Please work on your vocabulary. It was so hard to understand what you were portraying and I can understand that English might not be your first language but you are making very sill mistakes like writing "several" as "survival".Both are completely different words.I hope you take this criticism in a good way and improve!
@@editer_iqra. I am happy you took the criticism respectfully as I truly admire your ideas but your lack of vocabulary overshadows your hard work! Fighting !😃
Yes you are right about asian parents😅
Your right unnie my father will kill me if he got to know i love some one 😅😂
Yup about asian parents you are right...😂😂😂😅
'Don`t try if you are asian your father will kill you' got me rolling on the floor.....
In the last second page instead of *he* she wrote *you*
u just have what i need 😫💗🌸
Please work on your vocabulary. It was so hard to understand what you were portraying and I can understand that English might not be your first language but you are making very sill mistakes like writing "several" as "survival".Both are completely different words.I hope you take this criticism in a good way and improve!
Thanks for telling me and ofc I'm working on it and I will try to improve myself 💗
@@editer_iqra. I am happy you took the criticism respectfully as I truly admire your ideas but your lack of vocabulary overshadows your hard work! Fighting !😃
It was so good. Heart snoothing. Such a sweet story. Thanks for sharing this.
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I am sorry but the spelling of your channel name is wrong...incase you are not aware of that
I am not being disrespectful ❤😅
My channel name's spelling isn't wrong I use these spelling because of some reasons there is a big story behind my channel name my love 😘
@@editer_iqra. Yes I knew it but still had some doubts btw love your videos🌸🎀💘
second and love it
First ❤
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