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Good story, overall. His comment about her competence (I think a different word was used) was downright insulting - not smart, since she was his lifeline, & truly stupid for a diplomat to say. Another clickbait blurb; you don't need them. She's reptilian, so the art is WAY off. Don't think he realized how much she trusted him in that final battle, giving him command of her team. It was fun, watching that trust build. A sequel has potential.
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Great storytelling, but dicscriptions hardly lineup or are misleading
Awesome
Great story! Need a part #2! The title suggested that they may have fallen in love. Do they!?
I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm currently working on a second part to explore that very question, so stay tuned! 😊
Good story, overall. His comment about her competence (I think a different word was used) was downright insulting - not smart, since she was his lifeline, & truly stupid for a diplomat to say. Another clickbait blurb; you don't need them. She's reptilian, so the art is WAY off. Don't think he realized how much she trusted him in that final battle, giving him command of her team. It was fun, watching that trust build. A sequel has potential.
Great story. Coming from me, that might almost sound like a compliment (sorry, that line came a bit often...)
Glad you enjoyed it!