"It Dwells" | ABANDONED PLACES CREEPYPASTA

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  • @Dead-dudes
    @Dead-dudes 2 ปีที่แล้ว +268

    Hey, man! It's the author, here. Thank you so much for reading, I hoped that your channel before any other would get to read it. Thank you again!

    • @breathebih4321
      @breathebih4321 2 ปีที่แล้ว +13

      Dude thats was great 👍 hope to hear more of your stories in the future

    • @LordCommanderSpaceAlligator
      @LordCommanderSpaceAlligator 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Opposite side of the coin here. I found it boring and uninspiring

    • @breathebih4321
      @breathebih4321 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      @@LordCommanderSpaceAlligator well if thats so can you refer a story that you find not boring and inspiring. Honest question just looking for mores stories to hear.

    • @Dead-dudes
      @Dead-dudes 2 ปีที่แล้ว +24

      @@LordCommanderSpaceAlligator Eh, can't please everybody.

    • @squarepondstories3895
      @squarepondstories3895 2 ปีที่แล้ว +12

      What a great combo, your story and his narration. Hope we get to hear more of your stories.

  • @petermcavory8045
    @petermcavory8045 2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Hey Mr Temper, I believe it is time for me to show some rare support all the way from New Zealand where I live. Love your smooth gossamer voice, and the quality of the stories your reading combined with your vivid style of presentation has been entertaining me for years. Great stuff 😊

  • @stalwartteakettlepotato9879
    @stalwartteakettlepotato9879 2 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    I really love the presentation in stories like this. Getting the story by reading old documents and letters adds a layer of mystery and authenticity

  • @carolduvall111
    @carolduvall111 2 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    I love it when you narrate journal/report style stories you are great at it

    • @sirenetyx792
      @sirenetyx792 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I love that style too!

  • @island_girl
    @island_girl ปีที่แล้ว +5

    This was so... sad. Breaks my heart to think of all he went through & saw and the fact that he had to live with the thought that everything was his fault for so many years was even worse. 💔

  • @georgemcmillan9172
    @georgemcmillan9172 2 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    Very well written and exsquisitely narrated story. I am looking forward to more work from both the author and Skott...

  • @elizabethblack1577
    @elizabethblack1577 2 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    This story had me wondering about the end all the way through. Great narration! Quite happy when you cover a longer selection, but wouldn't skip the shorter stories either! Hope your tracking adventure was reviving and inspiring for you, Skott. 🙂

  • @fredbrooks957
    @fredbrooks957 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    That one drew a tear,. Awesome skott, I hope you and Dr Creppin will work together again

  • @staceyfallis5844
    @staceyfallis5844 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    I just have to say wow with this one. It grabbed my soul. Thank you for reading this

  • @jamesalexander8931
    @jamesalexander8931 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hey man.
    Just an appreciation post for the narration.
    I love the short stories but I am always a massive fan of the long reads.
    Thank you so much.
    I hope all is well and I'm glad your channel is still going strong.
    Keep well my favourite story reader/teller.

  • @kristiejantzen2950
    @kristiejantzen2950 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Great read again! Thanks to the author for getting you to read this Skott.

  • @johngolden3714
    @johngolden3714 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    That was a good slow burn story there. That ending though. Man, I hope he got his revenge.

  • @disdj999
    @disdj999 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Great SCOTT!!!!! Awesome work as always looking forward to listen and enjoy all your future work. Keep up the amazing work that you do!

  • @blackfyre365
    @blackfyre365 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I really liked this one...very disturbing. Great narration - much thanks! 💕✨

  • @brandoncobb5352
    @brandoncobb5352 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    You killed it. As, always 🙏

  • @AndStar100
    @AndStar100 2 ปีที่แล้ว +23

    Couple of minutes into the story & I’m loving the lovecraftian touch to the style already! Wonder whether this was done purposefully

    • @Dead-dudes
      @Dead-dudes 2 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      Actually, yeah! I had been reading a lot of Lovecraft at the time.

    • @stingerjohnny9951
      @stingerjohnny9951 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@Dead-dudes it’s always nice to read some cosmic horror without dealing with the…more problematic aspects of Lovecraft’s writing. And I say that as a FAN of his work 🤣

  • @johnnymartinez733
    @johnnymartinez733 13 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Poor his mom 😢 i would of rushed that spider to help my mom no matter what the outcome would be for me

  • @RazaTheMaza
    @RazaTheMaza 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Another fantastic story and I had no way of knowing how it was gonna go from the start

  • @winfhhsfj48558vggf
    @winfhhsfj48558vggf 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I like that you did not give away what the BAD! memory was untill the end.

  • @huntish
    @huntish 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Wow that was one hell of a story and the narration was superb.i hope there's more to come from this author 👍

  • @alesiacallahan-garcia7308
    @alesiacallahan-garcia7308 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Amazingstory. And loved the narrator.

  • @nikibrown4426
    @nikibrown4426 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    OMG what a story!!! Narrator and writer, Respect

  • @missmiagi2147
    @missmiagi2147 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    48:20 ~Throw a Molotov Cocktail at it!

  • @petellouisvanpolanen7516
    @petellouisvanpolanen7516 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Okay.. this is an exquisite story for me. Unfortunately I'm abit having a hard time right now, I never realized this story could affect me in any way. So for other listeners out there who feels like they are vulnerable or having a season, please do reconsider listening to stories that can be morbid/traumatic.
    Thank you for the story btw. I did enjoyed listening but I didn't realized I was affected by the story.

  • @yohanmccormick8257
    @yohanmccormick8257 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Brilliant story,and excellent narration as usual 👏👏👏

  • @paulmartinez992
    @paulmartinez992 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Your character work was awesome good one dude.

  • @michelepruitt3145
    @michelepruitt3145 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Hey Skott this Narration and Story was So Epic I have to listen to it again! 🤗 Like your video "Flesh gait", I've listened to it probably a dozen times! 🥰 You are the Most Talented Narrator out there, in any genre! 👏 Period!!! Thank You Nature's Temper for Sharing your Unbelievable Talent with all of us! 😻 We Really Appreciate You! 🤷‍♀️✌💜👻🐶😹🐢🐾💘💋👀🙏

  • @sherrywillett6894
    @sherrywillett6894 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Amazingly talented ❤️
    I love the adventures your voice takes me!

  • @DubCatXero
    @DubCatXero 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Ah finally, just what we needed.. a long creepypasta 🥰

  • @Kochie11
    @Kochie11 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I love the longer ones. Great read

  • @jamieeleec4235
    @jamieeleec4235 2 ปีที่แล้ว +17

    Let's see you have an amazing talent in narration, you truly care about animals and the environment, and you are absolutely gorgeous. What elsecould anyone ask for. Pretty much a perfect 10
    Thank you so much for making my days more enjoyable.

    • @pandabella9403
      @pandabella9403 ปีที่แล้ว

      Couldn't of said it better. Absolutely a God sent from heaven. 💯👊🤍🤍🤍

  • @glencalhoun9544
    @glencalhoun9544 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    The actions of a MONSTER are NOT the fault of a child or ANYONE Else!!!

  • @appollin1467
    @appollin1467 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Awesome narration and a cool story! Perfect timing to get me through the work day.

  • @matt6565
    @matt6565 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Best Pasta I've heard in YEARS. No overused WENDIGOS, just back to the basics. WELL DONE!

    • @Dead-dudes
      @Dead-dudes 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      You might be joking, but I genuinely hate most wendigo stories. I feel like writers have GOT to come up with more creative monsters.

  • @michelepruitt3145
    @michelepruitt3145 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This was Incredible, the Narration and the Story! 🤗 Outstanding Nature's Temper, Outstanding! 🤷‍♀️✌💜👻🐶😻🐢🐾💘💋👀🙏

  • @rayswoop4947
    @rayswoop4947 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I personally know about methadone...

  • @Stephanie-bj4oj
    @Stephanie-bj4oj 2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    I look forward to your stories. You were my first voice crush.
    Thank you for continuing to produce/read these stories
    Much love & respect!

    • @debbieathy5204
      @debbieathy5204 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      When you see what he looks like in person he definitely a nice looking crush with a picture connected with a voice .

    • @debbieathy5204
      @debbieathy5204 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Well thank who whoever liked my comment here

    • @elbarto9306
      @elbarto9306 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      I've always been jealous of his voice, and accent

  • @zjhome1257
    @zjhome1257 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Freaking great story!!! Just awesome!!

  • @KronosSion
    @KronosSion 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    His normal speaking voice is perfect but it seems the most common changes he uses to differentiate characters is either a southwestern american twang or a thick New Jersey accent....which I have trouble tolerating more than 5 minutes of. It's so on the nose that it comes off as a caricature. Anyone else feel that way?

    • @Dillylynx
      @Dillylynx 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Yeah I feel the same way. I prefer his normal speaking voice.

  • @DemonCreep
    @DemonCreep 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    That's no way to speak about my mother.

  • @dragonsnail3298
    @dragonsnail3298 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    As someone that's been the guy in the hospital. Yea the doc sent her in. But maybe it's just to be nice to you.

  • @proto-badger1075
    @proto-badger1075 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    My dog loves your voice and comes to my office when I listen to you and my wife thinks your the wolf's howl
    ..Hats off to you and yours

    • @NaturesTemper
      @NaturesTemper  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      That melts my heart, thank you!

  • @jillthethrill32
    @jillthethrill32 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Amazing ! Thank you !!!!

  • @burants89
    @burants89 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I normally save these till bedtime but can't wait the 3-4 hours

  • @tanithday7301
    @tanithday7301 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Ow mate, forgot how good the story's are and your voice is amazing, had to pull back on subscriptions, a bit skint big time. COVID has been a real shit. Love you , your work. 🤪🤯😊😊😊👍👍👍👍.

  • @DRL0V3PANDA
    @DRL0V3PANDA 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Always appreciate your work, love your cerber series the most I share with many. Keep up the good work. I'm enjoy this tale with my pups. They approve as well. 🐼🖤

  • @burants89
    @burants89 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Wow that was riveting, thanks for that

  • @duckman12569
    @duckman12569 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    FIGHT TEH DEMONS!!

  • @jakolay69xd32
    @jakolay69xd32 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This is easily the greatest horror story I have ever listened to, your narration and the authors incredible storytelling had me hooked start to end. I have a very short attention span when it comes to long videos like this but you completely nailed it. 🔥🔥🔥

  • @Ashcroft1313
    @Ashcroft1313 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Skott! thank you for your fine work.

  • @Nichola_Knight10884
    @Nichola_Knight10884 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Wow! I'm so early! I feel blessed😭💛

  • @bubasa87
    @bubasa87 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    👏👏👏👏👏👏
    Damn good story!

  • @Alethia_
    @Alethia_ 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Ooof this has my arachnophobia acting up.

  • @keefeboone2720
    @keefeboone2720 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Let that be a lesson to ya lads. Venture not the land of tooth n claw, with not in hand and toothless maw.

  • @ronnieb5468
    @ronnieb5468 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    ahhhhh! WTF, all that great build up ,and it ends up to be a spider thing ! , im sure i would be terrified if I ran into a big ass spider but , it just disappointed me , lol ,was hoping for the rake ,or a dogman ,even blood thirsty Bigfoot,, definitely did a good job with the build up till the end tho , can't win em all I guess lol

    • @Dead-dudes
      @Dead-dudes 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Maybe next time!!

    • @rayswoop4947
      @rayswoop4947 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@Dead-dudes I think it's awesome that you didn't use the average creepy pasta monsters

    • @rayswoop4947
      @rayswoop4947 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@Dead-dudes I have one I'm working on about an entity called the toad king that feeds off of an addict's misery

  • @tylerjames4257
    @tylerjames4257 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thanks!!!

  • @Dirtybreacher
    @Dirtybreacher 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Your the king.

  • @hopelessedgelord
    @hopelessedgelord 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Dam I always feel like its a cheap hit when the lovable dog bites it... That and I feel like all stakes go because the dog bites it and if i don't care enough about the protag you check out

  • @marksullivan6319
    @marksullivan6319 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This one was good

  • @marinakaiser7639
    @marinakaiser7639 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    O now i'am curious it dwells sounds creepy 😱😊❤🖤‼Thank you dear N.T.and thanks to the talented writer 👍😁‼

  • @bossk1176
    @bossk1176 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I really want to know if he killed the spider though

  • @robertvanderhoof5283
    @robertvanderhoof5283 ปีที่แล้ว

    Dam that was great. Thanks

  • @maximkusanagi
    @maximkusanagi 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    It may dwell but what does it dwell upon?

  • @tanithday7301
    @tanithday7301 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    P.S. I said love u, sorry,. I don't , luv your work, n story's. NO STALKER, HERE..🤪😄😊🙃😅

  • @tonywigton8052
    @tonywigton8052 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Wow I am early.

  • @johnnymartinez733
    @johnnymartinez733 13 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    An hour long video.... Never even mentiones a spider until the very end and for only like 5 minutes smh
    Kinda a waste..... And you should of helped your mom regardless of being afraid or what you the spider would of done to you.... Mothers are everything

  • @novanocturn
    @novanocturn 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    For the Algorithm God’s

  • @thatonepsyconaute622
    @thatonepsyconaute622 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    If you can find it, the unlucky few is a great zombie story. I checked Reddit and apparently the dude who made it wiped it, but I'm totally sure if the written version is gone, just the narration he did of it.

    • @thatonepsyconaute622
      @thatonepsyconaute622 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      I don't know who liked it, but that guy is proof it exsisted. Proof enough to me at least.

  • @jameseisner6311
    @jameseisner6311 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Sooooo what happened at the end??

  • @MC-gt7xn
    @MC-gt7xn 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    What's better then 24? 25! 25th like. 😆

  • @angelaverbowski995
    @angelaverbowski995 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    #24-✅👍

  • @lauraturnbull7620
    @lauraturnbull7620 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    I've been listening to Dr. Creeper and only him for the past 6 years. My father who is British psychiatrist with whom I've sat in over 28 sessions as I too study medicine and the human mind. Why would a narrator, who now does it for a living still use the word ANYWAYS????????????????? I FIND MYSELF TURNING IT OFF. IT IS not an word. For the love of every god please stop saying anyways

  • @keefeboone2720
    @keefeboone2720 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    What a long winded piece of crap. At least as scary stories go.

  • @ILaunchNukes
    @ILaunchNukes 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Idea: *Finnish Cave Monster*
    Plz upload my story, it is good.
    Hello, my name is Alexander Neilson. I have been living in Finland for 15 years. My small town near the Russian border is quaint and lively. The people are lovely and that is what made me, an American expat, move into Finland. I used to work for a National Geographic team that traveled all over Scandinavia, documenting wildlife. However, it all changed when I was attacked by a mysterious cave creature 4 years ago.
    Let me tell you my story. I was with one of my Finnish friends, who's name was Peter. We set out on a National Geographic mission to document the lives of Moose in Finland.I had me, Peter, and a 5-man camera crew. We brought guns to protect from wolves and bears. We trekked for miles in thick snow and forest.
    Eventually, the seven of us set up camp near a lake and cave. We packed enough food and water to last us two weeks, which were MREs imported from the United States. We also packed emergency satellite phones, some rounds of ammunition and binoculars.
    Peter and I set up tents while the camera crew set up hidden cameras and radar all over the forest where a small moose herd was going to come in the following days. A blizzard set in so we barely got any footage. The camera crew, Peter, and I had to hunker down in our tents.
    However, we got something else that night. Peter and I were close to the cave, about several hundred feet away when we hear a roar. It was no wolf or bear, it sounded feline, almost like a big cat. We assumed it was our imagination since we were binging Ice Age movies the day before, but it spooked us. It sounded very much real, and it was.
    After being startled for a few hours, we went back to sleep. We woke up the next day and went to check up on the cameras, which were surprisingly still working. I examined the cameras closer to the cave, and was in for a startling surprise.
    There were several large felines coming out from the cave. They looked starting like the lions found in one of my African excursions. They appeared to be watching the camera, before what appeared to be the alpha male roared, and they all went back in. I also saw huge, cat-like paw prints circle around our camp and back in the direction of the cave.
    Peter and I tried to tell the camera crew, but they just laughed. They would live to regret it that day.
    We moved miles away from our camp towards another section of forest where the small herd of moose were grazing. We also relocated some of the cameras. I was in zooming in using my binoculars when I saw the same alpha cat charge in and hop onto the moose's back which immediately brought it down. One swipe to the head later, and the buck was no more. I then saw the male lion DRAG THE DEAD MOOSE UP A CLIFFSIDE. There was nothing but awe.and a bit of fear as I saw the events that just played out. I later heard screaming as Peter was dragged away by an unknown female big cat! My camera crew also dropped like flies as they were being dragged towards the cave. I ventured away from the alpha male when he spotted me.
    The unknown lion then charged at me and I shot at him, but I missed. I soon felt my torso get clamped with 1000 pounds per square inch of force. Its sharp teeth easily sunk through my thick coat. My bones snapped as the cat bit and clawed me as if I was another meal.
    I used one of my arms to grab the rifle and pumped a bullet into the Alpha male's shoulder. It screamed in agony and then ran off. I was found by a surviving camera man and rushed to a hospital which was a five-hour walk and another 1 hour drive.
    I slipped into a coma as I entered the building. I then woke up two weeks later in a room with my wife and camera man. I used my good arm and turned on the TV. The news reporter said that there were five people who were missing for weeks in Northern Finland. Their bodies were never found.
    Me and my camera man, who became a bestfriend of mine, tried telling people our story, including my wife. No one believed us. Everyone insisted that it was a WOLF attack.
    I told them that no wolf could kill a whole camera crew. I also tried telling them that no wolf I knew could drag a fully-grown moose up a cliff like a feather, but we had no evidence since the equipment was destroyed in the carnage.
    Regardless, we know what we saw and survived that harrowing day. There was something uncanny in those woods. They were unlike any wolf, they were definitely feline. Those creatures have been hunting people in Northern Finland, disappearances have skyrocketed in recent years.
    I call it, *The Cave Lion*

    • @barbaracordova7574
      @barbaracordova7574 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      How terrifying! I'm sorry you lost so many friends and you & your camera man/BF r blessed to be alive.

    • @ILaunchNukes
      @ILaunchNukes 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@barbaracordova7574 bruh, it's the story. This didn't happen IRL.

    • @ILaunchNukes
      @ILaunchNukes 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@barbaracordova7574 Also, my real name is not Alexander. This is pure fiction.

    • @barbaracordova7574
      @barbaracordova7574 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Well that's how good of a story teller u are!I took the bait hook, line, & sinker. Might wanna wrk on your manners though Bruh.

    • @rayswoop4947
      @rayswoop4947 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@barbaracordova7574 I know right? Damn

  • @vanessaashford9203
    @vanessaashford9203 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    fuck, this is actually more relatable in certain ways than you'd think for me, I too got addicted to heroin while processing fucked up shit (not involving a giant spider monster, but also not as far off from that as you might think, either). I wonder if they actually gave you IV methadone back in the '80s, instead of the gross-tasting syrup stuff you have to take now lol

    • @Dead-dudes
      @Dead-dudes 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I actually tried to find out when writing that part? My experience with heroin was pretty limited to stuff I saw as a kid. But the methadone treatment procedures for the 80s was kinda hard to find.

    • @rayswoop4947
      @rayswoop4947 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      It used to be a shot

    • @conkyjoe8932
      @conkyjoe8932 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@rayswoop4947 Might've been a shot at ONE time...the 80's wasn't it.
      Heroin addiction unfortunately runs in my family. And from the time I can remember, my Dad was either on the clinic, or actively using. And it's always been the pink liquid, the methadone HCL you take by mouth, that he's been given. And he got on for the first time when he was a teen, so mid-80's.
      Oh God, I remember my Dad and his gf getting called up to my elementary school for a sit-down with the principal and a counselor, bc in Kindergarten we were asked to draw a picture of what we had done on this particular Monday we had off school...and I friggin drew my Dad and I at "his clinic, getting Daddy's pink medicine" 😂😂😂 My teacher was concerned, and gave the picture to the principal. Of course, my Dad wasn't mad or in trouble or anything, I mean all he could do was laugh really. No one ever told me that was something I should keep to myself haha.
      @Vanessa Ashford Whaaaat you don't like the way it tastes?!?! Lol I guess it's probably an acquired taste, my mind equates it with getting well, so I'm sure that boosts its flavor profile in my mind 😂

  • @glencalhoun9544
    @glencalhoun9544 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    The actions of a MONSTER are NOT the fault of a child or ANYONE Else!!!