wasn’t already subscribed my bad bud
What's a starnge customer? Jk love these stories, on every night before i sleep keep it up bro❤
Why would the store people be so worried about his safety and protect him with security and have strict rules about not leaving with any customer, if they will just sell them to be killed off? Makes no sense, and literally no one would stay there after witnessing it for the first time. Too bad, story had promise.
Bc they sell their employees too so of course they gonna take care of th employees. And if they're is no employee left who th special guy wanna purchase then th manager is gonna be in trouble i guess
I don't think anyone can just leave... The manager knows who the employees are and where they live... Even if they would tell the police or stuff like that I believe they are protected against the law...
It's the same vibe as John Wick where the government or authorities just ignore that dangerous organizations and businesses exist..fearing they would be killed.
Even though these are not real, they are good 🧢🧢🧢
We need black screen so we can fall asleep to
Check out the poll he posted
Am i the only one who noticed the word starnge in the tbumbnail 😅
Your name fits you
Didn't like the main character much. Like, could have obviously known that illegal activity was happening, you watched a guy get moidered right in front of you, get to the end and leave the money? Didn't follow up on that tailor job offer? You're in it now girl, quitting and running away doesn't make that stuff go away it puts it in the shadows.
I'm sorry but your voice is so monotone 😬 I can only listen to stories from people who can actually read it as a story
Kinda weird to comment this on multiple videos… just don’t watch then? Lmfao what kind of weirdo just keeps watching stuff they don’t enjoy. This is TH-cam, not a class assignment
Great Story Line, loved it. Thx for the Ride ✌💙