Student Grade 9 Essay on Macbeth's Character Mr Salles

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  • @georgep1907
    @georgep1907 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1910

    Hey sir, got my mark back and got 159/160 in Lit, literally only watched your videos when I was revising, can’t thank you enough

    • @MrSallesTeachesEnglish
      @MrSallesTeachesEnglish  5 ปีที่แล้ว +387

      I remember you Max. Congratulations!

    • @ash39877
      @ash39877 4 ปีที่แล้ว +139

      i beg u please send me ur essay i beg u pleaseeee
      please i will literally do anything

    • @PileOfDuracells
      @PileOfDuracells 4 ปีที่แล้ว +96

      Is this supernatural

    • @user-qp6ts2dp5g
      @user-qp6ts2dp5g 4 ปีที่แล้ว +32

      @@PileOfDuracells LMAO right

    • @Crownedbycee
      @Crownedbycee 3 ปีที่แล้ว +16

      @@ash39877 Allie🤣🤣

  • @cosmo6345
    @cosmo6345 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1285

    It’s funny how much he’s able to criticise an essay that got 158/160

    • @tyron1_411
      @tyron1_411 2 ปีที่แล้ว +35

      all his essays combined was 158/160, just macbeth got 28/30

    • @shrek_has_swag2344
      @shrek_has_swag2344 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @Yeet Feet 2 that kids entire life would just disappear

    • @sombi8807
      @sombi8807 2 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      @Yeet Feet 2 tears. lmfao

  • @mbappesdad7620
    @mbappesdad7620 3 ปีที่แล้ว +164

    As an A level student looking at this now, I’m grateful I don’t have to worry about English Literature anymore the content for the subject is unreal

    • @paracline5500
      @paracline5500 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      compared to history it isn't much really

    • @olihemming2299
      @olihemming2299 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@paracline5500 fr

    • @bug688
      @bug688 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@paracline5500HISTORY IS TEW MUCH
      - a struggling student who takes history

  • @alannatomlinson7723
    @alannatomlinson7723 4 ปีที่แล้ว +297

    thank you Sanjay whoever and wherever you are. You are so helpful and kind to share the work you put so much hard work and dedication into. Very much appreciated and not taken lightly

  • @lumosv1014
    @lumosv1014 2 ปีที่แล้ว +61

    16:15 Only legends noticed that Sanjay wrote "Macbeth was 18", "Macbeth was so much younger" and "Macbeth married her". Otherwise, top-notch essay in a top-notch video. Thank you once again!

  • @tjs9133
    @tjs9133 5 ปีที่แล้ว +400

    I really want this guy as my teacher

    • @MrSallesTeachesEnglish
      @MrSallesTeachesEnglish  5 ปีที่แล้ว +87

      I am on TH-cam, so I can help you with a video on most topics you are studying! Thanks for your kind comments

    • @ayisasirek7790
      @ayisasirek7790 4 ปีที่แล้ว +11

      That name tho lmfao

    • @tahamuhammad5454
      @tahamuhammad5454 4 ปีที่แล้ว +12

      @@MrSallesTeachesEnglish my teacher says us to only listen to him and not to watch yt videos,but cant thank you enough

    • @arzhass5868
      @arzhass5868 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@tahamuhammad5454 tells*

    • @tahamuhammad5454
      @tahamuhammad5454 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@arzhass5868 damn thanks

  • @cOrAL_Grimes
    @cOrAL_Grimes 4 ปีที่แล้ว +469

    How and Why does Sanjay know so much sophisticated vocabulary?? 😭😭

    • @loform4763
      @loform4763 4 ปีที่แล้ว +191

      his parents had the belt on him all day that's all he could do

    • @alinalilka8430
      @alinalilka8430 4 ปีที่แล้ว +25

      @@loform4763 LMFAO bro well the effort payed of didn't it 😂😂😭😭😂😂😂😂😂

    • @eatinsomtin9984
      @eatinsomtin9984 4 ปีที่แล้ว +11

      @@alinalilka8430 off*

    • @alinalilka8430
      @alinalilka8430 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      @@eatinsomtin9984 thank you 😂😂😂

    • @SquirtSongs
      @SquirtSongs 3 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      @@alinalilka8430 paid*

  • @mohammadrezaei8532
    @mohammadrezaei8532 4 ปีที่แล้ว +151

    Thank you this really helps considering we've missed 6 months of school !

  • @talithahiggs1912
    @talithahiggs1912 3 ปีที่แล้ว +33

    When he said avoid suspicion. I think this is talking about how Shakespeare was suspected to be part of the gunpowder plot, and he wrote Macbeth to be placed on the kings good side and avoid suspicion surrounding him and the plot as he was friends with people involved at the time, he wrote the play to show he was devoted to the king

  • @slurpinbird5207
    @slurpinbird5207 3 ปีที่แล้ว +63

    I'll be honest. I didn't revise English once but got (sometimes nearly) full marks on every essay. Straight 9s. I think the way you have structured this video is very well done :)

    • @fatimaalramahi9944
      @fatimaalramahi9944 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Even in your actual GCSE? Because I would guess that if you didn’t revise once you would have not known much evidence for the exam?

    • @ohsu8344
      @ohsu8344 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@fatimaalramahi9944 she probably got the context from stuff they learnt in lessons

  • @luke_c4rpenter907
    @luke_c4rpenter907 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    Sir, i went from a grade 3 in my November mocks, to a grade 7 in my Feb mocks. I can’t thank you enough.

  • @kindermist_5779
    @kindermist_5779 4 ปีที่แล้ว +327

    Hi sir,
    I’m currently in year 10 however I’m doing a test tomorrow which will affect my year 11 mock mock test grade next year, so I’m really stressing ,but this video is giving me so much useful points to take in . I’m very thankful and hopefully this will help me tomorrow ✊🏻
    Thanks again.

    • @MrSallesTeachesEnglish
      @MrSallesTeachesEnglish  4 ปีที่แล้ว +48

      Good luck!

    • @Soni-jd4li
      @Soni-jd4li 3 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      What did you get..?

    • @kindermist_5779
      @kindermist_5779 3 ปีที่แล้ว +38

      @@Soni-jd4li for my final gcse grades, i got 7 in literature and 9 in lang :D

    • @Soni-jd4li
      @Soni-jd4li 3 ปีที่แล้ว +22

      @@kindermist_5779 congrats! I’m also super surprised that you replied (it’s quite well known that people don’t respond to such questions lol)

    • @kindermist_5779
      @kindermist_5779 3 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      @@Soni-jd4li thanks 😂😂 yep that’s true most of the time

  • @cosmo6345
    @cosmo6345 4 ปีที่แล้ว +69

    This was so helpful, I have my exam in a couple days and we've only just started Macbeth so this has helped me gain advanced terminology, contextual references and good points and links. I will definitely be coming back to watch more of your videos!

  • @nickdonaldson466
    @nickdonaldson466 3 ปีที่แล้ว +38

    I've been watching your videos just so I could begin a rota for revision, and I got 28/34 on my last exam! I'm in year 10, and I'm super happy with my result

    • @MrSallesTeachesEnglish
      @MrSallesTeachesEnglish  3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Well done!

    • @blizzard7520
      @blizzard7520 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Was this that gave you z28/34 or others as well cause my Xmas are in 3 days

  • @rw-pi1gw
    @rw-pi1gw 2 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Hi, Mr Salles. Im in year 10 and I've been watching your videos for a year now and you've helped me achieve a grade 9 in English (74/80) thank you so much sir!!!!!!

  • @addieee1194
    @addieee1194 2 ปีที่แล้ว +32

    Hi sir, I messaged a month ago about my English literature mock and thank you for your videos! I got 33/34 on the Macbeth essay and 30/30 on the Jekyll and Hyde essay 😁

    • @MrSallesTeachesEnglish
      @MrSallesTeachesEnglish  2 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      Fantastic!

    • @Anwar87.
      @Anwar87. 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      How did you do that give me tips please 😭

    • @L4ylahud
      @L4ylahud 2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      @@MrSallesTeachesEnglish how is everyone so good I’m currently at a 4/5 English Lang is impossible :/ I’m literally getting a 7/8 in everything else

    • @yourlocalpostman
      @yourlocalpostman 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@L4ylahud for Eng Lang Paper 1, it's strongly recommended to write a solid, good creative writing piece and ensure that you memorise it so u can just copy and paste it into the exam. It's theoretically guaranteed 35+/40 marks as long as it's good

    • @Blessingstevens06
      @Blessingstevens06 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@L4ylahud samee omdsssss i hate it and its stressing me out even worse i dont have motivation to revise english anymore cause i keep doing bad

  • @turbiyo4026
    @turbiyo4026 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Thanks to u, i got a grade 9 on my english literature mock on macbeth

  • @beklemeyapmacaykoy3938
    @beklemeyapmacaykoy3938 3 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    Thank you so much sir because i got 18/30. It is a good score because I’m still learning English. I watched your An Inspector Calls video today and i think I’m gonna get 20 and above.

  • @Stamnoj
    @Stamnoj ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Predicted a 5 by the end of the year and trying to get a 6/7 to avoid uni rejections, thanks for the analysis

    • @MrSallesTeachesEnglish
      @MrSallesTeachesEnglish  ปีที่แล้ว

      I'm publishing how top students prepared every week on my Substack. Subscription is free and the link is always in the description to each video

  • @motarafamily3712
    @motarafamily3712 3 ปีที่แล้ว +45

    Could you do more of these essay reviews because it really helps me out

  • @chickenroyale
    @chickenroyale 2 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Got 120/130 in GCSE thanks to Mr Salles

    • @focsy_1
      @focsy_1 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      nice

  • @anssa6163
    @anssa6163 3 ปีที่แล้ว +15

    Im doing my year 11 mock today, in year 10 i got a grade 3 these videos are extremely helpful so hopefully i can get a 5-7 because 7 is my predicted grade

    • @MrSallesTeachesEnglish
      @MrSallesTeachesEnglish  3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Good luck

    • @anssa6163
      @anssa6163 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@MrSallesTeachesEnglish i got 41/64 probably like a grade 6, im pretty happy with it but im gonna aim for a grade 7 or even higher

    • @fatimaalramahi9944
      @fatimaalramahi9944 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@anssa6163 good luck 🤞

    • @SalvationMATT1
      @SalvationMATT1 ปีที่แล้ว

      how did u do?

    • @anssa6163
      @anssa6163 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@SalvationMATT1 i got an 8 and a 9 in the end

  • @TheAwesomeTolga198
    @TheAwesomeTolga198 5 ปีที่แล้ว +52

    I so can't wait to be featured on one of these one day lol.

  • @libbymayw
    @libbymayw 2 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    currently in year 10 and predicted a 4 but working at a 3 and I’m hopefully going to improve through your videos!

    • @randomvidz8742
      @randomvidz8742 2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      If your in year 10 watching this guy's videos and revising and from school you will 100% achieve a 6 or above

    • @cricsuperior6180
      @cricsuperior6180 ปีที่แล้ว

      How are you doing now?

    • @mirshathmohamed2814
      @mirshathmohamed2814 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@randomvidz8742 Probably even higher. In year 10 I was on a 3 for both but now I'm on an 8 for lang and a 9 for lit.

  • @moody2442
    @moody2442 4 ปีที่แล้ว +14

    the bits of insight you give on what the examiner is probably thinking is really, Just got to keep reminding myself of not only the basics and clear points but also pander to a variety of views because of natural bias. hopefully will push me up to an 8 :))

  • @Goose-ei2ht
    @Goose-ei2ht 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    thanks salles ive got an exam on monday about this and this has really helped me get notes written down properly :)

  • @Creator-zo1wf
    @Creator-zo1wf 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you so much Mr Salles! I’ve been watching your videos closer to my Year 10 mock exam week and they’ve proven to be extremely helpful! Thank you very much once again.

  • @ollycantsee2446
    @ollycantsee2446 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    English Lit Mock In 2 days, this channel is the only thing giving me hope at this point. Honestly thank you so much :]]

    • @Bossman-kb8vo
      @Bossman-kb8vo 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      bro i got mine on monday :( its only macbeth and unseen poetry init?

    • @ollycantsee2446
      @ollycantsee2446 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@Bossman-kb8vo I have done mine now but I did Inspector calls and Macbeth SA's It wasnt fun xD

    • @nuraalmawal
      @nuraalmawal 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I’ve got my English lit exam tomorrow :0

    • @z-mkgaming7464
      @z-mkgaming7464 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@Bossman-kb8vo I had OMAM and Unseen, got Macbeth PEEL chains tmrw

  • @lathusan10
    @lathusan10 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Wow! This is extremely good! Thank you so much.

  • @Zenab-hs1ky
    @Zenab-hs1ky 4 ปีที่แล้ว +50

    so my English teacher decided to get sick a week before my year 11 mocks idk if she has covid but we've been having useless supply teachers and we haven't been working I hope this helps because I'm tryna get a grade 6 and above

    • @iamsomeone8266
      @iamsomeone8266 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      literally had the same problem

    • @alisalis1568
      @alisalis1568 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Are you in my class?😂

    • @DB-qe2wr
      @DB-qe2wr 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@Zenab-hs1ky what question was on your lit mock

    • @xx_alisha_xx4726
      @xx_alisha_xx4726 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Same thing happened to me

  • @mrtwum.yepthatsme6367
    @mrtwum.yepthatsme6367 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I got 22/30 on my mocks! And I really thank u but I know I can do better and get at least a grade 8

  • @jeffs_r_us7166
    @jeffs_r_us7166 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    the man, the myth, the legend: Sanjay.

  • @ch3riebby
    @ch3riebby 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    GOT A MOCK TODAY! AHHH! but Im going to walk into that room because im confident on it, thanks to Mr Salles. THANK YOUUUUU!!!

    • @DB-qe2wr
      @DB-qe2wr 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      what was the question

  • @addieee1194
    @addieee1194 3 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Hi sir, I've just had my English literature mock (I'm currently in year 11) and I've been predicted a 9 previously, so hopefully it follows through. I had my mock on Jekyll and Hyde, and Macbeth. Thank you for this video it'll be really useful for future exam revision! I'll keep you posted on how I end up doing

    • @MrSallesTeachesEnglish
      @MrSallesTeachesEnglish  3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Thank you and good luck!

    • @cadenzafr
      @cadenzafr 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I’m predicted a 7 no idea how I’m gonna do it lmao. Also I’m i yr 11 so good luck to the both of us

    • @addieee1194
      @addieee1194 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@cadenzafr how did the mock go?

    • @cadenzafr
      @cadenzafr 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@addieee1194 got a 4 in literature and a 7 in language, been revising a lot more literature recently tho, what about you?

    • @addieee1194
      @addieee1194 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@cadenzafr yess that's great, especially lang! It went well, I'm not sure whether to take English for a level now, wbu?

  • @Fatal_Archer844
    @Fatal_Archer844 3 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    What is the question that Sanjay answered?

  • @thetribe4893
    @thetribe4893 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    kinda gunna miss your vids when I finish english gcse in a couple days.

  • @mo-mercsreacts3184
    @mo-mercsreacts3184 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I have my eng lit macbeth mock yr 11 in 8 days. This is the first video I have seen of yours. I will continue to watch you so I can improve my grade. I got a 4 in Yr 10 mocks. I want to get at least a 7. My predicted is a 6

    • @MrSallesTeachesEnglish
      @MrSallesTeachesEnglish  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Good luck

    • @userr5sccu9x44
      @userr5sccu9x44 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Yo what question did you get?

    • @abtheninja9370
      @abtheninja9370 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@userr5sccu9x44 I got the question, how does Shakespeare present macbeth and banquos attitude towards the supernatural

    • @abtheninja9370
      @abtheninja9370 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@userr5sccu9x44 also, I am momercs react but a different account

  • @hamsnub
    @hamsnub 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    16:11 he wrote macbeth instead of shakespeare 3 times :(

  • @cristinadanciu8548
    @cristinadanciu8548 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    This helped me so much! Thank you!

  • @1stktte128
    @1stktte128 ปีที่แล้ว

    Gonna start watching all you videos for an inspector calls and Macbeth hopefully they get me off the grade 6

    • @taravxk
      @taravxk 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

      hey how did you do?

  • @darkhacker8747
    @darkhacker8747 5 ปีที่แล้ว +31

    Sir, my school does Edexcel for Literature so macbeth/christmas carol has part A and B with only 20 marks and for Inspector Calls just Part A with 40 marks. Could i still use this to achieve 40/40 for my examboard?

  • @amsa12378
    @amsa12378 5 ปีที่แล้ว +19

    Mr salles i want to know everything that might come into my test so I can cover them all, but our school doesn`t tell us so I would like to ask you instead of leaving all the stress to year 11. As far as I know, these are the essential materials:
    conflict b poems
    Macbeth
    Jacklyn hyde
    Christmas cold
    Inspector calls
    Creative and descriptive writing

    • @MrSallesTeachesEnglish
      @MrSallesTeachesEnglish  5 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      The first 5 are all literature, the last one is Language. Go to AQA and download paper 1 and 2 of language, and 1 and 2 of literature. That shows you everything that will come up.

    • @amyclark7685
      @amyclark7685 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      Boa Hancock btw, it’s actually Jekyll and Hyde not jacklyn :)

    • @amsa12378
      @amsa12378 4 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      @@amyclark7685 Yeah that`s really not my biggest problem here !

    • @amyclark7685
      @amyclark7685 4 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      Boa Hancock well I was letting you know for when you revise it and can’t figure out why it’s not coming up 😴 be grateful

    • @amsa12378
      @amsa12378 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@amyclark7685 Thanks a bunch!!

  • @erenyeager7856
    @erenyeager7856 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I got 25/30 on my macbeth year 11 mocks, for gcse i wanna get higher

  • @chunkplunk
    @chunkplunk 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    just looking back at this with joy knowing I don’t have to do it ever again

  • @rose_bangtan7793
    @rose_bangtan7793 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I watched this video the day before my Macbeth exam and I got the exact same question😭

    • @rose_bangtan7793
      @rose_bangtan7793 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@rab.j something like, how is macbeth presented as a violent character

  • @FireFitt
    @FireFitt 5 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    Mr salles, can you make a new video about the key quotes you need to know for Macbeth.
    Thanks

  • @sohaibmirza4609
    @sohaibmirza4609 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I'm here at year 8 but you are really helpful and I can't thank you enough.

    • @Jibi8z
      @Jibi8z 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      continue like that and u will be the next sanjay
      unlike me 😭😭

    • @brokenoob3797
      @brokenoob3797 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@Jibi8z anything’s possible if you put your mind to it

    • @brokenoob3797
      @brokenoob3797 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      If you really cared you would have written 10 essays in a day it’s possible I did it once

  • @asked7172
    @asked7172 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    the only good teacher in the world

  • @zachrichardson7099
    @zachrichardson7099 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Watching this the night before my lit mock, i haven’t learnt the quotations. i beg of you, please run me down with your ar on my way to school tommorrow, kind stranger.

  • @apoorvaanil3019
    @apoorvaanil3019 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Sir I am a literature student in India. We have drama as one of our core paper and we have to study the whole play of macbeth for our this semester. Literally I didn't had any Idea to how to link my ideas and interpretations chronologically. So to find a solution I did a thorough search on TH-cam for teachers who explains the ideas more clearly, very easy and useful. I am really fascinated by your classes, because it made me to think the basic ideas and quotations in the from a very different perspective. Thank you sir for uploading these videos🙏🏼😊. I am making a humble request to you. Ca you please make each scene wise explanations, analysis and interpretation on macbeth...... please ...please.....please.....

    • @MrSallesTeachesEnglish
      @MrSallesTeachesEnglish  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thank you, I have all the scenes of act 1 and 2, and will make the others in April

  • @rinka9383
    @rinka9383 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    My Eng Lit exam in an hour 😭 good luck everyone doing it this year.

  • @jezzaminejude6090
    @jezzaminejude6090 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Omfg Sanjay u slayed that, i hope u know you’re a English lit idol for many

  • @DXXDXXV
    @DXXDXXV 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hope we all get great grades

  • @Toyu67
    @Toyu67 3 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Hi sir, just got my mark back as 20/160 im so proud of myself.

  • @liamconstable7366
    @liamconstable7366 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks for telling me what the question is

  • @IndigoIced
    @IndigoIced 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I wish I found this video before I submitted my essay last year 😩

  • @faizakhanshowreel
    @faizakhanshowreel 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Mr Salles, please share your exquisite analysis on A View from the Bridge & To Kill a Mockingbird

  • @fillername4232
    @fillername4232 3 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    Mr Salles, I’m in year 11 and just completed my first set of mocks, for my literature exam the extract I was given the best extract I could have asked for (act 5 scene 1), everything I have written is very good quality, but I didn’t get an awful lot written, is there any advice you can give to help with time management and getting as much done as possible

    • @MrSallesTeachesEnglish
      @MrSallesTeachesEnglish  3 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      There is only one bit of advice - practise writing under timed conditions, and you will get quicker. If thinking fast is the problem, practise dictating.

    • @cathutton7352
      @cathutton7352 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      What was the question ?

    • @fillername4232
      @fillername4232 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@cathutton7352 ‘describe how Lady Macbeth is presented in the extract; how is Lady Macbeth presented as a woman who changes during the play’ or something similar

    • @ayzoffline
      @ayzoffline 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@fillername4232 that’s exactly what I got on my mock exam question 😂

    • @kindermist_5779
      @kindermist_5779 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@fillername4232 ahhh that was the 2021 gcses for me , absolute bless it was

  • @scarliekawarlie9104
    @scarliekawarlie9104 4 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    Sir, how would you say to structure your essay, because my other teachers for different subjects tells us the basic structure but my english teacher hasn’t said anything. How would you say to do a basic structure?

    • @beomgyusberry5773
      @beomgyusberry5773 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      maybe start off with an introduction, followed by two paragraphs that agree with your point, then perhaps two paragraphs that disagree (dont forget context if its an AQA lit exam) and then summarise all your points and conclude - make sure it links back to the intro. idk but ig this would work - perhaps just adding some extra paragraphs if this isnt enough, but i hope this helps!

    • @OrangeDude7
      @OrangeDude7 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@beomgyusberry5773 it helps me thank you so much

  • @Mystery-q3c
    @Mystery-q3c 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Bring out the idea of violence and it's relation to the state in Macbeth

  • @imclara
    @imclara 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I really wish I saw this last month 😭

  • @mikabrown4123
    @mikabrown4123 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Hi! My teacher taught us critical theories and Jacobean society for context, not anything on Shakespeare himself, do you think this would be a problem for me since I’m expected a grade 8? Thanks.

    • @MrSallesTeachesEnglish
      @MrSallesTeachesEnglish  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      No, if you use this context to argue for particular interpretations, that will be fine. Make sure you understand the critical theories though, as examiners find that students usually apply them incorrectly

  • @BobBob-me8gt
    @BobBob-me8gt 4 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    Yr 11 Mocks tomorrow ✌️😘✌️

    • @asiah125
      @asiah125 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      for your mocks, did u get 2019 papers?

  • @aaronthomas6433
    @aaronthomas6433 5 ปีที่แล้ว +33

    sir i dont know how to get my language as good as this

    • @MrSallesTeachesEnglish
      @MrSallesTeachesEnglish  5 ปีที่แล้ว +29

      Start by stealing some of it, and then use it in class, or for some revision answers - give it to your teacher to mark.

    • @aaronthomas6433
      @aaronthomas6433 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@MrSallesTeachesEnglish Thanks Sir!!!!

    • @TheSafeSword
      @TheSafeSword 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      This is wholesome, Teacher to student relationship

  • @studyaccount7677
    @studyaccount7677 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    can you make videos on grade 9 analysis on frankenstein please?

  • @hxpr3936
    @hxpr3936 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    using this the day before my English lit paper 1 exam, feeling so hopeless.

  • @abigaillouise7452
    @abigaillouise7452 5 ปีที่แล้ว +21

    Thank you I’ve been watching your videos recently I have my Mocs on Wednesday and my GCSEs next year rly nervous but you’re definitely helping
    Also what question number is this?

  • @mirnabatou4182
    @mirnabatou4182 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    What quotation could you use when the person made a point about Banquo being a descendent of King James?

  • @spytro4243
    @spytro4243 5 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Hi sir, please can you make more videos on English language paper 2 when you have time?

  • @sameerahfarooqi5326
    @sameerahfarooqi5326 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Hi Mr Salles
    I thought its good when your ideas and points are unique from other students but it seems like if examiners arent familiar theyll give it a lower level. So shall we use ideas that are unfamiliar and sort of unique or not?
    Can you also do more videos on Animal Farm

  • @Lauren-kj9ze
    @Lauren-kj9ze ปีที่แล้ว +1

    BIG UP SANJAY

  • @mrpineapplebro7964
    @mrpineapplebro7964 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

    does this essay talk about how Macbeth changed throughout the play

  • @merlynrodrigues2224
    @merlynrodrigues2224 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    I'm struggling to get level 3🥺

  • @stardreamix786
    @stardreamix786 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thank you so much for this!
    This is really helpful! :)
    Thank you! ;)
    Stay safe all!

  • @natxshap
    @natxshap 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you Sir.

  • @sophiemae4119
    @sophiemae4119 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    hi sir, i have got my essays back for my mocks and for my macbeth essay i got 28/30, and on my jekyll and hyde essay i got 18/30. i honestly don’t know how i lost so many marks on my jekyll and hyde essay. throughout the whole essay i was getting level 4 AO’s and i didn’t get into level 5 or 6 at all. i really don’t know what i was missing in the jekyll and hyde essay and i don’t know how i can improve it.

    • @MrSallesTeachesEnglish
      @MrSallesTeachesEnglish  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Ask your teacher for 5 ways to improve it, then do so, and hand it in to be remarked. You clearly have the subject knowledge, so it will be small adjustments

  • @imuspov
    @imuspov 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Sanjay my g , uve smashed it

    • @FireFitt
      @FireFitt 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      He's not that good mate, like come on

  • @billbobert
    @billbobert 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    This guy says that parts of the play are included to coerce the king into sponsoring Shakespeare's company of actors, but They became the kings men before this play was performed to the king

  • @farhaanahmed8924
    @farhaanahmed8924 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    What was the question though, Sir?

  • @lydiamorris6668
    @lydiamorris6668 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    I was revising watching this video, and next minute I fainted, lol I have to go the the hospital ahaha no joke !

  • @BananaCake71
    @BananaCake71 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hi sir , in my school they tell us to do 3 PEE paragraphs with 3 quotes from the extract then link two of the quotes referencing to another part of the text having the same idea.When i have been watching the grade 9 videos they don't do that.Do you suggest that i do the schools method or should i do a paragraph for each AO like in this video to get top marks?

    • @MrSallesTeachesEnglish
      @MrSallesTeachesEnglish  4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Your school is trying to teach a method which will cover all bases - so it sounds logical. Because teachers usually don't sit the exams themselves, they don't road test this to see if it is actually successful - usually it ends up with having to write too much. The only way for you to find out is to write an essay using what you have learned, and see what grade you get, compared to the 'method'.

  • @Mlgtrek334
    @Mlgtrek334 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hello Sir - if I didn't start with the extract in the Macbeth question (or 19th century novel question), would that constitute "rubric infringement"? Would my answer be capped at a certain level? Thank you

    • @MrSallesTeachesEnglish
      @MrSallesTeachesEnglish  ปีที่แล้ว

      No, there is nothing in the mark scheme about starting with the extract. You are 100% allowed to start anywhere. I recommend chronologically

  • @daudrahman6898
    @daudrahman6898 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    I got only 25/30 on my power and conflict essay and got Level 5 one mark off a Level 6

    • @EBSPITSBARZ
      @EBSPITSBARZ 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      How is that a level 5?

    • @lightning7198
      @lightning7198 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@EBSPITSBARZ level not grade it’s prob a grade 7 or 8

    • @siviplayfrances5728
      @siviplayfrances5728 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Its level 8/9 depending on grade boundaries

  • @isabellecrabbe9992
    @isabellecrabbe9992 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Do you need to conclude? My teacher told us that it’s not necessary?

  • @elizabethlewis3549
    @elizabethlewis3549 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    In order to get an 8/9 do you need to hit Level 6 on all the AOs?

  • @MELISA-00
    @MELISA-00 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    What was the question for this essay?

  • @jacobreid8889
    @jacobreid8889 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Is this of the theme of kingship?

  • @shulimiron6415
    @shulimiron6415 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    what was the question that he was answering

  • @khalidz950
    @khalidz950 2 ปีที่แล้ว

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  • @tarronburrha4017
    @tarronburrha4017 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    What was the question for this model

  • @조현민-r5u
    @조현민-r5u 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I am new to the UK, I was wondering if you can choose your Shakespearean play for paper 1 or if it is assigned to you by the exam.

    • @MrSallesTeachesEnglish
      @MrSallesTeachesEnglish  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Each exam board offers a range of about 3-5. Go to their past papers to find which.

    • @shekhinahasumah1234
      @shekhinahasumah1234 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Your school chooses it

    • @조현민-r5u
      @조현민-r5u 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@shekhinahasumah1234 when you school chooses it, do you mean they choose the specific play, or like the comment above, do you mean the exam board will choose 3-5 specific plays and then you get to chose one of them

    • @shekhinahasumah1234
      @shekhinahasumah1234 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@조현민-r5u yes the exam boards give options and you school from that

    • @조현민-r5u
      @조현민-r5u 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@shekhinahasumah1234 does that mean you only need to study one play?

  • @luluthebun
    @luluthebun 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Where was this when I was doing macbeth 😭 I still haven't got my marks yet buy I KNOW I did sooo bad in it 😭😭💀💀

  • @danishzeb9864
    @danishzeb9864 4 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    12:31 James ADMIRATION for the witches!!!!!???

  • @laurenm5770
    @laurenm5770 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    How much more in depth would an a level english essay be in comparison to a grade 9 at GCSE?

  • @taniaakter2727
    @taniaakter2727 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    1) George greens?
    2) eng r& j +Christmas Carol gang tmr?

  • @jakeweston6416
    @jakeweston6416 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Was this the 2019 Gcse question

  • @BilalHussain-di6tr
    @BilalHussain-di6tr 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    What was the question for lit paper 1 for 2019 GCSE

    • @keiralevene4946
      @keiralevene4946 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      violence in Macbeth and something on Hyde.

    • @mhd.9391
      @mhd.9391 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I THINK it was Hyde as frightening outsider, or it was about mystery and tension.

  • @charlottea9090
    @charlottea9090 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    anyone else stress revising for Macbeth and Unseen tomorrow???

  • @hannahhazel2934
    @hannahhazel2934 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    thank you so much

  • @dragonbreathwr9007
    @dragonbreathwr9007 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hi sir can you have a look at this thesis for Lady Macbeth: In the archetypical propaganda play 'Macbeth', Shakespeare powerfully constructs the deateragonist Lady Macbeth as an unwillingly determined character to cataclyse Macbeth's downfall in order to make an ironic statement that women also have freedom (which was of course very unexpected in this patriarchal society because they wasn't able to vote) and was seen as rather entertaining for a Jacobean audience seeing the performance at the globe.