This story is all over the place and quite honestly not the best written but it is what it is. Character development is no where to be seen. Naruto is weirdly scaled. I think I’ll stop here
The story's flow is not right. The way it bounces like a ping pong ball. Some of the stuff is kind of like I don't know out in the open that should be quiet and some of the stuff that they kind of glossed over should be the focus. It's just it's hard to keep up with it. Don't get me wrong. I like this story, but yeah. That need to rewrite where they change the emphasis and the flow of the story. It's like he's showing off and bragging. He's letting everybody know what he can do or at least some of what he can do. He should be hardness stuff seriously. That's what I meant about the flow of the story. He's turned into basically a chad. It's okay to be a chad if you hide it. But out and open like that is cringe-worthy. And author said he was making Sakura a little nicer. Than they have Naruto act like a complete j******Okay, you don't make one of the a******* in the story. Nicer, cause she was, she was an a******But you made an Oscar and then you make the niceguys into the a******It does nothing for the story doing that. Cause at this point even though he was bait and stuff. I don't feel sorry for him because he's done 80. And it really is not interesting. It's actually kind of like s*** turning into a Sasuke. I give up the explanation of his abilities. It's like shot gunning at ideas and hot. Marking down what got hit with the d*** pellets. He spends more time thinking out. The guy's outfits than how his abilities sound when he explains ti mean really all the powers come from the tail based except they're not tell Beast they're just damons and this one. Understand it's an author's prerogative to write the way they won't do. But this really wasn't well-thought-out.
Love the episode need more please 💚💚💚
7 months only 5 comments must be bad story
bro where's the link
This story is all over the place and quite honestly not the best written but it is what it is. Character development is no where to be seen. Naruto is weirdly scaled. I think I’ll stop here
The story's flow is not right. The way it bounces like a ping pong ball. Some of the stuff is kind of like I don't know out in the open that should be quiet and some of the stuff that they kind of glossed over should be the focus. It's just it's hard to keep up with it. Don't get me wrong. I like this story, but yeah. That need to rewrite where they change the emphasis and the flow of the story. It's like he's showing off and bragging. He's letting everybody know what he can do or at least some of what he can do. He should be hardness stuff seriously. That's what I meant about the flow of the story. He's turned into basically a chad. It's okay to be a chad if you hide it. But out and open like that is cringe-worthy. And author said he was making Sakura a little nicer. Than they have Naruto act like a complete j******Okay, you don't make one of the a******* in the story. Nicer, cause she was, she was an a******But you made an Oscar and then you make the niceguys into the a******It does nothing for the story doing that. Cause at this point even though he was bait and stuff. I don't feel sorry for him because he's done 80. And it really is not interesting. It's actually kind of like s*** turning into a Sasuke. I give up the explanation of his abilities. It's like shot gunning at ideas and hot. Marking down what got hit with the d*** pellets. He spends more time thinking out. The guy's outfits than how his abilities sound when he explains ti mean really all the powers come from the tail based except they're not tell Beast they're just damons and this one. Understand it's an author's prerogative to write the way they won't do. But this really wasn't well-thought-out.