This is my favorite storyline you have come up with so far. But you could really improve the pacing and continuity. For example, the first few episodes it is said that Deanerys already married Kal Drogo, and you had Varys in King's landing trying to keep John a secret so the realm didn't ignite. Then all of a sudden, Varys is with John, having revealed his parentage, and they go and meet Viserys and Deanerys in Braavos. In episode 5, the tensions with Viserys mounted and the others chose to leave him behind, but now in this episode he's traveling with them. There is aslo the fact that in this episode Robert Baratheon is in Winterfell recruiting Ned to be hand kf the King, but that already happened in Episode 1
At this point I’m convinced that time does not travel at the same pace in both continents, part 2 mentions red wedding happens already , and then now it starts with Robert heading to winterfell, and didn’t we ditch viserys in pentos at the last part
@@barronstormblade4552I thought he was contradicting things. Didn't they decide to leave Viserys behind in episode 5? And then episode 6 opens with him going to Bravos with them
I'm surprised that these two aren't in that stronghold outside of Volantis... they speak of "safe places," but they seem to forget their options... great work, as always..
I’m so confused. if Robert is still alive. Then the war of the five kings never happened. Is Robb still alive? Did the red wedding never happen? Were the whisperer about the wars of the five kings a lie and Robb still alive or is the writing just confusing to me? Fr bro give me some clarity please
You might want to listen instead of coming here with complaints... dude already had you covered, yet you show up, whining about something that's already here... Maybe listen first and complain later... geez, Carlos. Get a grip..
This is my favorite storyline you have come up with so far. But you could really improve the pacing and continuity. For example, the first few episodes it is said that Deanerys already married Kal Drogo, and you had Varys in King's landing trying to keep John a secret so the realm didn't ignite. Then all of a sudden, Varys is with John, having revealed his parentage, and they go and meet Viserys and Deanerys in Braavos. In episode 5, the tensions with Viserys mounted and the others chose to leave him behind, but now in this episode he's traveling with them.
There is aslo the fact that in this episode Robert Baratheon is in Winterfell recruiting Ned to be hand kf the King, but that already happened in Episode 1
Yes Ghost lives. This is Great. I can’t wait for part 7.
At this point I’m convinced that time does not travel at the same pace in both continents, part 2 mentions red wedding happens already , and then now it starts with Robert heading to winterfell, and didn’t we ditch viserys in pentos at the last part
He has contradicted himself many times in earlier parts he says Daenerys has already married Khal Drogo
@@barronstormblade4552I thought he was contradicting things. Didn't they decide to leave Viserys behind in episode 5? And then episode 6 opens with him going to Bravos with them
@@LockeCPM4 I know and they had Ned in Kings Landing and now he just left the north
@@barronstormblade4552 and Viserys meeting Shadowfire for the first time again in this episode 🤦
@@LockeCPM4 it's like watching someone with dementia write a story
Vaserius has met shadow fire before so his act now is false bravado.
I'm surprised that these two aren't in that stronghold outside of Volantis... they speak of "safe places," but they seem to forget their options... great work, as always..
Once again your own timeliness is off as Aegon/John snuck not of winter fell with his Dragon egg on the heal of Robert's pary flying Winterfell.
I’m so confused. if Robert is still alive. Then the war of the five kings never happened. Is Robb still alive? Did the red wedding never happen? Were the whisperer about the wars of the five kings a lie and Robb still alive or is the writing just confusing to me? Fr bro give me some clarity please
Also John/Aegon were re introduced to Vaserius while Ned was serving as hand of the king in kingslanding . Chpter3.
He might get back to winterfell before rob die and the attack on the wall by the wildings🙏🏿
MORE!!!
You better bring ghost back
🤫 he didn’t have to do it
You might want to listen instead of coming here with complaints... dude already had you covered, yet you show up, whining about something that's already here...
Maybe listen first and complain later... geez, Carlos. Get a grip..
Vasaerius is literaly only the regent as John/Aegon is the king.
wtf!. ever since part 2 of this. the time line is broken. inconsistent garbage
So basically Pt 2/3 didn’t happen? Thats fine. Still a great plot line 👌🏽
What’s the time line from when John left to now ? And great story keep it up
Gooooooooood 🎉❤😮
Appreciate bringing ghost back but timeline is off so has to fix dragon growth development and the war of five kings.
Amazing. You should get this animated. I would pay literal monies for that.
Next one!
did they say 5 dragons
Thx for your efforts.. this has become an epic tale... ❤
Great story but your timeline is pretty f***** lol