I never hit my cheating wife. Neither was worth it. I was with two that cheated and I divorced them. They message and I know they regret it. I'm always in a better place. It's not a sport or planned, it's just when your real it's easy, mentally ill take they're problems to the next one
Absolutely confusing. Could have been a great story if it didn't keep jumping all over the place and had more consistency. Ended terribly. I kept reading because I thought it would get better
Not a bad rough draft but the notion that the Helen incident and the rescue were all part of a plot by brother and father seems too far fetched. If they wanted to cancel him, they could have done that easily without all the loosey-goosey drama. Also the ending was a slap-on without any development or meaning. I'd like to see more character development to flesh out the story, and the plot needs a lot of reworking to be plausible.
Sick stuff. And not even unprecedented. Family often is your worst nightmare.
I never hit my cheating wife. Neither was worth it. I was with two that cheated and I divorced them. They message and I know they regret it. I'm always in a better place. It's not a sport or planned, it's just when your real it's easy, mentally ill take they're problems to the next one
What a stupid story complete waste of time 🔥
Absolutely confusing. Could have been a great story if it didn't keep jumping all over the place and had more consistency. Ended terribly. I kept reading because I thought it would get better
real cheating story with fantasy..... I think someone needs to work on their writing cause it was horrible.
Not a bad rough draft but the notion that the Helen incident and the rescue were all part of a plot by brother and father seems too far fetched. If they wanted to cancel him, they could have done that easily without all the loosey-goosey drama. Also the ending was a slap-on without any development or meaning. I'd like to see more character development to flesh out the story, and the plot needs a lot of reworking to be plausible.
story events are abrupt. Hard to follow through. read similar story before.
I thought her name was Samantha not Vicky ?
This story needs a serious editor. This story is an incoherent mess.
Seriously the first two minutes are making me want to pull out my hair. This is soo broken and all over the place.