Sorry. I couldn't finish the book. It started as Damen mate was husband step sister, and then it became his stepbrother. Does the writer not proofread what was written.
52:44 Bookmark, I dont like that it was about a girl and switched to a guy..but okay its a good story 1:14:24 Okay there was a jump in thr story, at first they were trying to get along and get used to each others company- just eaging breakfast and next chapter, they already done it many times and shes happy?!?!?! What the heck happened?!?!?! Im so confused!!!
I can't handle this story anymore. With one voice telling the whole story i'm totally confused. I have no idea which is which mate. Because i'm confused so bad I got a bad headache over it. Thank you
Sorry. I couldn't finish the book. It started as Damen mate was husband step sister, and then it became his stepbrother. Does the writer not proofread what was written.
Can you use the right adjective and not the wrong ones
This is a gay love story. It's completely ok. If you have a thing against gay love stories this isn't for you.
52:44
Bookmark,
I dont like that it was about a girl and switched to a guy..but okay its a good story
1:14:24 Okay there was a jump in thr story, at first they were trying to get along and get used to each others company- just eaging breakfast and next chapter, they already done it many times and shes happy?!?!?!
What the heck happened?!?!?! Im so confused!!!
Never switched, character's name was Elliott from the beginning
Is this story about two dudes? It's confusing as hell smh this is crazy.
It's probably a bad AI translation
I was just thinking the same lmao 😂
It is about two guys
How did we go from being kidnapped to delivery babies in the hospital! This a strange stories with very transitioning!
Why are there long cut outs , it’s hard to fallow.
There will be new stories soon, everything is succinct there
Or poor transitioning
Great story. Thank you for sharing.
I can't handle this story anymore.
With one voice telling the whole story i'm totally confused.
I have no idea which is which mate. Because i'm confused so bad I got a bad headache over it.
Thank you
Thanks for the idea, I'll think about how to implement it