To be brutally honest, this so-called teacher herself has failed to spot her own errors, let alone the errors frequently made by many candidates. She implies that the synonyms she has used can boost the score of the criterion, "lexical resource". In reality, phrases such as "minor life", "according to my opinion", and "teenage is the happiest" do not sound natural at all. Also, the phrase, "and so on" and the verb, "get" sound too informal for an academic piece of writing. More worryingly, she claims that the opinion should be written as a separate paragraph apart from the conclusion, which is absurd! That's why I don't recommend many of the TH-cam channels run by so-called IELTS experts, who are, in fact, neither fluent nor suitably qualified to teach English to adults. For your information, there are much better videos shared by ex-examiners and native English speakers like Simon and Melbourne respectively. When you read their essays, you will see the difference between this model essay and much more accurate essays, which have been written by true professionals. Finally, I wasn't sharing my opinion as a learner. I have shared my input based on the experience I have gained as a TEFL certified (Cambridge level 5 certification) tutor. I hope this helps! 😉
This information very useful for me I have watched so many on writing task 2 but after long I saw your video whichone help me a lot thanks a lot your way teaching is good we can understand easily
Iam so happy to leasing to your class iam a below average student i can understand your lecture more comfortably , using a simple and complex scentences that assay presentation is so beautiful 😊
Personally I feel that this is the best essay part 2 I've ever watched. I've learned a lot. And tomorrow is exam. However, through this video, I'm fully confident in writing essay in part 2.
Thanks for understanding and liking the concept All the best for 25 Feb 2023 ielts exam. Today try to write all types of essays tonight . watching only will not serve purpose. Hope you are getting my point.please practice
Mam pls talk about this topic(Some workplaces arrange training days that involve team-building activities where the purpose is to get to know your Colleagues better and to socialize with your colleagues. Some people think this is not important and training should only be related to the job. Do you think it is important for people to know their colleagues in a personal sense? What are the benefits for the employees and the company if colleagues get along socially)
Good phrase for write in discussion essay : In this polarized world with contrasting views , a group of laymen vehemently believe that....... while other quibble to them and concur.......
Thanks for understanding the concept here. Please do write more ielts writing task 2. Then, you will be having more ideas and experience in IELTS writing task2 essays.
And offcourse ielts writing task2 essays practice.follow some more tips in my latest writing task2 videos and I have solved almost every reading passage from ielts books and ielts recent exam questions also
Thanks for this videos...good idea to crack essays....kindly update more videos for listening related..tips ND tricks... "Do not give an introduction,"
Thanks for understanding IELTS writing task2 essays here with me.keep writing more task 2 essays till your ielts main exam. Write your own words, ideas in IELTS essay
Thanks While re reading your essay after finishing, u can find your own Mistakes.. don't forget to do proof reading ( re reading ) of your Ielts writing task2. And notice please ,I have used different similar words for essay word only . this way ,u can also use simple vocabulary words for getting higher band scores.
some peolple think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness,in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
@@ielts-9314 I appreciated a lot Mamm Thank you so much for your reply. My teacher also taught like this as well and she told me like brainstorming. 😊♥️♥️🙏
Mem can you share another types of essay so I can understand easily.Agree disagree , up to what extent, advantages disadvantages and advantages overwait disadvantages.
i think this is the best essay part 2 video on youtube, full respect to Indian phenomenons.
No , there are many others
To be brutally honest, this so-called teacher herself has failed to spot her own errors, let alone the errors frequently made by many candidates. She implies that the synonyms she has used can boost the score of the criterion, "lexical resource". In reality, phrases such as "minor life", "according to my opinion", and "teenage is the happiest" do not sound natural at all. Also, the phrase, "and so on" and the verb, "get" sound too informal for an academic piece of writing. More worryingly, she claims that the opinion should be written as a separate paragraph apart from the conclusion, which is absurd! That's why I don't recommend many of the TH-cam channels run by so-called IELTS experts, who are, in fact, neither fluent nor suitably qualified to teach English to adults. For your information, there are much better videos shared by ex-examiners and native English speakers like Simon and Melbourne respectively. When you read their essays, you will see the difference between this model essay and much more accurate essays, which have been written by true professionals. Finally, I wasn't sharing my opinion as a learner. I have shared my input based on the experience I have gained as a TEFL certified (Cambridge level 5 certification) tutor. I hope this helps! 😉
Excellent explanation and nice way of presentation of writing task 2 thank you madam
Best IELTS tutor, thank you ma'am
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From Sri Lanka,your explanations are very clear...thank you Mam.
Thanks dear student.it will be fruitful if you write IELTS essay on the same topic and others
Wow mam your teaching skills are really clear and easy to understand...
Perfect ….. I suggest that all should listen to her at least before exam
Thanks dear
I am glad that you are doing practice with this content.
All the best and write more Ielts essays.
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To understand step by step!
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Thanks for understanding and appreciation
Do more writing task2 practice every day , atleast two essays
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You are welcome 😊
This information very useful for me I have watched so many on writing task 2 but after long I saw your video whichone help me a lot thanks a lot your way teaching is good we can understand easily
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It's excellent teaching for future Ielts Candidates, It's from Bangladesh.
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perfect explanation, you have great sense of every single points beyond teaching.....
Iam so happy to leasing to your class iam a below average student i can understand your lecture more comfortably , using a simple and complex scentences that assay presentation is so beautiful 😊
Thanks and keep writing ielts Task 2 discuss both views & different essay
Very clear explanation! Thank you for sharing your video maam ♥️😊😊
Thanks dear
Personally I feel that this is the best essay part 2 I've ever watched. I've learned a lot. And tomorrow is exam. However, through this video, I'm fully confident in writing essay in part 2.
Thanks for understanding and liking the concept
All the best for 25 Feb 2023 ielts exam.
Today try to write all types of essays tonight . watching only will not serve purpose.
Hope you are getting my point.please practice
@@ielts-9314 sure, I'll do it. Thank you so much for your love and concern.
@@ielts-9314 do you have a complete writing course available on your channel? I intend to learn.
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@@blue-skyash5576 thanks for understanding
Very useful thank you! I love handwriting essays!
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question why did you mention " advantage" in the introduction ?, the question was just about to discuss both views and give your opinion..
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Oh thanks dear for beautiful words, keep doing more practice for IELTS test
Great explained
Thanks for understanding and appreciation.keep doing more practice for IELTS writing task2 essays
Mam pls talk about this topic(Some workplaces arrange training days that involve team-building activities where the purpose is to get to know your Colleagues better and to socialize with your colleagues. Some people think this is not important and training should only be related to the job. Do you think it is important for people to know their colleagues in a personal sense? What are the benefits for the employees and the company if colleagues get along socially)
This is the best way to form easy essay
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Making this valuable video.
Welcome and thanks for understanding the IELTS test
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Good phrase for write in discussion essay : In this polarized world with contrasting views , a group of laymen vehemently believe that....... while other quibble to them and concur.......
Thanks
Really beneficial for all those who are preparing for exam
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I watched and I learned more,thank you❤️🙏🙏🙏
Thanks for understanding and appreciation.keep doing more practice for IELTS reading passages
And writing task
Thank you mam for giving nice Explanation
Thanks and welcome for understanding and appreciation
Keep doing more practice for IELTS writing task2 and reading passages
Thank u so much mam your teaching method is very nice and considerable for every one...
Welcome dear student
Very well explained and articulated. There are a few grammatical errors but can be neglected. Overall informative content.
Thank you so much mam for such a step by step explanation 😊
Thank you for such a good explanation and simple format that any one can easily understood. It cleared my many doughts about writing task.
Thanks for understanding the concept here.
Please do write more ielts writing task 2.
Then, you will be having more ideas and experience in IELTS writing task2 essays.
This is the best way to get great band in writing task 2
I flow your way of studies...it is easy to catch. Thanks madam. God bless you always!
It's my pleasure
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Thanks for understanding and appreciation.keep it up with your IELTS reading practice for 9 band scores in IELTS exam
And offcourse ielts writing task2 essays practice.follow some more tips in my latest writing task2 videos and I have solved almost every reading passage from ielts books and ielts recent exam questions also
Thank you very much ma for this 🙏🥰,much love from Cameroon
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Its really helpful. Thank you.
You are welcome! and keep doing more practice for actual writing in your style -only grab some hacks , ideas and stretegis from here
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This helped me alot
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Thanks for this videos...good idea to crack essays....kindly update more videos for listening related..tips ND tricks...
"Do not give an introduction,"
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Thanks for understanding IELTS writing task2 essays here with me.keep writing more task 2 essays till your ielts main exam.
Write your own words, ideas in IELTS essay
You are amazing and you style is such a huge useful method to convey ideas on how to write properly 😘
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Keep doing more practice for IELTS writing task2
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Hope fully you will be motivated to do more ielts writing practice and use ielts writing tips
Thanks a lot for the tips , im preparing for my ielts
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good explanation with good plan
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Glad it was helpful!
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Thanks dear for such a detail explaining without any shame on your mistakes, God bless you
Thanks
While re reading your essay after finishing, u can find your own Mistakes.. don't forget to do proof reading ( re reading ) of your Ielts writing task2.
And notice please ,I have used different similar words for essay word only . this way ,u can also use simple vocabulary words for getting higher band scores.
@@ielts-9314 Thanks for piece of good advice
Thank you mam......
It's really helpful ...
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I will try it in my next Moke test.
I really don't know what to say to you. But, God bless you for this video. OMG, I have never understood this question type in this way before.
I am grateful for your kind and supportive words for it
@@ielts-9314 thank you, I took my test today and this was the question type for task 2. I just used your methods and it helped
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Thank you so much, your explanations is very understandable, one of the worth videos
Thanks
Here one mistake is there
Pls don't mind.
Hereis an example
Your explanation is
Or
Your explanations are ...
As you are an IELTS test taker
Thanku so much God because u r mine right 👩🏫teacher
sorry to point out
time slot 15:00
I have not prof read v3 "red"
'not only this but there are so many other mistakes also.'
read at your own risk
Thanku for uploading.
some peolple think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness,in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
Thank u mam 😯👌👌👌
Thank you teacher😊
😊😊 We must do brainstorming before we start to write ✍️ ♥️🙏
Thanks
I don't think , there is any funny thing
@@ielts-9314 I appreciated a lot Mamm Thank you so much for your reply. My teacher also taught like this as well and she told me like brainstorming. 😊♥️♥️🙏
Nice....very hekpful
Thank you, for your teachings I appreciate a lot
thank you mam these vedio very helpful my ielts exam
Thanks
Keep doing practice for writing task 1 &2 because for getting higher band scores in #IELTS you need to do more practice
Thanks so much mam perfect explanation
nice tutorial.
Nice.well explained 👍
Well explained
Thnqq u mam
Mam plss make more viedo for task 2 discussion type and Direct questions 😊😊
Nicely explained IELTS writing fask 2.
Hello ma'am,its really helpful,otherwise I was confused I. Ielts writing
Mam, Can we add some quotes in writing task 2 ???
I don't think so ( just explain whatever is asked in essay)
I have learnt something here ,as I am chasing time to my IELTS test soon 🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜🔜
Thanks for understanding and appreciation.keep doing more practice for IELTS reading and writing task2
thanku mam aj mera ist day tha ielts ka lagal hogyabtha m
Mam esi videos banate rahiye please or speaking and reading tips b share kare
Well explained only lack of preparation and grammatically errors but applause 👏 for your efforts
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Thanks dear
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Thanks very much for this video.I pray i have the expected band i want and even more
Thanks for sharing your experience, and keep doing more practice for IELTS test modules
Great job miss, that really helps me alot.
Thanks dear
Perfect
Thanks so much
Welcome and keep doing more practice for IELTS writing task2
Mem can you share another types of essay so I can understand easily.Agree disagree , up to what extent, advantages disadvantages and advantages overwait disadvantages.
very well explained love from sri lanka
Tq so mch my all doubt clr when I saw ur videos
Thank you so much mam , you have explained it very clearly
Can you share a video regarding essay. Like question is, What is your opinion about this ?
Thanks
Sure
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Thank you for your contributions… but I suggest you to learn how to write “p” letter.
Thank you, I will
Very explicit
Glad you think so!
Thank you so much mam the way u cover all the task is very interesting and it helps me alot 😊
Hi
Glad to hear that
Mam speaking tips vedio cheyyavo
Thank you so much mam
Most welcome 😊 and thanks too for liking this content
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