Okay the story is very good I did enjoy it I like the plot line I also like the character development I do like how this deviated from the normal story I like how you put a little bit more detail in it I do wish it was a lot longer I hope you come back pick a part two and keep up the good work
@@rinokumera5907 I've been tempted to on a few occasions, but finding the motivation to has been difficult, and being unsure people would come back, it's been 4 and a half years since I published Chapter 17.
Yay the Uzumaki is learning fuinjutsu
Okay the story is very good I did enjoy it I like the plot line I also like the character development I do like how this deviated from the normal story I like how you put a little bit more detail in it I do wish it was a lot longer I hope you come back pick a part two and keep up the good work
Fun intro. Defenetly in character for Naruto to protect ppl he never met before
I would love to see part 2❤❤❤❤🥰😍
Please make part 2
Why do you never link the fanfics? Or continue the series you start?
They do give link
@@FazeelAbbas-dh5mmnot this chanel look in the description before saying they do.
Second
Dusk & Dawn by TC9078 17 chaps
Thank you
Yu da man
I still have the half I wrote of Chapter 18 around somewhere. This story was an unfortunate casualty of the pandemic.
@@TCsPage ah i see, based on what you said you don’t intend to continue it?
@@rinokumera5907 I've been tempted to on a few occasions, but finding the motivation to has been difficult, and being unsure people would come back, it's been 4 and a half years since I published Chapter 17.
What's the name of this fanfic?