Tbh this is the first story where Ex is not exactly Evil or even bad to FL but is just an irresponsible idiotic public nuisance... More than being a cheating a-hole to FL, his fault as a bf is taht he flaked out on his planned proposal for another girl - but in fairness to him, he didnt do anything out of any romantic interest n does show his dislike when he realized the urgency was made up by Evil gal... His real crappiness is the irresponsibility he showed in checking if he really caused a public issue or not due to his own criminal negligence... Dude's crime isnt really being a crappy bf, his crime here isnt anything that can't be resolved by lottttsss of groveling espl considering in other stories youve A-holes running out of engagement or wedding ceremonies... He is just a crappy human for being irresponsible with human lives...
Dean is so stupid. He really gave up proposing to Shirley to buy medicine for Patricia who kept him from proposing? Is he really going to drive like a madman for that? As the doctor told him. It is not that serious. If Patricia was seriously ill and her condition got worse would she really be acting this way? Would she really be sitting up in that bed reading magazines and playing the victim card and making him feel like he has to be responsible for her? All the doctor asked was to find out where there was some medicine. He didn't mean to get it immediately.
As much as I like revenge stories. This one was a little too much. Such severe punishment was not necessary. Also the story didn't show what exactly scumbag did to FL during their relationship to cause that severe punishment.
I'm glad Shirly and the system saved a life
This story is great.
I'm glad she has good friends
Nice story
Tbh this is the first story where Ex is not exactly Evil or even bad to FL but is just an irresponsible idiotic public nuisance...
More than being a cheating a-hole to FL, his fault as a bf is taht he flaked out on his planned proposal for another girl - but in fairness to him, he didnt do anything out of any romantic interest n does show his dislike when he realized the urgency was made up by Evil gal...
His real crappiness is the irresponsibility he showed in checking if he really caused a public issue or not due to his own criminal negligence...
Dude's crime isnt really being a crappy bf, his crime here isnt anything that can't be resolved by lottttsss of groveling espl considering in other stories youve A-holes running out of engagement or wedding ceremonies... He is just a crappy human for being irresponsible with human lives...
Cheating was only a matter of time. If the evil girl didn't fake a heart attack, he would have slept with her that night. 🙄
Dean is so stupid. He really gave up proposing to Shirley to buy medicine for Patricia who kept him from proposing? Is he really going to drive like a madman for that? As the doctor told him. It is not that serious. If Patricia was seriously ill and her condition got worse would she really be acting this way? Would she really be sitting up in that bed reading magazines and playing the victim card and making him feel like he has to be responsible for her? All the doctor asked was to find out where there was some medicine. He didn't mean to get it immediately.
why did the girl she saved parents abended Shirly ? they should have called the police
Great story
As much as I like revenge stories. This one was a little too much. Such severe punishment was not necessary. Also the story didn't show what exactly scumbag did to FL during their relationship to cause that severe punishment.