After getting the story started, you stop at the point where the wife and her lover left, then launch into a long ass past history that I absolutely have no interest in knowing. By the time you get back to the current event, I already lost track of what the heck you were talking about before! Instead of writing that the husband as a long-lost only child of a big company, you should have written that he moved to the big company and worked his way up to be a CEO while abroad. Delete the long past history part and replace it with how the husband gains valuable work experience and fame. Also, the part where the male cheater has his wife's permission to have a year-long affair with his employee to have a baby is just bull shit.
After getting the story started, you stop at the point where the wife and her lover left, then launch into a long ass past history that I absolutely have no interest in knowing. By the time you get back to the current event, I already lost track of what the heck you were talking about before! Instead of writing that the husband as a long-lost only child of a big company, you should have written that he moved to the big company and worked his way up to be a CEO while abroad. Delete the long past history part and replace it with how the husband gains valuable work experience and fame. Also, the part where the male cheater has his wife's permission to have a year-long affair with his employee to have a baby is just bull shit.