As a fellow author, I will say I’d love to see these stories fully developed, because even though they are still very solid, most times they feel a bit rushed and I see many plot holes in them. I’m not sure how this channel works, if these are all your work or if they are sent to you, but I don’t think anyone would mind a longer video with more character development and more arc buildup.
Literary criticism aside, would you forgive Roderick? Personally, I’d forgive Roderick after I saw some financial compensation. I’d also have pressed charges after my assault. The hero in the story is a much better person than I am because I’ll only forgive when I’m made whole. Yes, I’m American 🇺🇸 and related to a lawyer. I’d also show Roderick how to Legally get back at his abusive family (they‘ll pay for his counseling, etc).
@@linikedemarco I guess I see your point. However, I’d still want Roderick to pay for my hospital bills and about 6 months rent in compensation for the illegal eviction (even if you owe back rent, you can only be evicted through the court process, not just throwing things in the street). Oh yes, I’d press charges for him assaulting me. People can’t just do you dirty without some form of legal punishment. Yes, I’m 💯 That B*tch. If you don’t start trouble, there’ll be no trouble 👿 (F. A. A. F. I.)
@@CosmicMomDove HAHAHAHA that “I don’t start drama, I end it” mindset, I LOVE IT! And to be very honest, the fact that this even happened in the story is one of the plot holes I was talking about. Like, is this an alternate reality where this happens often, or did the author just pull it out for shock value?
Yeah weird plot holes and things kill me with these. Like the manager just throwing them out in the alley and reprimanding his employee, who got punched, makes absolute zero sense. Its like there is a whole chapter missing.
For me, no matter where you are going through, it's not an excuse to bully or inflict pain on another person. Roger deserved to be dealt with, and bullies should be taught a big lesson
Daryl is naive and used to being a doormat, Roderick did not deserve forgiveness and certainly not his money. this guy beat him up, got him fired, got others to beat him up multiple times and got him kicked out and he never showed remorse. Daryl needs a therapist to unpack why he would continue to let someone treat him like that and then want to be “friends” with him.
So many trash people in this story holy shit. Trash college, trash job, trash bullies, I ain’t forgiving nobody! Plus, I would not have helped Roderick when he made my life a living hell and nearly killed me!
Stopped watching. R belonged in jail for public intoxication, disturbing the peace, assault, battery, bodily harm, etc. He instigated everything, and attacked the kid at work. Give these criminal thugs permanent police records. Get it on the record. Jump for joy that their futures are destroyed by their own choices and behaviors. Letting everyone go and then the kid started to make amends? Nah. No point in giving any more time to this crap.
What is it with all the stories having the love interest being a white man with “piercing blue eyes” and “chiseled jaw” and “towering masculine physique” 😂😂
@@CycloideNYCpointing out that stories and beauty standards are largely determined by white people is not racism. What youre experiencing at seeing someone notice this is white fragility, not racism.
When I was in school I too was bullied and now 40+years later I find out that if I am going to have closure I need to forgive them if I going to have peace of mind. Just do not know how to do so
I agree with the commenter who said Daryl needs therapy. Also, even though he’s from a rich family, Rodrick never paid him back the $700. Daryl needs new real friends. Jean is the only honorable one in this story.
there is no way this happens in college 💀 like the bully stuff. like ur grown not in middle school. at least i hope it doesn’t happen and if it did probably wouldn’t to me anyway but it’s still embarrassing 😭
It is but sophomores are but there will always be the ones that are biger and think they are something and bullie smaller people or people that won't fight back
"Jean" as in "Billy Jean" (as in the Michael Jackson song - who?) ? Girls name? They have a boys name in France but it's pronounced "John" which is it's equivalent. Confusing, but might explain a few things....and it would be "naivety" not "naiveness"...
Ohh please I hate the ending part. I really hate leads that are "Miss goodie 2 shoes" I mean do unto others what they did to you. What was the need to even help Rodrick and pay the bill where as you yourself are broke😒pshhhh
As a fellow author, I will say I’d love to see these stories fully developed, because even though they are still very solid, most times they feel a bit rushed and I see many plot holes in them. I’m not sure how this channel works, if these are all your work or if they are sent to you, but I don’t think anyone would mind a longer video with more character development and more arc buildup.
Literary criticism aside, would you forgive Roderick? Personally, I’d forgive Roderick after I saw some financial compensation. I’d also have pressed charges after my assault. The hero in the story is a much better person than I am because I’ll only forgive when I’m made whole. Yes, I’m American 🇺🇸 and related to a lawyer. I’d also show Roderick how to Legally get back at his abusive family (they‘ll pay for his counseling, etc).
@@CosmicMomDove I would forgive him but I would no longer give him access to me and my life.
@@linikedemarco I guess I see your point. However, I’d still want Roderick to pay for my hospital bills and about 6 months rent in compensation for the illegal eviction (even if you owe back rent, you can only be evicted through the court process, not just throwing things in the street). Oh yes, I’d press charges for him assaulting me. People can’t just do you dirty without some form of legal punishment. Yes, I’m 💯 That B*tch. If you don’t start trouble, there’ll be no trouble 👿 (F. A. A. F. I.)
@@CosmicMomDove HAHAHAHA that “I don’t start drama, I end it” mindset, I LOVE IT!
And to be very honest, the fact that this even happened in the story is one of the plot holes I was talking about. Like, is this an alternate reality where this happens often, or did the author just pull it out for shock value?
Yeah weird plot holes and things kill me with these. Like the manager just throwing them out in the alley and reprimanding his employee, who got punched, makes absolute zero sense. Its like there is a whole chapter missing.
For me, no matter where you are going through, it's not an excuse to bully or inflict pain on another person. Roger deserved to be dealt with, and bullies should be taught a big lesson
This narrator is actually the best, I like his voice. I always enjoy listening to his stories.
Big same for me, I really enjoy listening to his voice!
The narrators voice is excellent what really tugs at your heart. Its not rough just soothing.
Daryl is naive and used to being a doormat, Roderick did not deserve forgiveness and certainly not his money. this guy beat him up, got him fired, got others to beat him up multiple times and got him kicked out and he never showed remorse. Daryl needs a therapist to unpack why he would continue to let someone treat him like that and then want to be “friends” with him.
I agree with you he really needs therapy as he might just be a saddist njer who knows?
Love how the thumbnail is Klance fanart
Same I'm loving it
this is exactly what i pressed on the video to see
That couldn’t be me I would’ve let that man keep beating rodrick 🤷🏾♂️
No one gonna talk about the thumbnail being a Klance ship art?
Fr, I love it 😭✨❤️
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i would never and will never forgive a bully. They do everything knowing its bad and have no remorse.
This feels like a wattpad story 😂
I'm telling YOUUUUU!!! 😂
I got webtoons immediately after Roderick started acting up
So many trash people in this story holy shit. Trash college, trash job, trash bullies, I ain’t forgiving nobody! Plus, I would not have helped Roderick when he made my life a living hell and nearly killed me!
Y’all this is the best channel as I am gay myself and my parents don’t know
Melinda is trash for going back on her promise to help him
@@sem_skywalker why are you monitoring my commenting?
@@sem_skywalker if I want to put one comment I can if I want to put 20 comments I can
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@@sem_skywalker You have a nice day
Forgiveness is the lighter and doesn't weigh down but lifts.
I like this narrator, he's really good. I just wish he slowed down a bit.
Yes, acceptance is the path to take.
Stopped watching. R belonged in jail for public intoxication, disturbing the peace, assault, battery, bodily harm, etc. He instigated everything, and attacked the kid at work.
Give these criminal thugs permanent police records. Get it on the record. Jump for joy that their futures are destroyed by their own choices and behaviors. Letting everyone go and then the kid started to make amends? Nah. No point in giving any more time to this crap.
What is it with all the stories having the love interest being a white man with “piercing blue eyes” and “chiseled jaw” and “towering masculine physique” 😂😂
@@CycloideNYCpointing out that stories and beauty standards are largely determined by white people is not racism. What youre experiencing at seeing someone notice this is white fragility, not racism.
Nah bruh, I would’ve wailed on Roderick the FIRST time he put his hands on me.
Who wouldn't get bored when math started to have letters in it ? LMFAOOOOO I FEEL THIS LOL
i love these stories
What in the webtoon is this story?!!! Why is man's getting beat left and right?!!! 😭😭😭
When I was in school I too was bullied and now 40+years later I find out that if I am going to have closure I need to forgive them if I going to have peace of mind. Just do not know how to do so
I agree with the commenter who said Daryl needs therapy. Also, even though he’s from a rich family, Rodrick never paid him back the $700. Daryl needs new real friends. Jean is the only honorable one in this story.
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damn, i cried cuz of the beauty of the story...
No , i'm sorry but i dont think Roderick deserved your forgiveness
But irl they'd curse eachother out
but nah i would’ve pummeled rodrick for doing all of that
there is no way this happens in college 💀 like the bully stuff. like ur grown not in middle school. at least i hope it doesn’t happen and if it did probably wouldn’t to me anyway but it’s still embarrassing 😭
embarrassing asf especially in college
Like you said sometimes a scaired kid is behind the face and is looking for help
I though freshman was below sophomore? Can somebody please explain.
It is but sophomores are but there will always be the ones that are biger and think they are something and bullie smaller people or people that won't fight back
What a doormat
Mat under the door
Great story
What kind of name is Jock?
Scottish
What kind of university is this?!
😂😂
Daryl the Duff
These stories are getting worse and worse
"Jean" as in "Billy Jean" (as in the Michael Jackson song - who?) ? Girls name? They have a boys name in France but it's pronounced "John" which is it's equivalent. Confusing, but might explain a few things....and it would be "naivety" not "naiveness"...
Gene.
American boys name, but pronounced the same as Jean.
Ohh please I hate the ending part. I really hate leads that are "Miss goodie 2 shoes" I mean do unto others what they did to you. What was the need to even help Rodrick and pay the bill where as you yourself are broke😒pshhhh
What is the name of the superstar is it Jack or is it Jean you get the two names and don’t give any explanation this fact alone makes the story fake
All this video gave me was rage I wish I didn’t see this
And such gayness happened 🙄
I do not like this kind of stories. Stories where one is too weak to defend oneself
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