Here’s a Shelly design : Shelly is based off an ammonite shell so you could make Shelly have no limbs and a giant ichor ammonite come out her head and it could act like an arm. You can do Shelly’s abilities but I think twisted Shelly would be extremely slow when walking around the map, but when she spots someone she is super fast and she will have trouble spotting people. To counter her terrible speed and sight she is able to slow down nearby extraction resembling her toon’s ability.
Shelly design i I think is Good and Scary but her Power or ability or whatever is not good is like toodles with debuff so i think need to change Anyway ur idea is amazing and great
I've had an idea on another video about a possible mechanic Astro could have. TL;DR is to make Astro into the "psychological horror" character with hallucinations. To elaborate, you know how when you are insanely tired, you may see visions in the corner of your eye, or the whole "sleep paralysis demon" thing when you aren't quite awake yet? Or if you've ever seen Nightmare on Elm Street, and how Freddy could attack the protagonists in the real world due to "micro-sleeping." What if Astro could screw with the player's minds with hallucinations, making them see things that aren't quite right. Let me give you an example, let's say you are on Floor 6, and there just so happened to be an Astro and a Glisten, the only two twisteds on this floor. You also have a friend with you, ironically, they also picked Astro. Sometimes, Twisted Astro could make a sound cue which informs the player that SOMETHING is fake, but what..? You hear the spotted sound effect, so you whip your head around expecting to see Twisted Astro, but nothing is there, nothing actually saw you. You see a twisted Goob... that can't be right, we already know that the twisteds on this floor are Astro and Glisten, then the "Goob" proceeds to fade away. You decide to calm Glisten down then head over to a machine real quick, right before you finish, you hear glass shattering right next to you. You swear you didn't see Glisten's warning text, so you take a quick look around and see Glisten, perfectly fine. You decide to go to the elevator since your fellow Toon friend is probably finishing up the last machine, when you spot Twisted Astro walking towards you. You decide to quickly dive into cover, and panic for a moment when they look directly at you, before they are revealed to actually be your friend.
I think that to make it even more scarier T. Astro should (when noticing a Toom) unveil his cloak just like the deer lord from SJSM. almost like T. Astro is trying to consume you with all his guilt and despair that haunted him before he turned Twisted.
Great job! Next up is Shellysaurus! The people forgot her, and she was real angry about it. I need her to be an Allosaurus. When she kills you, she will eat you or worse! Taxidermy...
add ons to the design When wandering around, T-Astro will have his mouth closed. His star eye is red and his other isn’t there ( only the hole in it remains. ) When his mouth opens, the black part of his face shows the outline of his mouth in red on its side. Due to being an alien, Astro has gained antennae in his twisted form ( they hang down in front of his face. They are colored black and a darker blue than his skin. ) Like the deer lord, Astro will open his blanket the closer he gets to the player, but instead of showing all of Astros previous victims, it will just show a red tinted version of the universe.
My version of Astro would just do nothing but cry when the lights are on but after a short period of time he will turn the lights off which will make him start attacking and overall a huge threat but when the lights turn back on he stops attacking this would continue until the floor is finished
While the model looks decently made, the design really feels out of placed with the game. But if your goal was to make him scarier, you sure did excell in that. Hope to see more, keep it up 👍
Idea : In a blackout Astro change into that and instead of walking he just float or slide also his mask slide off showing a loose jaw with a string of sticky ichor supporting it. When he spot you he will scream like sprout but louder and he float toward you also he open his robe to reveal red eyes
twisted sprout idea: he'll run like a spider with 2 more arms as they're all covered in ichor his scarf will have a mouth at the end of it his head is fully covered in ichor and has one eye in the middle of his face for his ability, he will not only summon vines by also summoning them from the ceiling but also launch his scarf basically making him a long range like scraps and goob finally he'll have a mouth sideways on his body
everything is good about it but the only thing I don't think is good is the blindness from his trail since it'll make trying to lose him behind a island near impossible and distracting him A NIGHTMARE i think it should just give you tiredness but the blindness is unfair. other than that good design and fun mechanics! (besides the blindness)
i think a good idea would be to make him look more alien, i know there aren't aliens on the Moon so do NOT call me stupid pls but to connect with the whole space thing, y'know
Can you do twisted goob actually scary for example you could make him Just like cartoon cat by how lanky idk this was my idea to remake twisted goob actually scary.
2:30 (😊NO HATE)where is the red eyes man😭😭😭😭and plus his legs were kinda evaporated I know it was based of another creature and another drawing but the thing those two have is some sort of way to show something is their deer lord we see their rib cage so we know their not a floating deer head with grandpas bedsheets and with the artist for the fan made design for asstroke They had a ghostly trail but this one has noting its kinda when squid ward ate all the crabby patties but it went to their upper body plus a lot Of mains and toons have ichor on them you may think its boring but in the end it is the design of almost all the twisters and getting rid of their design would be bad what im trying to say is that their is a lot of the normal dandy's world Twisted design that is missing like how every twisted has the eyes of normal toon being big round and have black big pupils with redness in them the mouth the body was fine the a lot of the redesign needs some inspiration from actual twisteds but do take my opinion with so much salt you could open a salt shop (what was I yapping about bro 😭😭😭😭)
"pebble go distract astro!"
"OH HELL NAH I QUIT"
GOOB DISTR-
"ID RATHER DIE A GRUESOME DEATH"
"Tisha go distract astro!"
Tisha: *Dies to astro while closing eyes*
Flutter go distract!
!!!!! (Hell naw i aint distracting that at all)
"COAL DISTRACT ASTRO"
*extracting* "what does distract mean?"
The poppy that was talking to coal: IT MEANS- * dies *
Here’s a Shelly design :
Shelly is based off an ammonite shell so you could make Shelly have no limbs and a giant ichor ammonite come out her head and it could act like an arm.
You can do Shelly’s abilities but I think twisted Shelly would be extremely slow when walking around the map, but when she spots someone she is super fast and she will have trouble spotting people. To counter her terrible speed and sight she is able to slow down nearby extraction resembling her toon’s ability.
Shelly design i I think is Good and Scary but her Power or ability or whatever is not good is like toodles with debuff so i think need to change
Anyway ur idea is amazing and great
I've had an idea on another video about a possible mechanic Astro could have. TL;DR is to make Astro into the "psychological horror" character with hallucinations.
To elaborate, you know how when you are insanely tired, you may see visions in the corner of your eye, or the whole "sleep paralysis demon" thing when you aren't quite awake yet? Or if you've ever seen Nightmare on Elm Street, and how Freddy could attack the protagonists in the real world due to "micro-sleeping." What if Astro could screw with the player's minds with hallucinations, making them see things that aren't quite right.
Let me give you an example, let's say you are on Floor 6, and there just so happened to be an Astro and a Glisten, the only two twisteds on this floor. You also have a friend with you, ironically, they also picked Astro. Sometimes, Twisted Astro could make a sound cue which informs the player that SOMETHING is fake, but what..?
You hear the spotted sound effect, so you whip your head around expecting to see Twisted Astro, but nothing is there, nothing actually saw you. You see a twisted Goob... that can't be right, we already know that the twisteds on this floor are Astro and Glisten, then the "Goob" proceeds to fade away. You decide to calm Glisten down then head over to a machine real quick, right before you finish, you hear glass shattering right next to you. You swear you didn't see Glisten's warning text, so you take a quick look around and see Glisten, perfectly fine. You decide to go to the elevator since your fellow Toon friend is probably finishing up the last machine, when you spot Twisted Astro walking towards you. You decide to quickly dive into cover, and panic for a moment when they look directly at you, before they are revealed to actually be your friend.
Thats so cool lol
goob : go distract twisted astro!
looey : am aint distracting that IS SO SCARY AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
“IS THAT THE GRIM REAPER”
I think that to make it even more scarier T. Astro should (when noticing a Toom) unveil his cloak just like the deer lord from SJSM. almost like T. Astro is trying to consume you with all his guilt and despair that haunted him before he turned Twisted.
2:28 he kind of looks like a bishop from cult of the lamb, especially with his arms sticking out😄
the thumbnail astro looks goofy ass
The scary one looks silly asf
HE LOOKED LIKE A FNAF CHARACTER😭🙏
Not like the og design doesn’t look like some cornball ass fueled animation meme character
@@John_OrangeFish LMAOOO
I'M DYING
What that kinda looks, I am not distracting that either twisted twisted V2
V who?
ultrakill
@@Gifwasweird V2= version 2
Great job! Next up is Shellysaurus! The people forgot her, and she was real angry about it. I need her to be an Allosaurus. When she kills you, she will eat you or worse! Taxidermy...
Id be terrified if i ever saw that, (Good job this looks cool!!)
Hii
My own alternate design for Astro was to make him look like a SLEEP paralysis demon.
2:22 you could try to do a supernova like shape on it because normal Astro’s right eye is a star
add ons to the design
When wandering around, T-Astro will have his mouth closed. His star eye is red and his other isn’t there ( only the hole in it remains. ) When his mouth opens, the black part of his face shows the outline of his mouth in red on its side. Due to being an alien, Astro has gained antennae in his twisted form ( they hang down in front of his face. They are colored black and a darker blue than his skin. )
Like the deer lord, Astro will open his blanket the closer he gets to the player, but instead of showing all of Astros previous victims, it will just show a red tinted version of the universe.
One thing i like to make him atleast threatening is make him Invisible,and he becomes more Visible the closer he is to you (Reflecting his Stealth)
1:17 spooky's jumpscare mansion mentioned!!!!!!!
You did an amazing job, and thanks for featuring my comment, hope you continue making content and good luck
Distractors going insane with these mechanics
My version of Astro would just do nothing but cry when the lights are on but after a short period of time he will turn the lights off which will make him start attacking and overall a huge threat but when the lights turn back on he stops attacking this would continue until the floor is finished
0:27 He's an alien sorta moon boi
what about turning twisted astro into the embodiment of nyctophobia? (the fear of darkness)
While the model looks decently made, the design really feels out of placed with the game. But if your goal was to make him scarier, you sure did excell in that. Hope to see more, keep it up 👍
"He's right behind me isn't he?" Ahh thumbnail-
the sound design is genuinely terrifying
“Erghuh eruh😭- EUGHAAAWWW”
Idea :
In a blackout Astro change into that and instead of walking he just float or slide also his mask slide off showing a loose jaw with a string of sticky ichor supporting it.
When he spot you he will scream like sprout but louder and he float toward you also he open his robe to reveal red eyes
twisted sprout idea: he'll run like a spider with 2 more arms as they're all covered in ichor
his scarf will have a mouth at the end of it
his head is fully covered in ichor and has one eye in the middle of his face
for his ability, he will not only summon vines by also summoning them from the ceiling but also launch his scarf basically making him a long range like scraps and goob
finally he'll have a mouth sideways on his body
He got rec room treatment
ngl, instead of astro reaching his hand out to damage you, he should use the end of his night cap as a whip or something, like scraps.
thats too scary for a minimal age horror game
He look a lot like one of the Bishops from the game Cult of the lamb
Make twisted shelly ACTUALLY scarier
Yeah I’m *NOT* distracting these two.
1:17 spookys jumpscare mansion mention RAAAAAAAAAA
Peb-
NAW YOU DISTRACT IT 4:36
is it just me or does it look kinda silly.
its just u
Not alone I view it like that too
I can see the similarities
3:31 veestro angst💔
Bro, why is he looks so goofy? He doesn’t look scary. He just looks like he wants to just we just want something to eat XD
make Shelly scary next
You can make twisted sprout scarier next
everything is good about it but the only thing I don't think is good is the blindness from his trail since it'll make trying to lose him behind a island near impossible and distracting him A NIGHTMARE i think it should just give you tiredness but the blindness is unfair. other than that good design and fun mechanics! (besides the blindness)
Gosh I would uninstall roblox and play hayday if that thing jumscared me out of the corner
IF HE MAKES THAT SOUNDS IM LEAVING THE THE GAME AW HELLLL NOOOO
YO! My suggestion was took! (I think, idk if you wanted to do it or not)
i think a good idea would be to make him look more alien, i know there aren't aliens on the Moon so do NOT call me stupid pls but to connect with the whole space thing, y'know
I think it would be cool if bro was a fishy
hell nah. and i thought goob plus blackout was worst
You should do Twisted pebble next
Can u do shelly next?
can you make a toon that is a frog that jump in areas that is impossible for toons to get to like top of book shelfs and can do a mega jump
Can you do twisted goob actually scary for example you could make him Just like cartoon cat by how lanky idk this was my idea to remake twisted goob actually scary.
dandy next plssssss
he's meant to be scary but hes just a big back currently :(
He has by far one of the better designs, though i do at least think he should have more than one twisted
@@doomlord0773"I agree with this person!"
*Checks name*
"Hey wait a minute-"
Bro look like a fnaf toon
I like it
0:12 gun
MY COMMENT APPEARED IN A VID!?!?!?!?!?!
WE NEED SHELLY NEXT!1!11!1!
Nah, she's like, the best designed twisted main
@@doomlord0773 fr😭
WHAT DID YOU DO TO MY BOI
PLEASE MAKE TWISTED PEBBLE SCARY PLEASE
Twisted pebble is already scary we dont need scarier
Goddamn you know you genuinely suck at making a horror game when people have to make your characters more scarier
3:35 goob
2:30 (😊NO HATE)where is the red eyes man😭😭😭😭and plus his legs were kinda evaporated I know it was based of another creature and another drawing but the thing those two have is some sort of way to show something is their deer lord we see their rib cage so we know their not a floating deer head with grandpas bedsheets and with the artist for the fan made design for asstroke
They had a ghostly trail but this one has noting its kinda when squid ward ate all the crabby patties but it went to their upper body plus a lot Of mains and toons have ichor on them you may think its boring but in the end it is the design of almost all the twisters and getting rid of their design would be bad what im trying to say is that their is a lot of the normal dandy's world
Twisted design that is missing like how every twisted has the eyes of normal toon being big round and have black big pupils with redness in them the mouth the body was fine the a lot of the redesign needs some inspiration from actual twisteds but do take my opinion with so much salt you could open a salt shop (what was I yapping about bro 😭😭😭😭)
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I don't not want THIS ASTRO
I dont model but that looks weird imo
But toodles acts like a dog
0:48 im sorry but your art look like a 6 yo draws it
I’m pretty sure it is concept.
0:30 and naming A shrimp shrimpo isnt?
Plus doesn't twisted pebble have extra limbs minus the ones he already has
Holy shit I'm this early
thats ugly not scary
can you model...
Uglily scary
@@BloxBloxxed122 yas now give me a catwalk
Yo I’m early
funny dandys world meme th-cam.com/video/o-YBDTqX_ZU/w-d-xo.html
the hell no links to videos or any of that crap-