You're English was pretty good, All that needs to be fixed is it'd be more grammical if you said "Very good" instead of "So good" But you're English was great otherwise.
Hi so I have an idea for the video. I know this was made a year ago but I thought to me as well, and something to help you with ideas if you were to make a part for it, so for part three maybe you could do something like: she thinks that she’s pregnant But she isn’t. And that’s when your parents look around forever and one day she gets noticing after she told him that she doesn’t think she’s pregnant he gets very abusive and begins hurting her that’s when after that the same scenario happened again papa he’s abusive. So that’s when she said to try to escape again and once he does he runs back to the house to find a password there are police officers to say no situation and they arrested him he’s never allowed back out again for he heard a really badly. Do you know with her parents and Daniela get out of jail and so where is the protector but that’s when she finds out that she is pregnant. Then at the end it shows her reading the story to a child with the Daniela by her side she’s a single mother and continues to live a great life Danielle Heather I’m good at this point and they play constantly that’s win also it shows a scene where the kids are in the backyard playing and that’s when somebody comes up and tries to grab a child but when it’s the father, the son protects their cousin. The police officers take the bad guy to jail and the sun punches him.
And if your out of ideas how about Victoria gets pregnant her and Cole go to her parents house the parents either except them or not then her and Cole get married. Something happens to Danielle. And a few years later Victoria and Coles kid grows up and says he/she loves him/her and all of that. (This was just an idea. Some of kind of looks like another part like 4
I got an idea, in part 3 (if you make one) you should make it as if when the baby is born the red hair girl somehow gets hurt or her parents find her and take her away from the boy. Then the either kill the boy or place him somewhere. The baby will be just like the father and the mother but instead become insane and crazy since they knew about their parents and that they were placed somewhere away from them. Idk this was just an idea xD You don't have to do what I just said.
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x ABC x PART 3
I want more!!! Is amazing! :*
the guys is like so much older because he found her when she was a baby anyone else notice??
Secret Halo yeah 😶
Cant wait for part 3 (if it will come)
Michelle28 msp idk D:
Michelle28 msp i'm out of idea 😂
x ABC x PLEEAAAAASEEE xD
Michelle28 msp yes pleaseee
x ABC x Can they have a baby and then they rob something and? xD
PLOT TWIST : SHE'S ACTUALLY AN UNDERCOVER COP!1!111!
OMG YESSS LMAOO
You make so good Videos! I love you
You're English was pretty good, All that needs to be fixed is it'd be more grammical if you said "Very good" instead of "So good" But you're English was great otherwise.
Animal King Five 12 i agree
Part 3?
first
Monkeyz Power omg hiii!!
Monkeyz Power Omg not you i thought i killed u😱
pk lol c'est bien
hehe hello :) do you know me?
No you arent
I'm in love with this story ♥
PART 3 or I steal your fridge >:] muhahahaha
OML I LOVE UR VIDEOSSSSS, ILYSMMMMM❤❤❤❤❤😘😍
i love all her videos. she is honestly amazing♥♥
4:22 the police is Xavier omg- ajdjfhwjbfkegrjehehfjwhshdlfj
I JUST CANTTT--
I LOVE COLE AND I MISS HIM!!!!!
Love it 💗😍
Please watching my edit videos :/
Hi
PART 3
OMG I LOVE THIS SONG SO HAPPY YOU MADE IT!!
BEST ONE YET THIS IS WHY UR MY FAVORITE *^*
aw so cutee
Mannn i love your music vids, They're amazing
I‘m still waiting for Part 3 😢
I love your videos your so talented please make a part 3 you have me hooked 😁
PART 3?
Man, this life for her seems scary af... :o
J'espère que tu f'ras une partie 3, tu peux pas finir l'histoire comme ça ! 😱 Anyway, je kiffe, comme toujours ! :3
OMG YAY A PART TWO NOW JUST A PART THREE!
THIS WASS CUTEEEE but also sad
OMG LS DO PART 3
2:54 SHE DONT KNOW WHAT IS 2+2 AND SHE CAN DRIVING?
Wikhyung HAHAHAHHA
Pls do part 3 I actually love your vids and this story is just so interesting and unique pls do more ❤️
wonderful storyline ♡
damn that was good c; can't wait for part 3 ♥
i'm early for once in my life, it feels awesome
Omg! It's so amazing ;OO
MORE I LOVE YOUR MSP VERSIONS.
PLEAS MAKE PART 3 LOVE it
This is my fav song ❤️
gimme part 2 of this >) its amazing
MAKE A PART 3 PLZZZZZZZZZZZZ THIS IS AWESOME! WE ALL NEED THIS PART 3
3 ohhhhhh pleaaaseeee I know you babyyyyyyyyyy!!!! Lmao ily
It's Just So Beautiful.. :c♥
Ugh cole is a real daddy
Partttttt 3??? :D I LOVE UR VIDEOS ❤️😘
I love everything! ♥♥♥ Specially The music ♥♥♥
OMG YOU ARE THE BEST JUST THE BEST OMG I LOVE IT OMFG (l) :* PLEASE THE PART 3 PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Part 3!!!! I’m soo hype
Woah o.o I love it 😍 Part 3!?
um can I start fan girling now? yes? ok. wkeksk OMG I LOVE IT JUST YOUR THE PERFECT MSP CHANNEL EVER AND PERSON. 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖
Glitter0 XDD ty!!!💗
Est-ce qu'il y aura la partie 3 ?🤔 Comme toujours tu es la meilleure 😙👅
This song is soooo prettyyyy! cx
Remember me
FUDGE!! when she got locked in her room and her mom was crying because Victoria was FreAkiNG ouT I ALMOST CRIED MAN
I Can't wait for part 3!
I love it .3.
CANTT WAIT FOR PART TWOOO
-sandiiś- Games YUUUP❤️
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MAKE A THREE PLEASE ITS GOOD I WANNA SEE MORE
Hi so I have an idea for the video. I know this was made a year ago but I thought to me as well, and something to help you with ideas if you were to make a part for it, so for part three maybe you could do something like: she thinks that she’s pregnant But she isn’t. And that’s when your parents look around forever and one day she gets noticing after she told him that she doesn’t think she’s pregnant he gets very abusive and begins hurting her that’s when after that the same scenario happened again papa he’s abusive. So that’s when she said to try to escape again and once he does he runs back to the house to find a password there are police officers to say no situation and they arrested him he’s never allowed back out again for he heard a really badly. Do you know with her parents and Daniela get out of jail and so where is the protector but that’s when she finds out that she is pregnant. Then at the end it shows her reading the story to a child with the Daniela by her side she’s a single mother and continues to live a great life Danielle Heather I’m good at this point and they play constantly that’s win also it shows a scene where the kids are in the backyard playing and that’s when somebody comes up and tries to grab a child but when it’s the father, the son protects their cousin. The police officers take the bad guy to jail and the sun punches him.
I love this video AND the song plz make more ♥
And if your out of ideas how about Victoria gets pregnant her and Cole go to her parents house the parents either except them or not then her and Cole get married. Something happens to Danielle. And a few years later Victoria and Coles kid grows up and says he/she loves him/her and all of that. (This was just an idea. Some of kind of looks like another part like 4
WHERE IS PART THREE IM LOOKING ALL OVER UR CHANNEL
Gacha Angie doesn‘t exist :(
I NEEDED THIS
I'm in love w/ this omf
Thanks Forr Uploading The Last Time So Much Srs Like It
Omg this is just like the app HOOKED but a love story on I'm just like WHAAAA OMG WHAT GOING TO HAPPEN!! btw ilysfm!!!
PART 3 OMG ITS AMAZINGGGG
Legend says that if you are early
A bunch of people will say first
Love it! x
I NEED MORE 😍
ahhhh i loved this sm!!
Oo first and love it ((;
Why don‘t you continue this series :(
MAKE ANOTHER ONE I LOVE IT
Part 3 please :( will it come out one day?
Omg i love you so much x ABC x i wish you had a swedish account! :c
It is a fault of the parents if they dealt with their first daughter Victoria would not know Cole and they would be a normal family.
PART 3 OMG AMAZING
MAKE A PART 3 IMMAA DYINGGGGG
I want more Pleaaaas this is really cool i want more!
how old is cole
part 3 :(
Her dad looks like he been in a lots of fights and lost.. BAHAHAHAHHAAH
Salut (i am french) j'adore tes clip ♥
Are u ever gonna make part three..
cool (; pleas Part 3!!*-*❤
PART 3 PLEASE OMG-
part 3 pls :'(
can you pls make part 3 *-*
The story is so sad but .... I LOVE OT ! :*
YESSSSS PART 3 PLS
Beautiful
Please make part 3 or I will eat your 4thie 😈 xD
Love ittt 💛😻
part 3 please! (if one day it will come!)
I NEED A PART 3!!!
LOVE IT BBG THIS IS JAEKS BEST FRIEND FROM INSTA HAHAAH LOL
xEve O HI❤️❤️🌺
ehehehe hi
Why I cant see this video??😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😢😢😢😢
O.M.G I LOVEEEEEE THIS STORY! plsss make a part 3,4,5,6,7,8 and more xD i hope it is a boy and a girl!!!
Sanne Bronswijk XD
I got an idea, in part 3 (if you make one) you should make it as if when the baby is born the red hair girl somehow gets hurt or her parents find her and take her away from the boy. Then the either kill the boy or place him somewhere. The baby will be just like the father and the mother but instead become insane and crazy since they knew about their parents and that they were placed somewhere away from them. Idk this was just an idea xD You don't have to do what I just said.
PERFECT ;D
Ooo!
please do part 3 :(
plz make part 3
I love it♥