The transformation of a 3 year old kid to 13 year old boy, from adoring someone to understanding someone you showed us journey of your brother which you weren't part but you wish you had. My favorite line was ' You've seen the worst of me, but you always saw the best in me'. Hope to here more stories from you.
Its 4 am. Half an hour ago I cried coz I saw 1st part of Harry Potter.It dragged me to my early teens. How jolly, carefree I was. I cried. Now I saw this, lost a younger brother 4 years back. Emotionally triggered, I am here typing and sobbing mutely as I have a roomie sleeping on the other side of room.
Sonam A. Negi Sad to hear that. May your brother's soul rest in piece. I always feel life is tough and harsh yet there is something very beautiful about it that I can't let it go. Live a great life and yeah your brother's always watching you. :)
Hi Rabia (or my elder sibling), Indeed you were my superhero, but you still are my first and foremost one. You shouted at me- fought with me, but you know what I miss it now, the love I saw in your eyes after my knee was hurt, I miss it now. You were busy with your friends in our room with the door locked, but I sneaked around and laughed on those lame jokes as u did. You tried to gave me advice in my studies but little did u know, I was already following you! After these many years, I never thought I lost you, rather I wanted to get rid of you amongst all the adolescence. I needed you the least for I was busy with my friends but come on, I always wanted to share everything and anything with my first n best roommate. I still believe that we would laugh and cry throughout the night with ur handmade Maggie and obviously snuggles in the sheet and enjoy the city by the window. Don't you be sorry neither be forgiving, let's just forget whatever happened in between for us to be together again! My dear, trust me I'd be the only one who would weep and stay awake the night you'll leave me! Trust me, I'd be the only one who would miss you the most, because I know my superhero won't be there anymore to give me a smile when I enter the home! Yours, Little baby.
According to me you are one of the best Kommune speaker..The way you spoke is phenomenal,your each and every pause during your entire storey makes sense.Your voice act as a tastemaker and adds life to the story.Looking forward to have such one of its kind soon... You should have continued your story forever and ever...its too soulful..
I am sitting in the office seeing this and crying like a baby .Haven't spoken to my sister since past couple of months.I have always been there for her but never has she been there for me.Younger sisters blues.
I cried incessantly when I saw this. I've lost a relationship with my younger sibling too and I'm to blame. My story is very similar to this but a million times worse and I'm to blame. Thanks for making this. I'm sending this to my lil sister hoping she understands what I go through and what I have to wrestle with all the time. The guilt, the blame, the constant shame.
You need to put on a cry alert, you guys! I am the kind that doesn't cry easily and I still struggled to complete the video without having to go wash my face.. This is hard hitting.! Ms. Rabia Kapoor, Take a bow!
Amazing... It's just an amazing... I m having a 7yrs younger brother... And i m watching it 3rd tym but it always brings tears 2 my eyes..... Every tym i watch it again i realize how much i love my brother... My donkey.... I love him... Thanks rabia kapoor... U r just wonderful...
Rabia, it's wonderful to see you going ahead in your life and doing something that you love. All your poetries are spectacular, though this one is amazing on a different level. I remember you and your brother from the short time we spent together in our childhood. You were my only friend then and even after being the immature kids we were you were mature and protective when it came to your brother. This poetry made me cry.
Thank you for making me realize that i m still the superhero of my young sister, use the bed sheet as a cape to protect her from every kind of threat. I had never been soft heartened to my sister in front of her, always spoke in harsh tone, but really I really care a lot for her. I stay in a college hostel and whenever we use to talk on phone, I remember I never spoke to her for more than 2 minutes ever. But now I will become the superhero I always wanted to be. Thank you for bringing tears in my eyes. :)
This is my first ever comment on TH-cam ever and I think it's all worth it. I just cannot be more inclined towards her words and "lack of poetry". She does speak my mind and my words. Much praise for her always!
d way uh grab Ur hands..shows Ur helplessness.. d way uh narrates ,Ur every single pause shakes us a bit... d way Ur eyes yells out d purity of ur heart..d break in Ur voice.. loved Ur narrations..stay blessed..😇😍😘😘😇😇
i was giving a thought of skipping this rabia kapoor's story but god knows what made me stop on this. trust me dear, uh nailed it. like inside out. my eyes filled wth the tears. i managed to add a barricade for not embarrassing myself in front of the public. hats off girl!
It's my DAT exam tomorrow, and I was just searching up spoken word poems to brush up my language and I fell across this one, I'm crying.... Art makes you feel things and I hope I'm able to achieve even half of what she has.
my di And I face the same situations Yesterday again it happened And today she sent me this link Saying maybe It was my fault...You just made me realise maybe i'm wrong at times..Thanks alot For making us realise our importance for each other..
Amazing compilation and above all the way you (Rabia) express all those words. I remember one dialogue from movie aligarh, "Kavita shabdon mein Kahan hoti hai. Kavita shabdon ke beech mein milti hai. Silences mein. Pauses mein. " and I believe this dialogue acurately stands perfect for your way of expressing words.
Even do my sisters don't say sorry ,I have imagined you as my sisters and accepted that in the story ,thanks for creating this story .😃 I have really got tears in my eyes because now also my sisters don't realize this thing and both of them show elderly behavior 😔
every time I watch u speaking ...I feel ur telling my story...ur emotions..the way u speak..I wish I could share my story like u do ...thank u for sharing...I don't no why but I feel light...
This is the sweetest thing i have seen online in a while, thank you Rabia kapoor, no one can tell a story better than you! Really moved, waiting for more of these!
Beautiful...never thought or cared much about this untill i realized I'm in tears (hardly ever) while watching this...Going to share this with my Didi.
Rabia you are amazing. I'am an elder sister and I could relate a lot. All this while I used to boast amongst my friends that me and my brother are the bestest of friends. But just three weeks back, I got to hear from one of my friend that my brother feels that I've changed. It broke my heart you know. I still don't know how to deal with it. Lovely story Rabia. And keep up the good work kommune. It's pleasure watching your videos. All the best.
The moment u see the name "Rabia" u already know its going to be good ! loved it !! Every pause gives us a time to relate and we do relate !! write more say more just being selfish it makes our day better every time such good words are poured into our ears ..... thank you !!
Just the way you release them from your custody, the words, the silence, the pauses ❤When I saw 'The Introvert's Banter', it was magic. I wished I could write like that and more importantly express, the way you do. I started watching slams because of you. I am grateful to you for that. They say if poetry, or the lack of it, hasn't touched your soul yet, you are still new to it. Waiting for more of such masterpieces.Thank you Rabia Kapoor. You and Shamir will always be my favourite. I hope I can see you perform live sometime. :)
Oh my God. I am a huge fan of Kommune, specially yours Rabia. If you read the comments, and if it just registers in your head somehow that I simply adore you and I want to talk to you, that is more than enough for me. Keep writing and keep expressing. I love you.
Being an elder sis I can easily relate to it I also regret sometime that why I let go that precious time of my life so light heartedly. I always prefferd my friends to my brother .But now I always try to cherish each moment I spent with my Brother whenever we meet. Love you bhaie
I think all of u listening to her may be an introvert so,u know i don't have any brother and i wish i could have i always feel lonely without my non existing bro Rabia u r too awesome and i try to speak like u dear
Hey, I don't generally comment in any of the TH-cam videos, but I can't help now. You spoke with such an intense and deep emotions with an innocent voice and tone. Each little pause and the small shivering in that voice made my eyes wet! Amazing work. Keep going!!
The way you narrated it if I may, was so good! there's some kind of charm! you understand and feel the emotion, get where it's coming from! Nice work Rabia! ☺️
Journey from the introverts to since 2003, one can see the transformation towards confidence of a brilliant young girl named Rabia Kapoor! !♥😘😘 And this has turned to one of my favourite poems dear...♥😘
I relate..! I am 19.. My brother is 12.. and yes . I did behaved like this.. I am sorry for whatever I did.. I just can't apologize to him.. Rabia Kapoor.. Loved it..! Great work! Every line touched my heart❤😘
I have been searching for this so long. 69 likes and 0 dislikes. I thought i am never gonna see 0 dislikes on youtube on any video. even if with 349 views its not bad. Really nice story telling.
*cry alert* Being the older sibling, I can totally relate to this. And when m going to leave for the university 7 seas apart, I think the distance is only going to widen.😢😢
Your writings are truly AMAZING rabia!! U are an amazing person who describes those little untouched n unsaid emotions so beautifully that it reaches a persons soul !! Thanks a lot! You're an inspiration !! I honestly have no adjectives to reflect my feelings! This thing literally brought tears in my eyes!
this made me cry.. but oh my God how much I could relate at every level. I don't know if I should thank you for the video because it made me cry but man you're good. you are really good. keep up the good work.
We'd love to hear your favorite lines from the performance! Let us know which one you liked best in the comments below :)
slowly very slowly you stopped believing me, did you ??
Kommune India did you realize that the cape was just a bed sheet...😶
Kommune India i didnt realise that the monsters i was trying to protect u from was coming out of my own skin.
i didnt realise that the monsters i was trying to protect u from was coming out of my own skin
the purest emotion of missing someone in your eyes . before you broke into the shinest smile 😍
I'd never cried at a spoken word performance until...
Same. :)
Ashish Sharma same
same :)
I made the mistake of watching this in office, and now everyone is looking at me. and my tears.. You moved me beyond words Rabia.
Today i saw the confident Rabia Kapoor : ~ the journey from the introverts banter to a 19 year old sister who loves her brother. LOVED IT!!!!!!
Aryan Jain her* ;)
Even in introverts banter she was confident..
The transformation of a 3 year old kid to 13 year old boy, from adoring someone to understanding someone you showed us journey of your brother which you weren't part but you wish you had. My favorite line was ' You've seen the worst of me, but you always saw the best in me'. Hope to here more stories from you.
Its 4 am. Half an hour ago I cried coz I saw 1st part of Harry Potter.It dragged me to my early teens.
How jolly, carefree I was. I cried.
Now I saw this, lost a younger brother 4 years back.
Emotionally triggered, I am here typing and sobbing mutely as I have a roomie sleeping on the other side of room.
Sonam A. Negi Sad to hear that. May your brother's soul rest in piece. I always feel life is tough and harsh yet there is something very beautiful about it that I can't let it go. Live a great life and yeah your brother's always watching you. :)
Being an elder sister I could completely relate with this. Such a wonderful way of telling the story. Loved this. **teary eyes** :')
Hi Rabia (or my elder sibling),
Indeed you were my superhero, but you still are my first and foremost one.
You shouted at me- fought with me, but you know what I miss it now, the love I saw in your eyes after my knee was hurt, I miss it now.
You were busy with your friends in our room with the door locked, but I sneaked around and laughed on those lame jokes as u did.
You tried to gave me advice in my studies but little did u know, I was already following you!
After these many years, I never thought I lost you, rather I wanted to get rid of you amongst all the adolescence.
I needed you the least for I was busy with my friends but come on, I always wanted to share everything and anything with my first n best roommate.
I still believe that we would laugh and cry throughout the night with ur handmade Maggie and obviously snuggles in the sheet and enjoy the city by the window.
Don't you be sorry neither be forgiving, let's just forget whatever happened in between for us to be together again!
My dear, trust me I'd be the only one who would weep and stay awake the night you'll leave me! Trust me, I'd be the only one who would miss you the most, because I know my superhero won't be there anymore to give me a smile when I enter the home!
Yours,
Little baby.
Akshay Jamodkar u made me cry even more than she did.
Akshay Jamodkar dude you rocked!
Akshay Jamodkar
Are u for real?
Superb 😍😍😍😍😍
That moment when you read Rabia Kapoors name in the title ❤
According to me you are one of the best Kommune speaker..The way you spoke is phenomenal,your each and every pause during your entire storey makes sense.Your voice act as a tastemaker and adds life to the story.Looking forward to have such one of its kind soon...
You should have continued your story forever and ever...its too soulful..
rahul roushan jha
Samir is also good!
the way she moves her hands.......m falling in luv wid her(again and again)....Rabia is luv😍
I am sitting in the office seeing this and crying like a baby .Haven't spoken to my sister since past couple of months.I have always been there for her but never has she been there for me.Younger sisters blues.
I cried incessantly when I saw this. I've lost a relationship with my younger sibling too and I'm to blame. My story is very similar to this but a million times worse and I'm to blame. Thanks for making this. I'm sending this to my lil sister hoping she understands what I go through and what I have to wrestle with all the time. The guilt, the blame, the constant shame.
You are one of my favorite storytellers and, this performance was again, a masterpiece.
Any hindi sotry teller u know
Beautifully crafted....
Being an elder I could completely relate. Don't know how many times I have watched it....written while in *teary eyes*
I love how this poem is just pure emotion!
I never thought I could shed tears coz of a recital. A slam. The words come out to you. Every word seems to be relatable. Its beautiful.
There is many an elder sibling whose story your words mirror. You have the gift of words that can heal. Thank you for writing and performing this. :)
The way you look at tiny little moments in life, i guess nobody has ever had. One of the best I've ever heard[& on repeat mode].
Blessings little joy.
You need to put on a cry alert, you guys! I am the kind that doesn't cry easily and I still struggled to complete the video without having to go wash my face.. This is hard hitting.!
Ms. Rabia Kapoor, Take a bow!
I never cried at a spoken word. And then I happened to listen this. I'm still teary in my eyes. So beautiful ❤❤❤❤
Amazing... It's just an amazing... I m having a 7yrs younger brother... And i m watching it 3rd tym but it always brings tears 2 my eyes..... Every tym i watch it again i realize how much i love my brother... My donkey.... I love him... Thanks rabia kapoor... U r just wonderful...
"we could share the bedsheet maybe"
oh. my. god.
this was so good!!
thank you :')
Rabia, it's wonderful to see you going ahead in your life and doing something that you love. All your poetries are spectacular, though this one is amazing on a different level. I remember you and your brother from the short time we spent together in our childhood. You were my only friend then and even after being the immature kids we were you were mature and protective when it came to your brother. This poetry made me cry.
Thank you for making me realize that i m still the superhero of my young sister, use the bed sheet as a cape to protect her from every kind of threat. I had never been soft heartened to my sister in front of her, always spoke in harsh tone, but really I really care a lot for her. I stay in a college hostel and whenever we use to talk on phone, I remember I never spoke to her for more than 2 minutes ever. But now I will become the superhero I always wanted to be. Thank you for bringing tears in my eyes. :)
This is my first ever comment on TH-cam ever and I think it's all worth it. I just cannot be more inclined towards her words and "lack of poetry". She does speak my mind and my words. Much praise for her always!
d way uh grab Ur hands..shows Ur helplessness..
d way uh narrates ,Ur every single pause shakes us a bit...
d way Ur eyes yells out d purity of ur heart..d break in Ur voice.. loved Ur narrations..stay blessed..😇😍😘😘😇😇
i was giving a thought of skipping this rabia kapoor's story but god knows what made me stop on this. trust me dear, uh nailed it. like inside out. my eyes filled wth the tears. i managed to add a barricade for not embarrassing myself in front of the public. hats off girl!
It's my DAT exam tomorrow, and I was just searching up spoken word poems to brush up my language and I fell across this one, I'm crying.... Art makes you feel things and I hope I'm able to achieve even half of what she has.
my di And I face the same situations Yesterday again it happened And today she sent me this link Saying maybe It was my fault...You just made me realise maybe i'm wrong at times..Thanks alot For making us realise our importance for each other..
Amazing compilation and above all the way you (Rabia) express all those words.
I remember one dialogue from movie aligarh, "Kavita shabdon mein Kahan hoti hai. Kavita shabdon ke beech mein milti hai. Silences mein. Pauses mein. " and I believe this dialogue acurately stands perfect for your way of expressing words.
Even do my sisters don't say sorry ,I have imagined you as my sisters and accepted that in the story ,thanks for creating this story .😃 I have really got tears in my eyes because now also my sisters don't realize this thing and both of them show elderly behavior 😔
every time I watch u speaking ...I feel ur telling my story...ur emotions..the way u speak..I wish I could share my story like u do ...thank u for sharing...I don't no why but I feel light...
every words are just so pure ; like your love towards your brother. Thank you .
This is the sweetest thing i have seen online in a while, thank you Rabia kapoor, no one can tell a story better than you! Really moved, waiting for more of these!
Beautiful...never thought or cared much about this untill i realized I'm in tears (hardly ever) while watching this...Going to share this with my Didi.
I'm watching this in a public train and must figure out a way to stop the tears before the station arrives. Thank you for this
I'm watching this again Nd again . And every time I watch this I cry like a baby
How simply she described every aspect of her story! Truly mesmerized.
"when you grow up your candlelight heart will be bent out of shape because of me" 😢
Rabia you are amazing. I'am an elder sister and I could relate a lot. All this while I used to boast amongst my friends that me and my brother are the bestest of friends. But just three weeks back, I got to hear from one of my friend that my brother feels that I've changed. It broke my heart you know. I still don't know how to deal with it.
Lovely story Rabia. And keep up the good work kommune. It's pleasure watching your videos. All the best.
The moment u see the name "Rabia" u already know its going to be good ! loved it !! Every pause gives us a time to relate and we do relate !! write more say more just being selfish it makes our day better every time such good words are poured into our ears ..... thank you !!
Boy, am i glad to stumble upon this! This is not a video. Its an EXPERIENCE. Please tell me this girl has her own channel!!
this poem is all about me, having a brother 12 years younger to me. oh! you made me so guilty today.
Jennifer Das it is never too late
This is so beautiful......I can't stop crying. Absolutely unforgettable.
Just the way you release them from your custody, the words, the silence, the pauses ❤When I saw 'The Introvert's Banter', it was magic. I wished I could write like that and more importantly express, the way you do. I started watching slams because of you. I am grateful to you for that. They say if poetry, or the lack of it, hasn't touched your soul yet, you are still new to it. Waiting for more of such masterpieces.Thank you Rabia Kapoor. You and Shamir will always be my favourite. I hope I can see you perform live sometime. :)
oh I cried so much for my sweet little sister whom I miss so much and unwanted barriers had now come between us ..I love you for this
This touched my heart ♥ i have a younger brother too and m 8 years elder to him... And i miss him now...i really do
I've never cried seeing a spoken word performance. luved d way u presented nd shared ur story t which I can relate to.
The best line of this poem is the silence.. speaks a lot.. shows how there is so much more that she can go on speaking
I never cried this much!!
Oh my God. I am a huge fan of Kommune, specially yours Rabia. If you read the comments, and if it just registers in your head somehow that I simply adore you and I want to talk to you, that is more than enough for me. Keep writing and keep expressing. I love you.
I was in tears as u stopped ..... I can completely relate
Being the eldest one with two younger siblings, I felt all the emotions in your words.The regret of taking them for granted stays on.
thanx...for giving words to my story
Being an elder sis I can easily relate to it I also regret sometime that why I let go that precious time of my life so light heartedly. I always prefferd my friends to my brother .But now I always try to cherish each moment I spent with my Brother whenever we meet. Love you bhaie
Already Watch it 100 of times but this tym also itleft me crying and sobbing..... Amazing rabhia
What a heartfelt letter to the lil one! ❤
Hazel D'souza
Is she is talking about her bro ?
Thank you!
First performance ever to extract a downpour of tears through me.
When I am gonna go to a university few seas across , I am scared that you will be happy to see me go ... *emotions*
Kishore Kumar will u breath easily......🤔
perfect lines
Balled my eyes out. Rabia Kapoor killin it each time
I think all of u listening to her may be an introvert
so,u know
i don't have any brother and i wish i could have
i always feel lonely without my non existing bro
Rabia u r too awesome and i try to speak like u dear
She is playing with the hands that means she is tensed and anxious..I never cry easily but this one is ♥
she was soo awsm...I loved it 😘it just made me cry my heart out....
its sooo beautiful!! and full of emotions!! the girl who performed is amazing!! HEARTLY WISHES TO ALL OF YOU !!
:)
A Catharsis for me ..the way you rendered..each second it moved me deeply
Should it bother me that the vulnerability and honesty struck a chord in me? Beautifully written ! Mesmerized :)
You inspire me to write.
i cried watching that, i 'm a writer too and it almost broken my heart and then you made it look all fine again..
It is always a delight to listen to her poems.
I have no words to describe my feelings.. I had goosebumps.. Wonderful
Her voice is MAJESTIC
Hey, I don't generally comment in any of the TH-cam videos, but I can't help now. You spoke with such an intense and deep emotions with an innocent voice and tone. Each little pause and the small shivering in that voice made my eyes wet! Amazing work. Keep going!!
The way you narrated it if I may, was so good! there's some kind of charm! you understand and feel the emotion, get where it's coming from! Nice work Rabia! ☺️
This video quickly reminded if elder sister! I miss her now. I have never cried so much!
that is the writing of highest caliber, beautifully deep and honest.
Best line "I'm not the superhero I promised you I would be."
Best and the most emotional content on internet.... Made me cry...
I always hv been loving u d way u narrate d story... so calm n sweetness..
Journey from the introverts to since 2003, one can see the transformation towards confidence of a brilliant young girl named Rabia Kapoor! !♥😘😘
And this has turned to one of my favourite poems dear...♥😘
WOW!!! DEEPLY TOUCHED!!! WHAT A DELIVERY!! You had my eyes well up!! BRAVO!! Cheers!!!
I relate..! I am 19.. My brother is 12.. and yes . I did behaved like this.. I am sorry for whatever I did.. I just can't apologize to him.. Rabia Kapoor.. Loved it..! Great work! Every line touched my heart❤😘
One of the best stories I have heard. Always amazing Rabia Kapoor...
Gonna be the most beautiful thing i watched today on TH-cam
loved it....really wish if it never ended
It just can't get better. I'm so touched by this. Just wanna say a big Thank You :)
Beautiful. Everything about it.
I have been searching for this so long. 69 likes and 0 dislikes. I thought i am never gonna see 0 dislikes on youtube on any video. even if with 349 views its not bad. Really nice story telling.
*cry alert*
Being the older sibling, I can totally relate to this.
And when m going to leave for the university 7 seas apart, I think the distance is only going to widen.😢😢
one tiny tear drop rolled down my cheek after this
wow, enchanting indeed. i couldn't stop myself clapping after the video ended.
oww... so heart touching.. i almost got tears in my eyes...and the way u expressed all the emotions..awsome😊
Your writings are truly AMAZING rabia!! U are an amazing person who describes those little untouched n unsaid emotions so beautifully that it reaches a persons soul !! Thanks a lot! You're an inspiration !! I honestly have no adjectives to reflect my feelings! This thing literally brought tears in my eyes!
Every emotion is relatable, this is pure gold,👌👌👌👌
goosebumps...my god...stop making me cry!
this made me cry.. but oh my God how much I could relate at every level. I don't know if I should thank you for the video because it made me cry but man you're good. you are really good. keep up the good work.
You are amazing, i never remember crying at a spoken word before this.
Absolutely Amazing.
The way she tells the story adds upon the emotions to the words! You're ♥️♥️ Rabia
I loved Rabia’s poetry. It’s disarmingly honest, speaks directly to your heart. Please do keep writing, performing and sharing :D