1. Why not call the police? 2. Bring a weapon with you ffs 3. if you Heard him entering the room, you could hide and smack his face in! Does this guy not want to live at all?????
Albin Ekström 1. they cant call police because the have no proof he did anything wrong. 2. the are in a collage. 3.slap8ng some in thale face is not going tp do shit. are stupid
In his place, I really don't think I would have just stood there agape when Daniel came into the room, I'd be more intent on ending his miserable life fueled by a berserker rage induced by the disturbing things that were done to Lily. I mean, it's not like Daniel's Slenderman, and there's no hope to fight him, he's just your average human psychopathic artist.
+Revanth Vaughn lol and he brought a friend with him, so even if the artist had those dental tools with him it wasn't like he could of taken them both. But instead his friend passes out and this guy is all 'yup... must mean i have to die now'. He becomes all sad and depressed when any normal person would of snapped and mutilated that artist.
Even if he had weapons (Daniel) I mean, most people would've had an adrenaline rush from fear or anger by that moment. Knives would be some what ineffective during that moment. Kind of
I have mixed feelings about this creepypasta. Part of me loves it, and genuinely finds it horrifying, while the other part of me thinks it’s stupid and senseless. It was one of the first to make me feel sick and disgusted from what I was reading, the twist at the end that she was still alive despite everything really burned the story into my mind for multiple following days. Then there’s the manlet MCs literally just giving up for no reason. Like damn, all of that and you ain’t even gonna avenge the damn girl? By far one of the most memorable creepypastas I’ve read.
My problem with the MC started at the beginning of the story when they acted all high and mighty about their idea of art versus other people’s. The rest of it just made me like the character less and less lol. Also the person who wrote this clearly doesn’t know that “fine art” and “modern/contemporary art” are not necessarily the same thing. Still a really good creepy story, overall, but I just had a hard time getting past the attitude problems that the MC has and the fact that the way the beginning was written made them seem like they thought they were better than their classmates just because the classmates’ art wasn’t their style. Remind me never to go near an art school if that’s what people who attend them are like.
Why do Creepypasta writers think that file extensions are the scariest thing ever? It's like "Spongebob," no, that's not very scary, but "SPONGEBOG.DLL" JESUS CHRIST THAT'S TERRIFYING!
+tangjord Uh, he didn't say anything about applications. If you've seen any gore porn creepypastas, most of the "evidence" is pictures. Calm down buddy.
+tangjord And I've taken many classes and I'm pretty good with a computer... I know just because a file is .jpg or.exe doesn't mean it's cursed. Anyone with common sense knows that. But again, sorry for the confusion.
1) Why did they not call the cops? You have a disappearance, and reasonable evidence this guy is involved. Don't try to be "an hero", call the cops. 2) You're two grown men. Daniel is one grown man. It's two vs one. Why just resign to your fate? Kick his ass!
Yes but the police might not have found lily so they needed more evidence and also after seeing lily....distorted they were feeling sick and they were in shock
I know it's petty, but where have you ever heard "an hero?" If the next word starts with a vowel, it's an, if it's a consonant, it's a. A hero. Or, even better in this context, the hero.
@@solarpellets Why don't you Google "an hero" and get back to me. It'll all become clear. Oh, by the way, how's your Dutch? As good as my English? I'd hope so!
@@MentalParadox in that case you should use a hyphen "an-hero," and I'm not trying to be like that. I just think that even in helping one person I can make everyone's communication that much better. Precise communication matters.
rederratic Well, that would require the protagonist actually demonstrate some degree of intelligence, and as we all know most Creepypasta writers aren't competent enough to convincingly write an intelligent protagonist while also having them super shockingly die in a mega Shyamalanian-twist ending that nobody could have possibly seen coming under any circumstances. But seriously, that ending was shit. Creeps' voice is still sex made manifest though, so thumbs up regardless.
rederratic well seeing how many of the creepypastas look like...calling the cops would be smart, but would they believe the protagonist...would you believe someone if they told you they were being chased by some monster that looked like a faceless man, Evil imaginary clowns, or even an elf thing that come out of their technology device. Proably not...U would think the person was crazy/insane or playing some weird creepy prank on u........
BakaSmurf well seeing how many of the creepypastas look like...calling the cops would be smart, but would they believe the protagonist...would you believe someone if they told you they were being chased by some monster that looked like a faceless man, Evil imaginary clowns, or even an elf thing that come out of their technology device. Proably not...U would think the person was crazy/insane or playing some weird creepy prank on u........
"Alright, this is my project. I worked very hard on it and put all my passion in it." "Daniel. What the actual fuck have you brought into this classroom?"
I just wanna say that this has been my favorite creepypasta ever since I first listened to it. I'm not much of a fan of ".jpg/.exe" etc etc stories, but I listened to this one and it just... I dunno, I just love it. And the fact it's narrated by CreepsMcPasta just adds to my love for this one. :)
i don't know why, but i hate the "helpless, i can do nothing against a normal person death". i understand your scared, but fear of ones life is powerful motivator to fight and it wasn't like it was them against some supernatural thing, or the roommate was some hulking super athletic star.
+KekeThe UndertaleBish fight or flight.. You can't run, so your only option is to fight. hell if im going to die im not going to make it easy for them. im addicted to oxygen you see.
Once again, a story that could have easily been solved by simply calling the fucking cops and/or bringing weapons to the investigation. Also, these protagonists are even weaker-stomached than one of Lovecraft's narrators. That ending sucked.
You can't file a missing persons report until a certain amount of time has gone by, not just one day. And even then you can't really do anything legally without a warrant/actual evidence
Arviie Rats Still doesn't justify going in without airing one's concerns to the cops (seriously, the antagonist in this is BEGGING to be committed) or taking weapons and _promptly fainting when the perp steps into the room._
Xbalanque84 yea, but most antagonists in creepy pastas are some sort of undying magical monster that wouldn't be stopped by police, or they simply wouldn't believe you
I never noticed till I did today ... you really did up a clean version of this 'pasta! Examples for others being: '"W..What the f- is that thing?!"' was narrated with 'hell' instead of the F-bomb and '"I know that Daniel can be a creepy son of a b- but..that isn't right.' was 'creepy guy' instead of the former. Still ... this one, despite its lack of actuality and the sentence that turns out contradicting itself with 'standing there' and 'stood up' ... remains one that thoroughly creeped me out and still does a bit! Excellent narration and use of the music!
But in most creepypastas, the discovery is abrupt or supernatural, so it either happens too fast or the cops would think you're crazy. In this case, there's literally NO REASON WHATSOEVER not to call the cops! "My roommate is missing and I saw an image on my other roommate's laptop that made me think maybe he did something to her. If I'm wrong, great, but I'd like you to investigate." Instead, it's poorly plotted, illogical, and unbelievable, sadly. It misses all its potential because it failed to solve a basic logic problem.
Is this actually real because if it is I'm not buying it... I just re tell these to my friends who believe anything I say and it scares the crap out of them😝😂
Lily! Great job with this! I didn't expect this to be the end at all! The details are amazingly well done! Lovey narration! I'm wondering why the teeth were replaced all wonky like. I'm sure I would have fainted at the sound too. Poor girl, wonderfully done!
Because the story would be too short and boring. Plus the protagonist is portrayed as not being very intelligent. Also if the police were told that someone was being chased by a humanoid creature with no face (or any creature that the pastas seem to throw at you for that matter) they would not believe it.
+Jacob Hollis In this case, the police would be told about a missing person who had been gone for over 24 hours (the minimum time required to file a missing person's report) and given evidence of suspicion in the form of a photo, testimony from friends, and a train ticket. Furthermore, the antagonist is a normal (physically, not mentally) human male. There is nothing supernatural to irritate the police and proper procedure wouldn't be violated.
>There was no point in confronting Daniel about the photos, it would get us nowhere I'm pretty sure strapping him to a chair and threatening to break his hands and fingers so he can't practice artistry anymore would have helped immensely in your interrogation attempt. Hell if you want to be poetic, break his teeth in.
Anyone noticed that each time you end up watching a excellent creepypasta, all the other ones in the recommendation list are also great, and vice versa for when you end up on a bad one?
Theres 2 of you, one of him. You know for a fact he's entered the room and its dark as shit. Just jump his ass. Don't sit here and pretend like he's some big bad monster that you can't fight, he's just a sick person that you can easily beat his ass. I don't see how the writer thought any of this was logical. Friend is kidnapped and you're pretty damn sure you know? Lets wait a night to find her. You have proof your friend probably kidnapped her and tortured her in the form of multiple pictures? Why question it (or report it to the police) lets just pretend its not real. He sneaks into a room behind you and your friend, why fight him? Its not like the two of you could beat down some scrawny ass art nerd.
+Lottie.paris Tower (chartherockstar) and he passed out as soon as he heard his friend choking on the wax in her mouth. after all of the torture he put her through, she was still alive. That would make even the strongest man pass out
Mischievous Roze The critique. I mean, at-least he's writing what he enjoys. I couldn't see any MLP fans actually fighting someone who's threatening their life... But then again, i'm an asshole; so.
I am really responding to a 2 year old comment but here we go It wouldve still been a 1 on 1 cuz the other guy had passed out from disgust and horror already and daniel probably was about to drug him or something anyway but he just passed out from shock when he realized lily was still alive and he was probably gonna end up like that
@@fluffybum204 Huh, felt only like a year ago. Anyway, after this much time has passed I don't see a reason to dispute you. Thanks for the explanation.
+Dawid Makarewicz but the story didn't, and that's why it's great in that respect. It's normalised where it's still so common for a same-sex couple to be rammed down your throat as if it's weird or something.
Grace Bej My "point" is that there isn't that many people asking if she was gay or not. Many people can put two and two together to figure it out on their own. Also, I know gay is an umbrella term, but thanks for the blind assumption.
Okay, I'll admit, I got scared. More than scared actually. After reading this creepypasta I got incredibly sick just from the disgusting imagery. If this story wasn't so predictable and maybe if the protagonists were a bit smarter this would be one of the best creepypastas out there.
Oh no, we can't find our friend! Let's go to this weird address, we got off of a suspicious acquaintance. Let's not tell anyone where we're going, call the police, or bring weapons for protection. Also, let's not keep tabs on said suspicious person whereabouts, even though he/she could be dangerous. What could go wrong? Okay, let's go!
His fate was sealed? No no no, at that point it becomes him or you, kill or be killed, life or death scenario; plus, you have reason to desire unholy vengeance. Even if he was stupid enough to not bring a weapon, not get the police involved, not back out sooner to get help the moment the smell was detected, and not prepare an ambush when he heard the bastard entering, at the very least the line about "it was all for the sake of art" should have triggered a berserk episode.
I still can't believe that at one point in life people thought THIS was worthy of pasta of the month. The quality standards were pretty low back then,weren't they?
+sergantawesom Well you learn in Life is Strange that an art teacher is kidnapping, raping, and murdering his female students while taking pictures, which he then sells as art, and no one realizes they're of actual tortured women. Reminded me of this; the art teacher thinks he's only pursuing great art, just like David.
Schaden Freude That's because it basically is LiS. Art students, lesbians, creepy guy who uses girl for art, murder, snooping in other people's business, no one calls the police for really arbitrary flimsy reasons, etc.
Heh, the lesbian is named "Lily". Classic. The biggest, most obvious problem was me yelling "call the damn cops" in my head from when they first discover that their roommate was missing. But, as weird as it sounds, even in real life people don't get the police involved even though they should. Something that should have been written differently was how much time they took, waiting until after classes and then waiting to the next day to do anything. They also found his creepy art basement too easily. That aside, this was a pretty good one. Did a good job building up tension and describing the horrifying imagery.
the thing about this story is that it is a lot more grounded than most. as the story goes on it brought on actual horror. it feels like this is the kind of thing that some lunatic could do. it feels like the story could integrate into our reality fairly seamlessly. I like it XD
This is seriously my new favorite channel. I listen to these before I sleep. It is a nice way to relax. I think it is the tone of the narrators voice. About to listen to this one. I see one of the character's name is Lily.
...I could hear Lily choking. I was frozen in place, trembling, i hoped deeply that it was just a dream or rather a nightmare. I wanted to survive but i deeply longed to just past out so i wont have to perceive such fearful sights and emotions. Whilst all of that, Daniel stood there, staring with a toothy grin, it seems like he was planning what he'll make of me, what he'll make of us. I wanted to run, I wanted to live, but to be honest, i also just want for this to end. This, this is the moment of my death. I clenched my teeth and used my remaining strength to keep my legs from faltering, waiting for my turn to be turned into a horrible disfigured copy of myself, but just as the last pint of hope in me was about to disintegrate i heard it. Lily's whisper. "L-li...ve..., pl... e.. ase." Taken aback, i paused. This made me think. Daniel never comes out, he's basically a shut-in art nerd. I looked up at him, he, who was now placing gloves at his hands at a leisurely pace, have a small frame. No existing muscles nor rock hard chest, no abs, no biceps, none, nothing. A sudden thought came into mind, im stronger than him. I looked over at Josh, he was out like a light. Me and him almost have the same body structure. I deliberately studied how i could somehow carry Josh then bolt out from the point where im standing to the door and then pull out the piece of wood blocking our path. I have precisely a 40.14.7755.3 % chance of successfully leaving this place without having our bodies be horrifically altered. Daniel, at a slow pace, made his way to where were at. I gotta fight, for myself, for my friends, for Lily. Thats right. Come here Daniel, just a little bit more closer. (Sorry, i wanted them to survive, atleast Josh and the other dude. Sorry Lily, i dont think you have any chance of survival. They had to fight back right? . Anyway i got tired of continuing... Anyone wanna take it from here?)
I use the karate techniques i learned from 4th grade and kick him in the stomach. He hunches over in pain grabbing his tummy. I then knee him in the face and push him on the floor. I jump on him, pinning his arms to the floor so he cant fight back. He try’s to kick me but i dont move. “This is for lilly!” I yell, punching him in the face.“This is for making me miss my classes!” Another punch. “And this is for being an overall asshole! DAM YOU DANIEL!” I then give him the most powerful punch i could muster, probably breaking his nose, and making him go limp. I make sure hes knocked out and take any weapons he has. I then get up, panting, and go over to Josh. Hes ok and starting to come to. Finally i grab my phone dialing 911
But then he somehow got up and broke my phone. Then I whistled, and Godzilla came from the ground and shot lava at Daniel, but he inhaled it, and then swallowed it and gained a lava shield. Then he yelled "JOJ", and Megatron came from the sky. Godzilla took a shit out of fear, and Mr. Hankee came to fight too. The three of them fought, while Daniel disintegrated into a puddle of Mountain Dew. Then, from nowhere, an army of bronies marched their way towards Godzilla, knocked him over, and tied him up. But then, Roger Rabbit came with a BIG ASS pair of scissors, and cut off all of the bronies' dicks. They made a battlecry of defeat, and in doing so, Hamburger Helper came and made some stroganoff out of the blood of the bronies. And when he did, he poured it into Megatron, and Megatron had an acid trip, and while he was under the effects, he smacked the shit out Mr. Hankee and Roger Rabbit. So they fled, and Hamburger Helper was about to cook Godzilla's toe, but then the Power Rangers came and stopped him. Then the Power Rangers summoned Satan, and then Satan licked up the Mountain Dew, and then he went back to hell. I made a thumbs up at Godzilla, and he tried to make one back, but he was tied up. Then the Power Rangers loosened the ropes, and Godzilla got free, and went back to his home. But then.....
I fell asleep listening to this, and at the end I sort of heard it. I had a dream about my friends being kidnapped, and this happening to my friend Lilly. I almost died.
Brilliant story. I want to know what happened next. Did the guys get away? Did Lilly survive? Was Daniel arrested? It's not fair on us listeners to leave us with a cliffhanger like that...
I can't believe the author made an entire creepy pasta dedicated to how much he hates mildly eccentric art. It'd be impressive if it weren't so try hard. Also, amazing that this pasta had exactly one major female character and she was the victim. I know we've established that the author despises innovative art, but man some writers are predictable.
TACnumb Not to mention the girlfriend got the "help me" text a couple of hours after the timestamp on David's ticket. Unless he brought her phone back with him for some reason. And just the "help me" text in general- if she could use the phone, why didn't she try to contact the police?
The real scary thing about this pasta is that the guy saved his art final as a fucking jpg
That’s actually the most psychopathic thing Daniel did.
In what kind of format would an expert photographer save it then?
@@sinisternightmare .png, .tif, .tga or any format that doesn't create compression artifacts.
My family is offended.
Don't you tHinK I kNOw wwWhHHAt aAH JeYPEGG iSSVRHSDUTBTHZHDBBTJDJDBD
1. Why not call the police? 2. Bring a weapon with you ffs 3. if you Heard him entering the room, you could hide and smack his face in! Does this guy not want to live at all?????
+Joelle cooper exactly what I think in almost all creepy pastas.
well it's still a good story either way though
Because it's a creepypasta, The protagonist is Bound to be an idiot.
Albin Ekström 1. they cant call police because the have no proof he did anything wrong. 2. the are in a collage. 3.slap8ng some in thale face is not going tp do shit. are stupid
stupid thumbs
yea no need to call the police just go and investigate on your own
Your own was actually correct ;p.
Fizyk i know.. 😂
Frank Lewis "oh shit if i do this 10000% imma die... LETS GO INVESTIGATE BY MYSELF WITH.
Grammar nazi much?
yep
He got the bad ending
Go back to page 42 and try again.
Shaun Gruver 💀
Yeah, when you don’t call the cops that tends to happen
He forgot to do the "Call the Cops" side quest.
@Heyward Shepherd Why? Makes sense to me.
Do the police not exist in creepypasta?!
FUCK THE POLICE!!!!!STRAIGHT OUTTA COMPTON NIGGA!!!
Ftp bro.....
No, if there's police involved. It's not a real creepypasta!
No
Police nope-d out. Apparently cops are pussies, now. °×°
This story was a molar coaster.
Lol
hueheueheueheheu
+Faverelli *claps* you sir deserve a medal
Faverelli hyfeiujhfbawt9iugnh7ytgwhtuijerg8yv476yhjui9hfgr6QHNWTUI9JH7 oops i was laughing soo hard i dropped my keyboard
+Faverelli hardy-har-har...
If he's saving his "great masterpiece" as a .jpg then you /know/ that kid's not thinking right
You have to use underscores to make things italicised, _like this_
_ these
_know_
_i gotta try_
wait so im just trying this out _hmm_
In his place, I really don't think I would have just stood there agape when Daniel came into the room, I'd be more intent on ending his miserable life fueled by a berserker rage induced by the disturbing things that were done to Lily. I mean, it's not like Daniel's Slenderman, and there's no hope to fight him, he's just your average human psychopathic artist.
+Revanth Vaughn lol and he brought a friend with him, so even if the artist had those dental tools with him it wasn't like he could of taken them both. But instead his friend passes out and this guy is all 'yup... must mean i have to die now'. He becomes all sad and depressed when any normal person would of snapped and mutilated that artist.
I would have done the same thing to him that he did to lily
Probably frozen with fear
Λus my mans you need help
Even if he had weapons (Daniel) I mean, most people would've had an adrenaline rush from fear or anger by that moment. Knives would be some what ineffective during that moment. Kind of
Lily.exe has encountered an error and must restart.
dammit not again
Error can not load restarting
+Sans SAAAAAAAANS
KayLeigh Bennett HHHHIIIIIIIIIIII
Wow, so funny...
I have mixed feelings about this creepypasta.
Part of me loves it, and genuinely finds it horrifying, while the other part of me thinks it’s stupid and senseless.
It was one of the first to make me feel sick and disgusted from what I was reading, the twist at the end that she was still alive despite everything really burned the story into my mind for multiple following days.
Then there’s the manlet MCs literally just giving up for no reason. Like damn, all of that and you ain’t even gonna avenge the damn girl? By far one of the most memorable creepypastas I’ve read.
Yeah the main character just giving up like that was disappointing.
My problem with the MC started at the beginning of the story when they acted all high and mighty about their idea of art versus other people’s. The rest of it just made me like the character less and less lol.
Also the person who wrote this clearly doesn’t know that “fine art” and “modern/contemporary art” are not necessarily the same thing.
Still a really good creepy story, overall, but I just had a hard time getting past the attitude problems that the MC has and the fact that the way the beginning was written made them seem like they thought they were better than their classmates just because the classmates’ art wasn’t their style. Remind me never to go near an art school if that’s what people who attend them are like.
Why do Creepypasta writers think that file extensions are the scariest thing ever? It's like "Spongebob," no, that's not very scary, but "SPONGEBOG.DLL" JESUS CHRIST THAT'S TERRIFYING!
Mr. Stretch first thing I noticed was spongebog lol spongebog.dll
@@Christianyaboy6 spongebong hemppants
@@HitTheFloor16 Oh hey I remember that version of SpongeBob! Smoked weed all day and stuff.
You know if something is called .jpg, something's gonna be f***ed up
+tangjord Uh, he didn't say anything about applications. If you've seen any gore porn creepypastas, most of the "evidence" is pictures. Calm down buddy.
+tangjord he's probably being sarcastic man, don't take it up the ass
+tangjord I was talking about creepypasta names... Sorry, I should've specified
+tangjord And I've taken many classes and I'm pretty good with a computer... I know just because a file is .jpg or.exe doesn't mean it's cursed. Anyone with common sense knows that. But again, sorry for the confusion.
+tangjord Besides, you don't have to get so butthurt about it
6:45 "Curiosity got the better of me,"
You done fucked up son.
hi boiiii
Damnnn Daniel, back at it again with the sick fetish
Hose No
Hose stop
literally crying lmao
Shit Simon!!!! Do I get to go on Ellen now?
you are me
1) Why did they not call the cops? You have a disappearance, and reasonable evidence this guy is involved. Don't try to be "an hero", call the cops.
2) You're two grown men. Daniel is one grown man. It's two vs one. Why just resign to your fate? Kick his ass!
Horror logic: All protagonist must be stupid and easy to scare.
Yes but the police might not have found lily so they needed more evidence and also after seeing lily....distorted they were feeling sick and they were in shock
I know it's petty, but where have you ever heard "an hero?" If the next word starts with a vowel, it's an, if it's a consonant, it's a. A hero. Or, even better in this context, the hero.
@@solarpellets Why don't you Google "an hero" and get back to me. It'll all become clear.
Oh, by the way, how's your Dutch? As good as my English? I'd hope so!
@@MentalParadox in that case you should use a hyphen "an-hero," and I'm not trying to be like that. I just think that even in helping one person I can make everyone's communication that much better. Precise communication matters.
This is a wonderful story. One of the favorites I've heard you read. Great job!
in the terms of imagination it is brilliant. but saying it is a great story would be a lie, this is so messed up on so many levels
+Fabien Sinclair-Page like deep web commonly found fucked up?
I don't understand how someone has this in their mind
Man I love messed up stories. Regular creepy pastas don't do it for me anymore. I love these kind of pastas.
TH-cam Inc There's 2 kind of people who enjoy these stories. Me, and that guy. (no offense to that villain guy tho)
why do people never call the police in these stories? like damn
rederratic Well, that would require the protagonist actually demonstrate some degree of intelligence, and as we all know most Creepypasta writers aren't competent enough to convincingly write an intelligent protagonist while also having them super shockingly die in a mega Shyamalanian-twist ending that nobody could have possibly seen coming under any circumstances.
But seriously, that ending was shit. Creeps' voice is still sex made manifest though, so thumbs up regardless.
It wouldn't be as creepy
Because they're blondes
rederratic well seeing how many of the creepypastas look like...calling the cops would be smart, but would they believe the protagonist...would you believe someone if they told you they were being chased by some monster that looked like a faceless man, Evil imaginary clowns, or even an elf thing that come out of their technology device. Proably not...U would think the person was crazy/insane or playing some weird creepy prank on u........
BakaSmurf well seeing how many of the creepypastas look like...calling the cops would be smart, but would they believe the protagonist...would you believe someone if they told you they were being chased by some monster that looked like a faceless man, Evil imaginary clowns, or even an elf thing that come out of their technology device. Proably not...U would think the person was crazy/insane or playing some weird creepy prank on u........
SO LILLY WAS STILL ALIVE AFTER ALL OF THAT
Dark ReaperGames1 THATS WHAT I WANNA KNOW!!!😲
How the fuck is she alive though?????
Well, I guess he never did much damage to her major organs... except her EYES GAHGGHGAH
Dark ReaperGames1 She could have died from blood lose, since her arm was chopped off.
BlossomCherryTree but he replaced it remember
I'm sure the teachers will love Danny's latest project!
i bet he got that A+
"Alright, this is my project. I worked very hard on it and put all my passion in it."
"Daniel. What the actual fuck have you brought into this classroom?"
Yea, especially m.r. Lecter and the local butcher leatherface
This pasta is a great example of how far the channel went in last 5 years
What do you mean, out of curiosity?
Art school got me like...
Like how?
+Mauricio Calderon ._____________________.
Run...
BackStageCrafter sanic boom
marjazzmiaomi miko Like, literally?
Poor Lily :(
XsparxLY you should watch it tho
Fuck her that bitch.
jeez you commenters in this thread are such trolling jerks and I love it 😂
Please. Don't call anyone that. I'm serious.
White Eagle You're very mean!
I just wanna say that this has been my favorite creepypasta ever since I first listened to it. I'm not much of a fan of ".jpg/.exe" etc etc stories, but I listened to this one and it just... I dunno, I just love it. And the fact it's narrated by CreepsMcPasta just adds to my love for this one. :)
i don't know why, but i hate the "helpless, i can do nothing against a normal person death". i understand your scared, but fear of ones life is powerful motivator to fight and it wasn't like it was them against some supernatural thing, or the roommate was some hulking super athletic star.
+KekeThe UndertaleBish fight or flight.. You can't run, so your only option is to fight. hell if im going to die im not going to make it easy for them.
im addicted to oxygen you see.
+KekeThe UndertaleBish yeah, survival instincts are crazy powerful motivators, even if death is imminent, they'll still try to find a way to survive.
am I the only one who got so lost in the story and the lighting getting darker, then brighter in the photo thing?
anal
TheGameAngel seven
+Crazy Pikachu lemonade
Mimic Master llama
+Crazy Pikachu Michael Kors
DAAAAMN DANIEL BACK AT IT AGAIN WITH THE FINE ART
I can't believe how badly damn daniel has aged 😂
As an art student I can confirm that due to the harsh exam boards we now have to resort to this to get good marks.
This is one of the best.
One of the best pasta endings ever. Made me feel a little ill tbh.
hi cz :)
Oh crap hi
idc if this is from 8 years ago
ME WHEN I FUCKING LIE?????
Once again, a story that could have easily been solved by simply calling the fucking cops and/or bringing weapons to the investigation. Also, these protagonists are even weaker-stomached than one of Lovecraft's narrators.
That ending sucked.
I agree, like what the fuck, they both just passed out? What happened to any sense of a survival instinct??????
You can't file a missing persons report until a certain amount of time has gone by, not just one day. And even then you can't really do anything legally without a warrant/actual evidence
Arviie Rats Still doesn't justify going in without airing one's concerns to the cops (seriously, the antagonist in this is BEGGING to be committed) or taking weapons and _promptly fainting when the perp steps into the room._
Xbalanque84 yea, but most antagonists in creepy pastas are some sort of undying magical monster that wouldn't be stopped by police, or they simply wouldn't believe you
That end was perfect, the two average soy boys get beat over because that is supposed to happen even if the antagonist is a soyboy too 😊😉
this weirded me the hell out, because my name is Lily, I'm gay, and I'm an artist...
saME except my name isn't lily lmfao
BISH RUN
Lily McLaughlin run!!!!!
Lily McLaughlin do you have a brother called daltin?
call everwone you need protection8oi get sherreedddddd
I never noticed till I did today ... you really did up a clean version of this 'pasta! Examples for others being: '"W..What the f- is that thing?!"' was narrated with 'hell' instead of the F-bomb and '"I know that Daniel can be a creepy son of a b- but..that isn't right.' was 'creepy guy' instead of the former.
Still ... this one, despite its lack of actuality and the sentence that turns out contradicting itself with 'standing there' and 'stood up' ... remains one that thoroughly creeped me out and still does a bit! Excellent narration and use of the music!
Call the flippin police you geniouses!
But in most creepypastas, the discovery is abrupt or supernatural, so it either happens too fast or the cops would think you're crazy. In this case, there's literally NO REASON WHATSOEVER not to call the cops! "My roommate is missing and I saw an image on my other roommate's laptop that made me think maybe he did something to her. If I'm wrong, great, but I'd like you to investigate." Instead, it's poorly plotted, illogical, and unbelievable, sadly. It misses all its potential because it failed to solve a basic logic problem.
Is this actually real because if it is I'm not buying it... I just re tell these to my friends who believe anything I say and it scares the crap out of them😝😂
PuppyPower2661. Creepypasta are just stories. Im sure most all of them are works of fiction.
Dawn Stone keyword most.
Spoopy
Wiggleskitten. Lol. Okay let's hope this one was.
.....
......
.......
Smoopy.
This is by far my new-found favorite pasta, thanks to your reading of course. You never do disappoint me, Creeps!
This is my favorite creepypasta you've told so far
The only creepy part about this story was how pathetic and spineless the two MC's were.
They were smart enough to do detective work but not smart enough to arm themselves in these kind of situations
two against one and yet they just puke before passing out. Weak males
They’re art majors, what did you expect?
@HelloHow UDoing how is being a horror fan mean anything
daaamn daniel back at it again with the teeth pics
+Comic High Sans MS Damn you I was thinking that
ayy
+Comic High Sans MS Fuck, I wanted to say that!
dont worry, u still can m8 :>
ROTFLMAO
Hmh. "Artists".
If you go somewhere like that at night, you don't bring a fucking pencil and paper. You bring a crowbar.
this comment made my day. XD
"You bring a crowbar."
And the goddamn police
***** more like send in nuke
+Hailey Hurst fuck the police, no justice no peace
***** How about you bring a few extra friends that aren't going to pass out, afew guns, and a phone just incase you need to call in a SWAT team
obviously he didn't die because he was around to tell the story.
Meøwth lol it’s a creepypasta it’s not real or a true story
Lily! Great job with this! I didn't expect this to be the end at all! The details are amazingly well done! Lovey narration! I'm wondering why the teeth were replaced all wonky like. I'm sure I would have fainted at the sound too. Poor girl, wonderfully done!
why the hell do I watch this stuff before bed!!! D:
Lol rip kid
Why didn't they call the police at any part of this?!?!
cuz people are to stupid to just call the police and have some people that can actually help. and for the sake of the story...
My thought exactly 😔
I think it would help the story. Be like... a trail of teeth that goes back to the vacation where the cray cray got worst. Police files of teeth...
Because the story would be too short and boring. Plus the protagonist is portrayed as not being very intelligent. Also if the police were told that someone was being chased by a humanoid creature with no face (or any creature that the pastas seem to throw at you for that matter) they would not believe it.
+Jacob Hollis In this case, the police would be told about a missing person who had been gone for over 24 hours (the minimum time required to file a missing person's report) and given evidence of suspicion in the form of a photo, testimony from friends, and a train ticket.
Furthermore, the antagonist is a normal (physically, not mentally) human male. There is nothing supernatural to irritate the police and proper procedure wouldn't be violated.
"I've never been to fond of anyone at my school"
Oh oh same *m8*
>There was no point in confronting Daniel about the photos, it would get us nowhere
I'm pretty sure strapping him to a chair and threatening to break his hands and fingers so he can't practice artistry anymore would have helped immensely in your interrogation attempt. Hell if you want to be poetic, break his teeth in.
Seems Art-students are not the brightest humans.
Thanks, it´s hard work to look with every eye in another direction, u know.
Do i squint, or have you posted four times the same text?
Well, creepypasta is no pron, but I think you speak out of experience ;D
Of course, "devil boy" ;D
Nah, but seems my first comment rushed your ass that high, even a doctor can´t fix it, sorry to break it to you, but you seem butthurt ;D
I cringed at you guys
Anyone noticed that each time you end up watching a excellent creepypasta, all the other ones in the recommendation list are also great, and vice versa for when you end up on a bad one?
When you upload a vid it always makes me feel good, I'm always in the mood to watch your vids :)Keep up the great work !
Theres 2 of you, one of him. You know for a fact he's entered the room and its dark as shit. Just jump his ass.
Don't sit here and pretend like he's some big bad monster that you can't fight, he's just a sick person that you can easily beat his ass.
I don't see how the writer thought any of this was logical.
Friend is kidnapped and you're pretty damn sure you know? Lets wait a night to find her.
You have proof your friend probably kidnapped her and tortured her in the form of multiple pictures? Why question it (or report it to the police) lets just pretend its not real.
He sneaks into a room behind you and your friend, why fight him? Its not like the two of you could beat down some scrawny ass art nerd.
Josh was on the floor knocked out
+Lottie.paris Tower (chartherockstar) and he passed out as soon as he heard his friend choking on the wax in her mouth. after all of the torture he put her through, she was still alive. That would make even the strongest man pass out
+Jordy Zhao still it's stupid, author write it like the main character was just going to lay down on the table for him I he asked
His life depends on making horror stories D: keep calm m8s
Mischievous Roze The critique. I mean, at-least he's writing what he enjoys.
I couldn't see any MLP fans actually fighting someone who's threatening their life... But then again, i'm an asshole; so.
The awkward moment when you fall asleep while listening to this.
So what happened to Lily?
She died, and it turned out that the creature in the teeth.jpg image was her.
She. Did a big oof
Nah she wasn’t dead yet
Damn, Daniel!! Back at it again playing with teeth!! **Vomits
- MEGA OVERLODE VOMITS -
Normally creepypastas dont scare me, but this, this scared the shit outta me
Mona Lisa yeah most times not this many people you know we'll die in the story most times it's just 1
*pulls out jpg* hmm I should really call the cops instead...
Brett Meyer Exactly! Why didn't he calls the cops?
+Christopher Stark To be fair, a picture like that isn't proof of a crime. When they first saw it, neither of them thought it was human.
True that, but there was a girl who went missing ffs!
Either way, it was a good story, so whatever really.
something scary.
I've seen your comments 6 times on different vids 0_0
People need to stop saying 'X will haunt me forever' in these things. Less hyperbole, more imagery.
I was completely with this up until the end when the two - two - guys did nothing against the one.
Disappointing.
I am really responding to a 2 year old comment but here we go
It wouldve still been a 1 on 1 cuz the other guy had passed out from disgust and horror already and daniel probably was about to drug him or something anyway but he just passed out from shock when he realized lily was still alive and he was probably gonna end up like that
@@fluffybum204 Oh shit this was really two years ago?
@@iamNOTaronpurschemorales1966 according to youtube time yea
@@fluffybum204 Huh, felt only like a year ago. Anyway, after this much time has passed I don't see a reason to dispute you. Thanks for the explanation.
@@iamNOTaronpurschemorales1966 lol i am judt surpised you responded
Why didn't they contact the police or file a missing person report?
because people are stupid?
Gha I swear I was yelling that the whole time too lol
If Daniel found out about them alerting the police he might have captured them and done the same.
Everything will be traced back to him in an investigation.
Brilliant! Brilliant story and brilliant reading! It's been a while since I got such chills from one of these!
Lesbian couple in a creepypasta?? yeeeeeaaaahhhh!!!! lmao :3
YAY no homophobia in creepypasta now im just waiting for a male/male couple creepypasta
+Michel Ruse The new fnaf If I ever write one, a male/male couple will be in it.
+Michel Ruse I'm waiting for the same thing!!!
Yeah, sex is not important, wright? And yet you had to mark the fact of same-sex couple
+Dawid Makarewicz but the story didn't, and that's why it's great in that respect. It's normalised where it's still so common for a same-sex couple to be rammed down your throat as if it's weird or something.
Daaaaamn Daniel.
Back at it again with the Creepypastas.
Damn Daniel back at it again with the awesome art work
Damn Daniel back at it again with your creepy ass shit bro.
+Ben Grainger What?
Serjo777
You haven't been keeping up with the memes.
These kids had so much evidence to convince some police officers. SO MUCH.
Jesus. I scrolled down the comments and all I see is "omg is lily gay?!"
It's 2015. She has a girlfriend, it's not a big deal. Chill people
I only saw one asking if she was gay. The rest were people bluntly throwing around "lesbian(s)!"
Gay is commonly used as and umbrella term for lesbians. I don't see your point
Grace Bej My "point" is that there isn't that many people asking if she was gay or not. Many people can put two and two together to figure it out on their own. Also, I know gay is an umbrella term, but thanks for the blind assumption.
Hey, no need to be rude. I was just confused.
I stick to my first point though, that it doesn't matter if she's gay or not
Asking if she's gay doesn't mean they're being rude. They're just curious, it's not a crime to be curious.
I love how in every creepypasta, the comments prevent you from having nightmares
"I realized it was her girlfriend that was calling, I recognize the HUSKY voice" LMAOOOO XD
This has got to be one of my all time favorites!
Ike Bran why
What a hardcore artist!
Okay, I'll admit, I got scared. More than scared actually. After reading this creepypasta I got incredibly sick just from the disgusting imagery. If this story wasn't so predictable and maybe if the protagonists were a bit smarter this would be one of the best creepypastas out there.
Damn..that bites.alright, that was a bit of a stretch.
Ellen Mcguinness HA! I FINALLY BEAT ELL- DAMN IT!
+UnknownRevenge2XD /Destiny Rose I'm back in action, yo. I'm pun-stoppable.
Ellen Mcguinness You must eat alot of PUN-cakes for breakfast! o:
Ellen Mcguinness That sets my teeth on edge.
+Ellen Mcguinness Now you show yourself.
your the best..this is a great story
and your app is good too
Thank you!
You have a poor taste in scary stories...
What if Lilly jumped off her counter and exclaimed her homosexuality?
This one is probably the best I've heard from you Creeps... seriously made me get chills at the end.
Oh no, we can't find our friend! Let's go to this weird address, we got off of a suspicious acquaintance. Let's not tell anyone where we're going, call the police, or bring weapons for protection. Also, let's not keep tabs on said suspicious person whereabouts, even though he/she could be dangerous. What could go wrong? Okay, let's go!
His fate was sealed? No no no, at that point it becomes him or you, kill or be killed, life or death scenario; plus, you have reason to desire unholy vengeance. Even if he was stupid enough to not bring a weapon, not get the police involved, not back out sooner to get help the moment the smell was detected, and not prepare an ambush when he heard the bastard entering, at the very least the line about "it was all for the sake of art" should have triggered a berserk episode.
Introducing smilie dogs twice removed cousin!
I still can't believe that at one point in life people thought THIS was worthy of pasta of the month. The quality standards were pretty low back then,weren't they?
Chilling story. Fantastic job as always, Creeps! Props to the author!
This reminds me a lot of Life is Strange.
In the way of david his thinking never trust art people
+sergantawesom Well you learn in Life is Strange that an art teacher is kidnapping, raping, and murdering his female students while taking pictures, which he then sells as art, and no one realizes they're of actual tortured women. Reminded me of this; the art teacher thinks he's only pursuing great art, just like David.
you know I reffered to stepdouche and not daniel of the story
Schaden Freude That's because it basically is LiS. Art students, lesbians, creepy guy who uses girl for art, murder, snooping in other people's business, no one calls the police for really arbitrary flimsy reasons, etc.
I know what u mean, nathan=daniel, lilly=racheal, the art and the basement
LEEEESSSSSBBBBIIIIAAAAANNNNSSSSS
***** THYRE THE BEST
+Pepe the Frog WOOOOOO!!!!! EHQUALETEH!!!!!! :)
Wojack approved.
Nick Ley fuck off?
No I'm allowed to have my opinion
Heh, the lesbian is named "Lily". Classic.
The biggest, most obvious problem was me yelling "call the damn cops" in my head from when they first discover that their roommate was missing. But, as weird as it sounds, even in real life people don't get the police involved even though they should.
Something that should have been written differently was how much time they took, waiting until after classes and then waiting to the next day to do anything. They also found his creepy art basement too easily.
That aside, this was a pretty good one. Did a good job building up tension and describing the horrifying imagery.
Or both collapsing for no reason at the end
this was an amazing story. Listened to it while taking notes for chemistry! Keep up the amazingly creepy work my friend!!🖤🖤
the thing about this story is that it is a lot more grounded than most. as the story goes on it brought on actual horror. it feels like this is the kind of thing that some lunatic could do. it feels like the story could integrate into our reality fairly seamlessly. I like it XD
Thankfully you keep posting as i listen to these all day and night and my boyfriend loves these after introducing it to him 💝💝 please keep it up
Why .jpg? Wouldn't a raw format be better for editing? That is about the only thing that really bothers me about this creepypasta.
S3nsless Sadboi he'd not editing it. there's a clear connection that the picture is Lily.
Hate the ending
+Levi Ackerman Gladly
It's so predictable!
I actually like this story. It has a rather lovely ending…
Levi heichou!! Didn't know the clean freak watched creepypasta xD
There's multiple Levi's :O. Apparently creepypasta attracts Levi's.
This is seriously my new favorite channel. I listen to these before I sleep. It is a nice way to relax. I think it is the tone of the narrators voice. About to listen to this one. I see one of the character's name is Lily.
Damn Daniel back at it again with the creepy art projects
...I could hear Lily choking. I was frozen in place, trembling, i hoped deeply that it was just a dream or rather a nightmare. I wanted to survive but i deeply longed to just past out so i wont have to perceive such fearful sights and emotions. Whilst all of that, Daniel stood there, staring with a toothy grin, it seems like he was planning what he'll make of me, what he'll make of us. I wanted to run, I wanted to live, but to be honest, i also just want for this to end. This, this is the moment of my death. I clenched my teeth and used my remaining strength to keep my legs from faltering, waiting for my turn to be turned into a horrible disfigured copy of myself, but just as the last pint of hope in me was about to disintegrate i heard it. Lily's whisper.
"L-li...ve..., pl... e.. ase."
Taken aback, i paused. This made me think. Daniel never comes out, he's basically a shut-in art nerd. I looked up at him, he, who was now placing gloves at his hands at a leisurely pace, have a small frame. No existing muscles nor rock hard chest, no abs, no biceps, none, nothing. A sudden thought came into mind, im stronger than him. I looked over at Josh, he was out like a light. Me and him almost have the same body structure. I deliberately studied how i could somehow carry Josh then bolt out from the point where im standing to the door and then pull out the piece of wood blocking our path. I have precisely a 40.14.7755.3 % chance of successfully leaving this place without having our bodies be horrifically altered. Daniel, at a slow pace, made his way to where were at. I gotta fight, for myself, for my friends, for Lily. Thats right. Come here Daniel, just a little bit more closer.
(Sorry, i wanted them to survive, atleast Josh and the other dude. Sorry Lily, i dont think you have any chance of survival. They had to fight back right? . Anyway i got tired of continuing... Anyone wanna take it from here?)
I use the karate techniques i learned from 4th grade and kick him in the stomach. He hunches over in pain grabbing his tummy. I then knee him in the face and push him on the floor. I jump on him, pinning his arms to the floor so he cant fight back. He try’s to kick me but i dont move. “This is for lilly!” I yell, punching him in the face.“This is for making me miss my classes!” Another punch. “And this is for being an overall asshole! DAM YOU DANIEL!” I then give him the most powerful punch i could muster, probably breaking his nose, and making him go limp. I make sure hes knocked out and take any weapons he has. I then get up, panting, and go over to Josh. Hes ok and starting to come to. Finally i grab my phone dialing 911
But then he somehow got up and broke my phone. Then I whistled, and Godzilla came from the ground and shot lava at Daniel, but he inhaled it, and then swallowed it and gained a lava shield. Then he yelled "JOJ", and Megatron came from the sky. Godzilla took a shit out of fear, and Mr. Hankee came to fight too. The three of them fought, while Daniel disintegrated into a puddle of Mountain Dew. Then, from nowhere, an army of bronies marched their way towards Godzilla, knocked him over, and tied him up. But then, Roger Rabbit came with a BIG ASS pair of scissors, and cut off all of the bronies' dicks. They made a battlecry of defeat, and in doing so, Hamburger Helper came and made some stroganoff out of the blood of the bronies. And when he did, he poured it into Megatron, and Megatron had an acid trip, and while he was under the effects, he smacked the shit out Mr. Hankee and Roger Rabbit. So they fled, and Hamburger Helper was about to cook Godzilla's toe, but then the Power Rangers came and stopped him. Then the Power Rangers summoned Satan, and then Satan licked up the Mountain Dew, and then he went back to hell. I made a thumbs up at Godzilla, and he tried to make one back, but he was tied up. Then the Power Rangers loosened the ropes, and Godzilla got free, and went back to his home. But then.....
Gilles Touré Everyone died, the end
@@Davidpostingshid You forgot the "Rocks Fall..." part.
Wish this was part of the story
I kinda like how you never show the picture. Makes the listener's imagination run wild.
Jonathan Sefcik The thumbnail of the video.
"And I knew that he was there and that there was no way out.. so that's when I pulled out my AK-47"
that was *AMAZING!!!!!*
Was on edge the whole time and the ending oml
Great job bro. This is the best creepy pasta I've ever heard
I love your voice
Yes I agree his voice is great for these kinds of stories
Thanks bro!
you here haha
you here haha
Woody!
Josh : I did a normal thing!
Lilly : Same!
Daniel: I got to touch teeth and be a creepo! So cool!!
DANG IT DANIEL!!! EVERY TIME!!!
I fell asleep listening to this, and at the end I sort of heard it. I had a dream about my friends being kidnapped, and this happening to my friend Lilly. I almost died.
this story is my favorite and i find myself coming back every month or so
Brilliant story. I want to know what happened next. Did the guys get away? Did Lilly survive? Was Daniel arrested? It's not fair on us listeners to leave us with a cliffhanger like that...
>Teeth.jpeg
>Title shows it as jpg
I'm triggered
I can't believe the author made an entire creepy pasta dedicated to how much he hates mildly eccentric art. It'd be impressive if it weren't so try hard.
Also, amazing that this pasta had exactly one major female character and she was the victim. I know we've established that the author despises innovative art, but man some writers are predictable.
Wait? He found the JPEG before the artist got back from messing with Lilly? Right?
Yep, that's how it seemed to me
Yeah... Plot holes you can fly a plane through
Hey, it was still scary tho lol
TACnumb Not to mention the girlfriend got the "help me" text a couple of hours after the timestamp on David's ticket. Unless he brought her phone back with him for some reason.
And just the "help me" text in general- if she could use the phone, why didn't she try to contact the police?
+Ida Owens If Daniel is next to her she would need to be quiet, she can't talk or Daniel would get suspicious.
It had its share of flaws, but dang, this story was a scary delight. One of the creepier ones I've heard. Very nice.
When the dentist wants too see your toothache