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  • @Will-mk5pj
    @Will-mk5pj 2 ปีที่แล้ว +31

    “Wrapped in pink and grey.” I love the multimouse reference! Also, that was the perfect cliffhanger to end on!

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous 2 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      It was the perfect amount of fluff... good luck with Risk!! 😳

    • @eleishadolbey6889
      @eleishadolbey6889 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      A cliffhanger I actually didn't mind 😂😂
      Sets it up perfectly for part 2!!
      There have been cliffhangers in the past that have ledt me swearing 😂😂😂😂 This one left me fangirling
      Hoping to watch risk once the kids are off to school!!

    • @Will-mk5pj
      @Will-mk5pj 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@eleishadolbey6889 I just watched Risk, and I must admit, my respect for a certain character has increased.

    • @eleishadolbey6889
      @eleishadolbey6889 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@Will-mk5pj about 45 mins til I can watch it lol
      I better go make those school lunches 😅

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@eleishadolbey6889 lol would they be more mine then 🤔 😂 🧐

  • @TipsForTeens2549
    @TipsForTeens2549 2 ปีที่แล้ว +27

    A really touching story! I do hope that something like this will happen in the show, where Adrien starts to develop feelings for Marinette before he found out her identity. I feel like if he didn’t realise he liked her before the reveal then he would only be in love with her because she was Ladybug, like what happened in Cat Blanc. I really hope it doesn’t happen because that would feel unnatural. I really enjoyed this and hope this story or something like it might happen in canon! 😀

  • @myladynoirr853
    @myladynoirr853 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    At start: UGH YOU MUST'VE UNDERSTAND IT BY NOW YOU HANDSOME BLIND BOY! 😩
    At the end: *FINIALLY!!!* 😭😌✨😍

  • @albertodiaz1969
    @albertodiaz1969 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    AHHHHH. What a cliffhanger. The gears finally clicked together.

  • @coltengrace4512
    @coltengrace4512 2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    GASP why why does it end there (not seriously) love this and am excited for pt 2!

    • @donanthebarbarian5177
      @donanthebarbarian5177 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Because that's the only point it could be split into parts. Anything before or after would leave us readers/listeners frustrated. So the only options for the story were split there or be one whole.

    • @sarahhairston8796
      @sarahhairston8796 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@donanthebarbarian5177 Good point!

  • @jhankinson_music7605
    @jhankinson_music7605 2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Love it already

  • @shenhui9408
    @shenhui9408 ปีที่แล้ว

    I am smiling in sweet satisfaction and relief for Adrien. Finally the blind can now see!

  • @VilmaSantos-pd5hl
    @VilmaSantos-pd5hl 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    It's so cute! I really hope the love square switches in the show..with a little of more drama with Felix. Yes I know we had kind of a love triangle with Luka, Marinette and Adrien..but I'd be super interesting to see how it would play out if Felix developed feelings for Marinette, Adrien/CN as well, Marinette has her feelings confused with both..with the idea that Felix is trying to break a curse he has and Marinette/LB being the key.

  • @johnam1234
    @johnam1234 2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Very great story and we wait for the next one

  • @beccad3296
    @beccad3296 2 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    I so needed something fluffy like this after Risk dropped today. Thank you. Can't wait for the next part!

  • @kayleighjoanna
    @kayleighjoanna 2 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Ahh this is so sweet 💕💗 our little buttercup realizing his feelings 🥰 love it so far!

  • @Sof_rha
    @Sof_rha 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Such a good story❤️❤️

  • @katherinesaenz455
    @katherinesaenz455 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Oh, dear, I loved it!!! 😂❤️❤️❤️❤️ Those letters were beautiful an Adrien cute as always

  • @kiaras4350
    @kiaras4350 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    OH MY GOSH-
    Cant wait for the next part! This was so sweet ahhh

  • @eleishadolbey6889
    @eleishadolbey6889 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    It finally clicks!!!! 😍😍😍😍😍

  • @niyavalcheva5469
    @niyavalcheva5469 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    i think we all agree we need part 2 ASAP!!! AMAZING

  • @rosenamazza5516
    @rosenamazza5516 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Loved it

  • @yukiyuu_4349
    @yukiyuu_4349 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Wahhhh, that was so adorable especially with the ending part! My heart! 😍😍❤️❤️
    I love the writer started out with Adrien instead of Marinette (and Nino)! Maybe we could get Marinette’s pov for part 2 where she and Alya are discussing together with the love letter, only if she wants to.
    Btw, have you seen Risk ep? It came out of nowhere after I woke up😮

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Oh, so glad you enjoyed it! Yeah, still processing Risk.... it was amazing but sooooo much to unpack... we need Strike Back now... so my head doesn't spiral down the umpteen paths and theories. 😳🌟💖

  • @maryshashaw2895
    @maryshashaw2895 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Great as always

  • @dianehoover305
    @dianehoover305 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    NOOOO I CANT WAIIITTT

  • @user-ye1ww6tq2g
    @user-ye1ww6tq2g 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I can't wait to read the second part!! ❤

  • @MsEva456
    @MsEva456 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Love it ❤❤

  • @daughterofgod1502
    @daughterofgod1502 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hey Dawn! I love this video. Also, I have kind of a weird request for a potential video idea. If you can, could you maybe do an AU where the class does Legally Blonde the Musical and Adrien and Marinette fall in love playing Elle and Emmett during the play? I know it’s a dumb idea but I just thought of it lol.

  • @marichat99
    @marichat99 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Love it

  • @nuruddinshah684
    @nuruddinshah684 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I'm just a handmaiden
    WHAT ARE THE CHANCES...
    I'm playing pirate version of Dragon quest 6 YES....
    In one of the side story IS a "Handmaiden" in love with a "Prince" of the Mayor son....

  • @danidasestrelas
    @danidasestrelas 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Noo, im so sorry, i deleted cuz youtube had duplicate the coments 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢
    Stil, I comment again: love ur work and these texts of you and jhequia, and your voices.
    really good 😊

    • @danidasestrelas
      @danidasestrelas 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      🌟 Dawn Chorus Writes - Miraculous Fanfic - Audiofic respondeu: "Thank you for your kind words and I will pass them on to Jheqia, she wrote this two part episode for her Wednesday slot on my channel... but she will love to read that. 💖🌟"
      Show her, if u didn't print or copy I say again: "the way you write it is dynamic and u can imagine all the scene"
      It is good to read and hear, you don't get tedious or tired, it just flows.
      You and jhequia just do this with words and it is really admirable, you two are awesome :)

  • @pouashley
    @pouashley 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    The cliffhanger is as bad as Risk's 😩

  • @Will-mk5pj
    @Will-mk5pj 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I’m loving the collage of different scenes for the thumbnail, but what could this one be about?

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      I've put a brief summary in the description below 😄🌟 The art is by the amazing Jade Carol, I have been working with her on a couple of commissions too. She has a link in the description too. 😉

    • @Will-mk5pj
      @Will-mk5pj 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous I saw, but there are so many possibilities for what can happen

  • @Sailormoonlover_199
    @Sailormoonlover_199 ปีที่แล้ว

    So cute

  • @animeguy10000000
    @animeguy10000000 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Between this and Risk being dropped way earlier than it was supposed to be, I'm not okay. jkjk But seriously though.

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Bless, I know how you feel. I'm still processing. 😳🌟

    • @eleishadolbey6889
      @eleishadolbey6889 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous I just finished watching Risk 😳
      This is going to take some processing...

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@eleishadolbey6889 I'm still buffering!!! Now that's a cliff hanger! 😆🤯🥺

    • @eleishadolbey6889
      @eleishadolbey6889 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous I was in 2 minds about watching it when I heard it had come out last night because I knew it would be a massive cliffhanger and a while before strikeback comes out but I also didn't want to avoid all social media which I would 100% have to do if I didn't watch it 😅
      So hyped for strike back now!!!

  • @hotcoco5081
    @hotcoco5081 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I love this! When is the next part coming out?

  • @desireepaulplummer4386
    @desireepaulplummer4386 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I wish my valentines day was like that when I was in school way back in 2010 😭👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽

  • @leifjungblom7659
    @leifjungblom7659 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    For the algorithm

  • @slicknasty69
    @slicknasty69 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    10:26 mark

  • @slicknasty69
    @slicknasty69 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    17:14