Two negative complaints/suggestions/comments and one positive. 1st: You often read as though you are an AI. Are the subtitles the original text you are reading or a later voice to text conversion? I ask because the subtitles say “post-scasity” and you read it that way but the real word is “post-scarcity”. Pronounced “scare city”. Mistakes like that make it seem like you aren’t a human or are a human who is unfamiliar with the kind of words and/or concepts used in the stories you read. There have also (in other of your stories) been times when complete gibberish is in the subtitles and the audio. Just like in AI read stories. 2nd: We can hear when you make an edit to combine takes. That’s fine but could be smoother. But…If you are going to do edits, it would be more professional sounding if you also removed the “um”s. Or are those left in to make you seem more human? 3rd: I think the hiss seems a bit less pronounced in this post. I don’t know the technical methods of recording to make suggestions for fixing it but I don’t hear this in other channel’s posts. Reading this over, I sound practically nasty. I’m not intending that at all. I like your work and think it’s improving. It’s just hard for me to convey a helpful tone in text without a lot of extra words and the comment is already waaaaaay too long.
Two negative complaints/suggestions/comments and one positive.
1st: You often read as though you are an AI. Are the subtitles the original text you are reading or a later voice to text conversion? I ask because the subtitles say “post-scasity” and you read it that way but the real word is “post-scarcity”. Pronounced “scare city”. Mistakes like that make it seem like you aren’t a human or are a human who is unfamiliar with the kind of words and/or concepts used in the stories you read. There have also (in other of your stories) been times when complete gibberish is in the subtitles and the audio. Just like in AI read stories.
2nd: We can hear when you make an edit to combine takes. That’s fine but could be smoother. But…If you are going to do edits, it would be more professional sounding if you also removed the “um”s. Or are those left in to make you seem more human?
3rd: I think the hiss seems a bit less pronounced in this post. I don’t know the technical methods of recording to make suggestions for fixing it but I don’t hear this in other channel’s posts.
Reading this over, I sound practically nasty. I’m not intending that at all. I like your work and think it’s improving. It’s just hard for me to convey a helpful tone in text without a lot of extra words and the comment is already waaaaaay too long.