This one is REALLY good, I can already smell the yt shorts claiming to be leaked screenshots already! Jokes aside, this one is genuinely great and I genuinely want it to become popular.
Glad you like it. Usually, most SML creepypastas involve nothing but spineless murder or the demise of a character. I wanted to create something that delved into a very real subject. I didn't do a perfect job as... well, it's SML, but I'm happy with how it turned out either way.
This reminds me a lot of the Garfield Halloween special where Garfield realized he was slowly starving to death in an abandoned house and hallucinated jon and odie
If I'm being honest, while yes, this is one of the better SML pastas. There are a few issues I do have with it such as the episode concept being a bit cliched since I've seen this concept in multiple other creepypastas and the whole "I work with the crew who made the IP this story was based on" card was also used which I'm not particularly a fan of since it was already done in other lost episode creepypastas. But this one is nowhere near as bad as most modern creepypastas. Not even close. Keep improving your writing.
Yes, I'll admit that as the writer, this pasta is flawed, but I'm happy with how it turned out on my end. It was moreso meant to be a challenge for me as most SML pastas are the same thing, over and over. As for the concept of the episode, I personally think that involving mental illness or serious crimes like murder can be done correctly, clichéd idea or not. The execution matters more.
This was really good. Two minor nitpick though: When Mario and Bowser brought the mansion, Does Bad Things Guy sold them the mansion, not Brooklyn Guy, and I would’ve preferred it if the protagonist found out about the episode due to it being a patron exclusive or a deleted reupload from the SML reuploaded channel. Him being a cast member buts a little bit of disbelief in the story but that’s just me. Overall, I’d give this one a solid 8/10. Really good as always man!
i was planning to create a creepy video on my plush series where Micky mouse (mario best friend) and other characters are having a feast and then Pikachu and spiderman pleaded with Micky mouse to make them soup and being the nice guy he is he said yes and he walked to the kitchen but he didn't find ingredients for the soup and then he got a idea.............. and when...... when........ Pikachu and teddy care came alone because they have a date but then.... micky mouse came out of the bed slowly then Pikachu and teddy care scream then micky mouse hold a axe and cut one of teddy care eye then Pikachu scream "WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS????" then micky mouse said slowly *why am i doing it? well you stole teddy care even if I'm a adult you stole her from me.....* Pikachu then said*YOU ARE A CREEP* Micky mouse then said again slowly *maybe i am maybe not but i got the idea of turning you guys into soup the feast is going to have round 2 in the evening* then Micky mouse tie up teddy care but then he imagine that teddy care actually love him but it's was just his imagination THEN HE PULL UP A CHAINSAW and said now yelling hostile *IT'S WAS JUST MY IMAGINATION FUCK FUCK NOW IT'S KILLING TIME* then he cut the room and killed Pikachu and teddy care then he fixed the room and turn them into soup....... then we get a scene of only micky mouse just eyeing the camera no movements no sounds..... then previous plush videos audios echo in his head then he said quietly*i wish i can turn back time* and his wish was granted and then he got teleported in the kitchen again and Pikachu and teddy care run to him saying"can we help* Micky mouse then nodded yes but the end card is Micky mouse with a bloody face and humanoid eyes image and the bottom text saying "if i can't have you nobody can........"
This is SO good! I can literally imagine how every scene would play out! +1 subscriber
This one is REALLY good, I can already smell the yt shorts claiming to be leaked screenshots already! Jokes aside, this one is genuinely great and I genuinely want it to become popular.
Glad you like it. Usually, most SML creepypastas involve nothing but spineless murder or the demise of a character. I wanted to create something that delved into a very real subject.
I didn't do a perfect job as... well, it's SML, but I'm happy with how it turned out either way.
This reminds me a lot of the Garfield Halloween special where Garfield realized he was slowly starving to death in an abandoned house and hallucinated jon and odie
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the part where brooklyn guy questions who tf marvin is talking about made me laugh but at the same time this sml creepypasta is sad
If I'm being honest, while yes, this is one of the better SML pastas. There are a few issues I do have with it such as the episode concept being a bit cliched since I've seen this concept in multiple other creepypastas and the whole "I work with the crew who made the IP this story was based on" card was also used which I'm not particularly a fan of since it was already done in other lost episode creepypastas. But this one is nowhere near as bad as most modern creepypastas. Not even close. Keep improving your writing.
Yes, I'll admit that as the writer, this pasta is flawed, but I'm happy with how it turned out on my end. It was moreso meant to be a challenge for me as most SML pastas are the same thing, over and over.
As for the concept of the episode, I personally think that involving mental illness or serious crimes like murder can be done correctly, clichéd idea or not. The execution matters more.
@LafawndaPasta I could see this happening with smg4
Can I just say your impressions of the SML charachers are spot on.
This was really good.
Two minor nitpick though:
When Mario and Bowser brought the mansion, Does Bad Things Guy sold them the mansion, not Brooklyn Guy, and I would’ve preferred it if the protagonist found out about the episode due to it being a patron exclusive or a deleted reupload from the SML reuploaded channel.
Him being a cast member buts a little bit of disbelief in the story but that’s just me.
Overall, I’d give this one a solid 8/10. Really good as always man!
I didn't want to mention Does Bad Things Guy in the story. His name alone is a tension killer for me.
@@LafawndaPasta True, but Chef Pee Pee is kind’ve a stupid name to.
My Alternate Take On This SML Creepypasta
Rosalina (Rose): Mario (Marvin), The Accident Was 3 Years Ago. You Hace To Let Us All Go!
That’s sad and dark man
Its so cool you made your very own creepypasta
3:29 Bowser jrs happy meal flashbacks?
ALso it was 2016 when Jeffy joined SML
This was amazing man
Much appreciated.
Laughstockproductions Is The Creator Of A SML Fan Series Called SML: The Grieving!
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Nice creepypasta
i was planning to create a creepy video on my plush series where Micky mouse (mario best friend) and other characters are having a feast and then Pikachu and spiderman pleaded with Micky mouse to make them soup and being the nice guy he is he said yes and he walked to the kitchen but he didn't find ingredients for the soup and then he got a idea.............. and when...... when........ Pikachu and teddy care came alone because they have a date but then.... micky mouse came out of the bed slowly then Pikachu and teddy care scream then micky mouse hold a axe and cut one of teddy care eye then Pikachu scream "WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS????" then micky mouse said slowly *why am i doing it? well you stole teddy care even if I'm a adult you stole her from me.....* Pikachu then said*YOU ARE A CREEP* Micky mouse then said again slowly *maybe i am maybe not but i got the idea of turning you guys into soup the feast is going to have round 2 in the evening* then Micky mouse tie up teddy care but then he imagine that teddy care actually love him but it's was just his imagination THEN HE PULL UP A CHAINSAW and said now yelling hostile *IT'S WAS JUST MY IMAGINATION FUCK FUCK NOW IT'S KILLING TIME* then he cut the room and killed Pikachu and teddy care then he fixed the room and turn them into soup....... then we get a scene of only micky mouse just eyeing the camera no movements no sounds..... then previous plush videos audios echo in his head then he said quietly*i wish i can turn back time* and his wish was granted and then he got teleported in the kitchen again and Pikachu and teddy care run to him saying"can we help* Micky mouse then nodded yes but the end card is Micky mouse with a bloody face and humanoid eyes image and the bottom text saying "if i can't have you nobody can........"
this is the comment of all time
@BricksQuestGuy yeah I quit plush videos:( but it's will be fine if someone make this idea real somehow someway
Countine this