I thought the shadow was a dark forest cat and now I feel bad cause it was Hollyleaf....
Aaw poor hollyleaf, she saved them but nobody even thanks her for that, they only think she's a monster...
Typical, unfortunately. Hollyleaf had a tragic life... Too bad. She was a badass. :/
Good job Lionblaze, you hurt Hollyleaf's feelings
So did ivykit and dovekit,
What went through dovekit and Ivykits head when they saw the shadow:
Dovekit: OMG I almost died!
Ivykit:*GASP* the shadow!
Dovekit: *GASP*
Ivykit: RUN AWAY FROM THE SHADOW WHO ISNT BAD CAUSE IT JUST SAVED YOU BUT WE ARE GOING TO BE RUDE AND RUNAWAY AND SCREAM IN HORROR ANYWAY!! 😱😱
So this is a great way to make some cat feel appreciated 😄😅👍🏻
And yes they can read each other's minds.
@@HonkaBonka Ashfur attempts murder on 4 cats and apparently he's justified for being "broken hearted", Hollyleaf kills one cat, the cat who attempted to murder 4 cats, and apparently she's a monster. 🤔
*sees that Hollyleaf was the shadow*
...
Why-
I'm not crying
No u-
*dives into the river and cries-*
@@frostysart2274 also they give hates Leafpool, and doesn't care about her, also Bluestar
*Dovewing listened to Lionblaze's battle plan. They were preparing for the Great Battle. "Imagine... the warriors of StarClan and the Dark Forest will set foot in the territories." Dovewing suppressed a purr. She remembered, long ago, when she and Ivypool had seen StarClan dancing on the lake one winter. This wouldn't be the first time StarClan was in Clan territory. Dovewing remembered the frosty white, sparking cats she and her sister had seen. They had weaved among each other, pouncing and sliding and racing arcoss the ice. But then.. the ice had cracked. Dovewing remembered trying to save Ivykit and falling in instead. A black figure with green eyes had saved her. She never saw the shadow again, but ever now and then she was reminded of it by... "Hollyleaf!" Jayfeather and Lionblaze turned to her with confused expressions. "Hollyleaf what?" Lionblaze asked, but Dovewing had already raced across the camp to the warriors' den. Hollyleaf was sitting up and washing. Dovewing crept forward. "Hollyleaf? Can I ask you something?" Hollyleaf gave her a friendly blink. "Sure" Dovewing hesitated, before beginning, "Um... was it you who saved me that one night when I fell in the lake as a kit?" Hollyleaf looked surpised and thought for a moment, before replying with a simple "yes". Dovewing blinked gratefully as she meowed, "Thank you so much. You saved my life!" She heard rustling behind her and realized Jayfeather and Lionblaze had followed her. Jayfeather had a certain expression in his eyes, as if something had just dawned on him. "Hollyleaf... if you hadn't saved Dovewing, the prophecy wouldn't have been fullfilled because she's the third cat." Dovewing thanked Hollyleaf again, as she realized her rescuer had basically saved all the Clans. Hollyleaf smiled. "No problem."*
(I haven't read Omen of the Stars for a while, so I don't exactly know Hollyleaf's attitude towards Dovewing or how soon she came back before the battle. I just felt like writing this short story though, hope you liked it!)
is it ok if I add this to a fake warrior book i'm making please 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀
This was all really neat and cool and stuff and then...
hollyleaf...
WHY WOULD YOU HIT ME WITH AN EMOTIONAL CURVEBALL LIKE THAT
in all seriousness I really love this tho oh my gosh
@@echoyaknow1104 Yep. She's the black cat or "Shadow" that rescued Dovekit. At the end it shows her clearly.
Somehow, I don't think these 'shadows' have always been Hollyleaf. Most likely, they were cats from the dark forest, so Dovekit and Ivykit got lucky if it was usually dark forest warriors. I mean, what if it had been Hawkfrost of Tigerstar instead?
I think it would be intresting...
But if it happened I bet the starclan cats and Hollyleaf would’nt let the kits die...
And +Not Even the dark forest cats are that heartless...
LionBlaze!!! You even forgot about your sister like what the heck man?!
Like Jester and Shadowman. Jester thought Shadow was dead since he concussed him at King’s Cross Station for dead by strangers (zombie-like adults) so he wiped him from his memory, him being the selfish and cold-hearted teen he was.
yea, i also would have imagined that he may have at least thought of hollyleaf when ivykit described what the shadow was like???
FUCKING LOST IT SEEING HOLLY--
+Colored Flights Once she was explaining to lionblaze it hit me OHMYGOSHHOLLYLEAFSAVEDDOVEKIT
It's so sad at the end, LionBlaze Doesn't know that HollyLeaf is the shadow and denies the "Shadow's" existence. Poor Hollyleaf :C
When Hollyleaf was revealed to be the shadow, oh how my heart broke ;~; Amazing map though, everyone did a great job!
I cried for a good five minutes at least. Holly was my favorite! Hunter brought her back to Thunderclan just to kill her again! ;^;
Holly: -Saves dovekit-
Dove: -runs-
Holly: well fluff u too dovekit ;-;
*”It was big and black and had green eyes!”*
*Sounds like a cat i know (Hollyleaf)*
It had Longtail, that made it x1000000 times better!
All aboard the feels train. Choo... choo... choo. ;-;
+LPScreepychimp Yes, but I'm evil so
I'm evil
I guess XD
I love ur vid of Wat ur LPS do when u not home
I sound like that 1 person who complements ppl 4 some weird reason XDDD
Winter Cold XD I'm really glad you liked it! :D I love your profile picture! :D Espeon FTW!
Spottedleaf and Feathertail watching like "Oh nooo, a kit is gonna fall in the ice, ain't that sad to watch, it's not like she's super important and part of a prochecy we created to save the clans and stuff, noooo"
fucking Starclan
(btw this as a JOKE)
like "bitch I didn't serve my clan and die so I can plunge into icing cold water this kit can get herself out of this shit"
MY HEARTTTT AAAAAHHHH THIS MADE ME SO EMOTIONALL GAAHH ALSO GREAT JOB EVERYONE THIS TURNED OUT SO WELLL *intense screaming in the background*
It was syo cyute I could tell that it was definitely lollyleaf no doubt about it
this became my fav warriors map watching it only once!
Omg, I'm actually crying. That ending was so sad. T.T
Poor Hollyleaf...
Apparently I didn't read the whole script when the call for this was put up bc like dude the ending....... I love
The whole thing was so good tho everyone did such a great job !! Lipsync so smooth
I remember the first time I watched this seeing Hollyleaf at the end made me tear up. Even now its been almost six months since this map has been out, that bit with Hollyleaf makes me sad every time. Everybody who was a part of this map did a fantastic job!
Does Longtail's voice sound quite... Monotone? Lacking much emotion? Its a nice voice but it just sounds like it's read out for the first time. Good video otherwise, clever animation!
That may be you, but I think it does have emotion.
Also I think it's Pinkbunnygirl43's Tigerclaw as well.
-oh my gosh I should've made my part bluer to save you editing time sorry about that Holly xDD-
bUT WOW
HOLY CRAP THIS IS JUST AMAZING AHHH
It all flows so well and the transitions are great and the cold feeling is amazing ahhh I can't believe how awesome this is! ;u; great work to everyone who participated! I hope we see more like these in the future!
+xJaystarzx *SQUOOSHES UR FACE* THANK YOU FOR TAKING PART HAPPY HOLIDAYS!
-Nawh it was actually really easy on your part! I was applying a standard quick grade onto most of them the ones that were already blue I had to tweak more to get them the RIGHT kind of blue xD But colour grading is actually pretty fun! 8D-
+colacatinthehat need more maps like this P.S. can I use this in a warrior book I'm making its going to be called one great adventure
THIS IS SO RAD !! top 5 maps for sure !! Everyone did so good and agian such a good idea to include voice acting aaaa !!
+illbringyoudown Oh gosh thank you so much!!! Everyone did such a good job so im really happy it's gone down ok!! And the VAs were so patient with me because i only gave them like a weekend xD
please! make more maps like this these kinds of maps are AWESOME!!!! And i feel so bad for Hollyleaf.
This was amazing! You told such a remarkable story, and I wish the Erins had put that in the book!! 😻
Poor hollyleaf! I fell so bad for her! She was just trying to help Dovekit! All the animators did such a great job! This was such a great map! The designs were great the script was great. Wow!
THAT ENDING oh god the feels ;;
great job everyone!!
*NO!*
*IT WAS ALL OKAY UNTIL...*
*HOOOLLLYLLLEAAFFFF WHHHYYYY*
someone is seriously cutting onions.
This is my new headcanon voice for Lionblazs
MY GOSH THIS FINISHED UP SO BEAUTIFULLY IT GOES TOGETHER SO WELL AND THE ENDING NNNNN MY GOSh I love this so much :'D I so wanna join one if you ever make another in the future omg
+Finchwing tHANK YOU FINCH MAYBE I SHALL SOMEDAY!! OwO MERRY CHRISTMAS!
iM CRAFTING- I MEAN CRYING HELPt
The ending got me OH MY GOD
Best part of the map- lionblaize gets triggered by longtail
But the look on Hollyleaf’s face when they walk away it’s sadness 🥺
OMG! I totally loved the ending with Hollyleaf! And this whole map turned out Amazinglly!
Hollyleaf has always been my favorite character, and it is unfair how no one respected her or understood why she ran away. I totally understand. She was stressed and wanted to do the best for her clan. Rest in Peace Hollyleaf, and may you rest peacefully in Starclan forever.
IT WAS HOLLYLEAF OMG
Aah this surely turned out to be brilliant masterpiece!
Good job everyone taking part in this
+CuteFlareon Heheheeee Thank you Flare! Happy Christmas(almost) to yooooooooou!!!
This looks great but hollyleaf's face at the end gets me
Me: haha its actually just Hollyleaf saving a drowning kit XD
Me, 2 seconds later: oh god oh fu-
Oh my gosh, this makes me remember when Ivypool and Dovewing actually loved each other like family
HollyLeaf Poor Hollyleaf
I Died at the end.. Hollyleaf The Shadow..
*Watches the credits casually*
“Wait, Feathertail doesn’t-“
he's right there was no shadow it was just Hollyleaf
R.i.p hollyleaf
Forgotten by her own brother
AAAA IT'S DONE I CAN'T BELIEVE ITTT
IT TURNED OUT AMAZING
EVERYONE DID SUCH AN AMAZING JOB WITH THEIR PARTS AND THEN SEEING EVERYTHING OUT TOGETHER JUST AAAAA
+123lisen IT ACTUALLY GOT DONE IN TIME OMGOSH!
THANK YOU FOR TAKING PART! I THINK I MIGHT HAVE SPELT YOUR NAME WRONG IN THE CREDITS SO PLEASE FORGIVE ME! HAPPY HOLIDAYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Woah!. This turned out so cool!!
That's just great.
If I saw Hollyleaf at the end, I almost cried. She didn't deserve this.
Poor HollyLeaf
Poor Hollyleaf
YOU DID AN AMAZING JOB! I LOVE THIS!
This is amazing! Everyone did awesome and I love this!
I feel really bad for Hollyleaf, everybody thinks she's a monster, even the kits
I didn't watch any of the parts before this and I'm so glad I did that because holy crap that plot twist!!!!
THIS IS AMAZING!
THE MUSIC SUITS It perfectly!
Oh my gosh! That was *SO* amazing!! :D Good job to all the amazing animators!
_count the shadows_
+SapphireX7 I'm so, so sorry... you have two shadows *turns around* and so do i....
Ivy kit: kicks “the shadow” in the face*
Me: what a brave kit! Literal kicking her in the face! Not again though, Hollyleaf now dislikes you >:c
I must tell you how amazing this is!
This was awesome! Well done everyone!
The Shadow was Your Sister Hollyleaf!!!
This is so cute and sad at the end :(
This is AMAZING! I love the idea so much!!!!!!
Ive watched this twice now and i've just realised that hollyleaf was the shadow that part got me well ;) emotional tears dont worry and also a great idea and the animaion and voice overs? Spot on! :) I enjoyed thisvery much! Keep up the good work!
"He who has not Christmas in his heart
will never find it under a tree"
imma my gawd this is beautiful I could cry its that good ;-; this is just mind blowing how it goes together to well at the end I the face on HollyLeaf face I felt so bad for her ;-; anyway I DONT WONT THIS COMMENT TO BE A SAD 1 BUT THIS IS AMAZING GREATE JOB EVERYONE! (ooops caps soz x3)
That was so good I loved the ending the most!
This puts me in Christmas spirit- and I'm watching this near the end of May during a thunderstorm!
Am i the only one who cried at the death of hollyleaf,yellowfang,firestar,bluestar,stonefur,oakheart and many more accept for spottedleaf( I don't care about her)
Mendi Carlson: WTF, DO YOU MENA THE SECOND SPOTTED LEAFS DEATH BECAUSE THAT WAS ONE I CRIED FOR.
-Oakheart
-Silverstream
-SPOTTEDLEAF (2)
-Stonefir
-( Firestar dies of battle wounds, NOT the tree, need more explanation? Look at the very end of this comment!)
-Feathertail
-Yellowfang
-Hollyleaf ( I WAS SOBBING )
Moments: ( *SPOILERS* )
- Jayfeather breaks stick
-Jayfeather with Fallen ( I call him Fallen ;-; )when he drowned
-Star was dragged away from her kits when the Mountain Lion got her ( Again, SOBBING )
PROOF FOR SOME STUFF:
- EVERYONE SAYS CROWFEATHERS EYES ARE BLUE. FACT, THEY ARE NOT, IT SAYS “HIS *AMBER* EYES” WHEN LEAFPOOL RAN AWAY WITH HIM
- * THE TREE SYMBOLIZES FIRESTARS DEATH “FIRE IS FALLING”*
( Also Snowkit hit me I’m sorry I have many more )
Mendi Carlson Actually, quite the opposite, I only came near crying from Spottedleafs death, even though I had like, no emotional attachment to her whatsoever. 😂
HAWKFROST STOP CUTTING UNIONS!
I'm sorry, I know this was 3 years ago but the idea of Hawkfrost disbanding workers unions rather than cutting onions amuses me.
Omg! Best map ever! Amazing job
Wow. That was unique and incredible
guys the shadow is hollyleaf I mean come on lionblaze
Great idea and a fantastic atmosphere were made here. Thanks a lot!
That was beautiful!!
6 DISLIKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????????????????????? * Gets shotgun out * RAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ * Reload * --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------* OUT OF AMMO * -_-
Takes popcorns and Goldens ammo clips * Thank you * takes the nuke * What was that about the dark forest? ( reloads, saving the Nuke for last )
+The Golden Skyfall That hurts my ears and that offended me ;-; BUT I WILL!!!!! POPCORN IF YOU LIFE, GET HIM THE CRAP OUT OF THERE NAOW
+MicroRaptorAGO (evacuates all cats of the dark forest) (cats of the dark forest invade starclan)
When it showed it was hollyleaf i choked
...g O D wh Y
This is one of the best maps I've ever seen. The parts are all so great and the story is wonderful. Great job
This is beautiful!
Lionblaze ruining the fun for everyone O^O
this is one of my favorite MAPS I have ever seen! it's so amazing
OH THAT END GOT ME SHOOK! I loved it :D I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE it! Such an original little story and a twist at the end! Y'all should be so proud.
i love this so much aa
i get chills everytime dovekit falls in because this was so well done ^^
This is awesome! :D
;;;;-;;;; pooor hollyyyleeeaaaf hhhhh
Who voiced Longtail.
I mean, it's not like I've heard him before...
(BEFORE YOU REPLY THIS WAS SARCASM, I KNOW THAT MIKE VOICES LONGTAIL, HE IS EVEN ONE OF MY VOICE ACTORS, NO HATE)
If you listen closely, you can hear the sound of thousands of Warriors fans' hearts breaking.
Including mine... Hollyleaf... *cries in corner*
Lol
T^T
Wolfie07 cri
I don't like her but I feel bad
LOL