The veil between - original song about commuting and breaking through the sense of us and other

Commuting can be a strange business of travelling through tidal flows of people for decades who are familiar but nameless and unknown. This song is about being a little more open in these daily travels to others and the whole experience.
I’m playing a parlour acoustic guitar in open G# minor.
The picture was AI generated by Microsoft Copilot.
The captions were generated by VEED hence the logo on the video.

[@alfonsdemunter]

Hallo Phil, this is a great interpretation of a lovely original song my dear friend ... very enjoyable listening !
👍👍 BIG like 3
I wish you a happy new week ... Fons.

[@carsickphil]

Hi Fons, thank you for your kind words and encouragement

[@davidmeister_ch]

Hello Phil, this is beautiful poetry and great interesting music. You weave the two in a wonderful song that many people can relate to I believe. The veil is lifting from time to time but apart from that we're very much caught in our own business. I have not commuted to work in some time but I do remember well the days when I did.

[@carsickphil]

@@davidmeister_ch Hi David, thanks for your thoughtful words and support. And all your inspiring music. I might be little over a year away from giving up my daily commute to work - quite something as I’ve spent around 26 years walking to pretty much the same bit of the city each working day.

[@johnnyl1957]

Hey Phil . . . . a nice upload Mate. Always enjoy your arrangement/chords, but very much related to your lyrics in this one. Enjoyed Phil. 🎼 🎤 🎸 👏 👍🏻 ✌

[@carsickphil]

@@johnnyl1957 Hi Johnny, thanks for your always encouraging and kind feedback. Looking forward to your next song. It’s been a good few months now since you released one - hope all is well.

[@johnnyl1957]

Always my pleasure Phil. I like what you share Mate.
I haven't given up on uploading onto YT but my health hasn't been all that good for a while now. 😔
Cheers Phil. ✌ 🎼

[@CarlosWilde]

Very good composition and I think the voice really matches the mood. Well done, my friend. Stop by if you get the chance. Have a great day!

[@RandyStrubleBackingTracks]

Well done!!

[@carsickphil]

Thank you Randy