First time on this channel. Excellent narration (10/10) and very good story (writing 9/10). I really enjoyed the visualization as well. The visuals didn't try to compete with or "help" the already great story and narration. Overall, top quality. Thanks for this!
God that crew needs discipline or something. What's wrong with them! I completely agree with the commander. I understand wanting to help. But sometimes the best way you can help is to get away so you can go get help and come back more informed about the situation. If you get killed or stuck trying to help now you're no good to anyone. Blowing the station up could cause more time fractures. You just don't know. Thats why it's not your decision to make. Your job is to DO. Not Think.
What a nice surprise I got this morning, a new story just one day after the previous one. Cool! This one, in the beginning, reminded me of "Event Horizon" and "Lost in Space" (1998); I got all the imagery in my head from the extraordinarily well-crafted narrative and excellent narration - great job, as always. Thank you!
Man, that's a really scary story. A harsh reminder of what things could be like if, or when we start to figure out time travel. Like our early experiments with radioactive materials. Space is honestly just pure nightmare fuel! Death is usually preferable as the only escape. Just think if you actually accidentally got detached from your space craft with no propellant or anything to push off of. You will just drift all alone in the blackness of space for all eternity. Well eventually the gravity of something will take you but it could take millions or billions of years.
this is why you send probe droids in to the such places and let them do the investigation and report back. And just in case you put a tiny gravity bomb into one ready to detonate at a moments threat. But alas its supposed to be a horror story
It’s that f*cking Lorax again the gas giant gave them so much gas that it came out of the stations A$S and blew them of course till the station was smashed
Another great one! So they have warp drive technology but no capability to send in a drone or probe first? As Commander, given that I had prior knowledge that the station had been conducting temporal experiments before going dark for 20 years, there is no way I would've sent my men to investigate that space station without first obtaining some boots on the ground intelligence. I don't care if we had to fashion a crude remote control toy car with some cameras and other sensors on it first. No one is setting foot on that station until I get a sense of what the heck went wrong. I would've also asked for some type of specialist in temporal mechanics to accompany me on said mission. I would've had him make me some type of weapon to bring to bear against those temporal shadow entities.
Kane. Temporal research/no bodies. Alien and Event Horizon vibes. Do all the stories on this channel have to have the same ending? No one escapes? Two in a row. Ah. Sorry. The other was a different channel....
Quite good. For some reason I was expecting that the space station would be transported back through time 1000 years to serve as a base of operations to defeat an alien menace threatening the galaxy.
This is ALMOST the same story released about a week ago. “I lead a Quantum Entanglement Experiment in deep space” & there’s even an Adler in that story, but it’s a chick.
Impressive story, well done!
LOVED THE STORY - SOUND QUALITY AND THE BACKGROUND THANK YOU
Damn!! Whatan ending for the crew! Forever watching!!
Wow! What a great story this one is! From start to finish, your skills and plot ideas get better every time - superb storytelling! Thank you!
Great story. first time commenting. Definitely love the deep space mystery. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to more stories like this.
Very well written. 👍👍
First time on this channel. Excellent narration (10/10) and very good story (writing 9/10). I really enjoyed the visualization as well. The visuals didn't try to compete with or "help" the already great story and narration. Overall, top quality. Thanks for this!
Well done! 👍🏽
God that crew needs discipline or something. What's wrong with them! I completely agree with the commander. I understand wanting to help. But sometimes the best way you can help is to get away so you can go get help and come back more informed about the situation. If you get killed or stuck trying to help now you're no good to anyone. Blowing the station up could cause more time fractures. You just don't know. Thats why it's not your decision to make. Your job is to DO. Not Think.
What a nice surprise I got this morning, a new story just one day after the previous one. Cool! This one, in the beginning, reminded me of "Event Horizon" and "Lost in Space" (1998); I got all the imagery in my head from the extraordinarily well-crafted narrative and excellent narration - great job, as always. Thank you!
this reminds me of Event Horizon, that is a good thing
This story would make a great 'short' for Dust. Especially with the ending...
Edit:
Thanks for putting the cinema in my mind to work. ;)
You would make an amazing movie script writer. Will have to get in touch.
Awesome. Thank you for the story.
@madebymonkeys5641 My pleasure!
This story sounds like a sequel to one of the earlier ones. Cool.
Man, that's a really scary story. A harsh reminder of what things could be like if, or when we start to figure out time travel. Like our early experiments with radioactive materials. Space is honestly just pure nightmare fuel! Death is usually preferable as the only escape. Just think if you actually accidentally got detached from your space craft with no propellant or anything to push off of. You will just drift all alone in the blackness of space for all eternity. Well eventually the gravity of something will take you but it could take millions or billions of years.
Great storytelling ❤ the natural sounds ❤ Ohio
The only reason they don't pack up and leave at the first sign of bad mojo is because it's a horror story. A good one too. :)
Awesome content dude thank you for the uploads
this is why you send probe droids in to the such places and let them do the investigation and report back. And just in case you put a tiny gravity bomb into one ready to detonate at a moments threat. But alas its supposed to be a horror story
Your visuals were very effective. Great job
Atmospheric story. Dark ending.
All endings here are dark. But yes, good story telling. Good naration.
This would make a amazing game or movie
This reminds me of the movie Event Horizon
Disturbing
Excellent as always. Thank you for your hard work
@jamesdorrycott6254 My pleasure, thank you for listening!
The space station looks like a giant tire......a spare tire
❤❤❤😊 another amazing story from you thank you so much I am so glad you do this for a living I listen to you everyday at night
Damn I need a visual lol
Good 1 thx
The narrator and the protagonist never disappoint.
It’s that f*cking Lorax again the gas giant gave them so much gas that it came out of the stations A$S and blew them of course till the station was smashed
Ugh that ending.
Another great one!
So they have warp drive technology but no capability to send in a drone or probe first?
As Commander, given that I had prior knowledge that the station had been conducting temporal experiments before going dark for 20 years, there is no way I would've sent my men to investigate that space station without first obtaining some boots on the ground intelligence. I don't care if we had to fashion a crude remote control toy car with some cameras and other sensors on it first. No one is setting foot on that station until I get a sense of what the heck went wrong.
I would've also asked for some type of specialist in temporal mechanics to accompany me on said mission. I would've had him make me some type of weapon to bring to bear against those temporal shadow entities.
That makes good sense. The problem is, the commander is a moron.
What a sad story.
do you read books for audible?
Kane. Temporal research/no bodies. Alien and Event Horizon vibes.
Do all the stories on this channel have to have the same ending?
No one escapes? Two in a row.
Ah. Sorry. The other was a different channel....
Quite good. For some reason I was expecting that the space station would be transported back through time 1000 years to serve as a base of operations to defeat an alien menace threatening the galaxy.
Babylon 5 🤔😉
This is ALMOST the same story released about a week ago.
“I lead a Quantum Entanglement Experiment in deep space” & there’s even an Adler in that story, but it’s a chick.
No you didn't.
0:16 I already knew the crew was in for it when I heard a planet named after Erebus…DID THEY NOT LEARN THE 1st-11th TIME!
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31:04 fire torpedoes but I am guessing that is a bad idea
Not very bright these crew, eh?
Bummer