Shockwave being the main villain Age of Extinction makes better sense than Lockdown. It bugs me how Michael Bay wasted the Decepticon mad scientist in the 3rd movie just to kill him off, when he could’ve been much more in the Bayverse.
@@KnightsRealm98fr tho. Also I love the plot twist when it comes to Nemesis. I thought it was just gonna be a dark reflection of Prime. Then it cut to Cyclops
The glimpses of Unicron and other memories Nemesis Prime gets from the matrix when it grants him a spark got me so hyped! Same with Shockwave transmitting to him! I loooove a good TFA reference and that’s such a good way to go about it
@@claymore4935 I'm excited for where Nemesis's story is going to go. There's a lot of ground to cover, both with him being a darker Optimus and kind of a Frankenstein's Creature (one of my favorite fictional anti-heroes)
@@KnightsRealm98 your take on Nemesis gaining sentience has me so intrigued! His desire to learn more of his creation and what he is rather than learning more of the world and life around him from Optimus just leaves me dying in anticipation to see how more of his story unfolds and how he’ll react to Shockwave and his intentions! (If he truly shares them at all that is) Ngl kind of crazy to me how there hasn’t been a mainstream variant of Nemesis Prime portrayed like a Frankenstein’s monster like this! Brilliant
I love how you wrote the scene at KSI labs. In the movie it was so underwhelming when they broke in and just left. The rescue mission was a great addition. Also how you gave nemesis prime life was awesome!
5:50 absolutely agree I do think nemesis prime is the superior choice, but i think a simularly valid candidate could've been motormaster. Breakdown is already on the roster, throw dragstrip in there and incorperate nightbird and stinger into the roster and you have your stunticons. Killing optimus prime becomes designated operation "king of the road". I don't think its logical that a human faction would figure out combining, so that would be doxxed points, but imo is still a neat setup for the stunticons, who were originally created with the sole purpose of beating the autobots at their own game.
On the top of the breakdown and bulkhead rivalry, I like the analogy of Wrecking Ball vs Hammer. Bulkhead is round like a wrecking ball and Breakdown is blocky like a hammer.
Crazy how you’re turning AoE into some top tier Transformers storytelling and utilizing characters and lore to the fullest when Hollywood can’t come close 👏 can’t wait for more
@@KnightsRealm98 Shockwave is Palpatine. Tensions between the autobots and the human antagonists are brewing. Optimus has been captured. A new planet sized threat is on the horizon. Whatever next?
Somehow I had a hunch that the “benefactor” had something to do with this. No one else would have knowledge on Cybertronian tech and overall functions.
the benefactor is now revealed to all I can guess shockwave is trying to rebuild the cons army to reignite the war also its interesting seeing nemesis prime here I wonder what you will do with megatron/galvatron in this re write project plus I guess now things will change for KSI now and what drift did there is very much like how I think prime Arcee would act seeing this stuff
Once again, this guy makes a banger of a rewrite. Always looking forward to these. Wish the actual movies were as respectful well written as these, and honestly I feel like you captured more of the horrific feeling the autobots should have had towards the idea of cybertronian corpses being melted down and turned into drones. Keep it up, man!
I like nemesis primes origin because he is not fully evil, he is a broken person and primes hate incarnate, only feeling the negative parts of primes life, entropy, dark thoughts, death, shadow and his inability to accept that he is alive, looking for purpose(like a identity crisis) and being manipulated by others making him think it's his purpose. He is a tragic, broken villain.
Hey Night, if you ever want the KSI bots, Nemesis Prime, Stinger, Nightbird, Breakdown, and Jetstorm, to combine into a Menasor-like combiner I have a configuration that may be interesting. Nemesis Prime: Main body Stinger & Nightbird: Arms Breakdown: Legs Jetstorm: Jetpack
@@KnightsRealm98 Indeed, and it would give the Menasor more danger to the Autobots cause he has the might of five robots, with one having the ability of teleportation and flight, making this Menasor a danger to anything and everything.
@@KnightsRealm98 so the matrix contained the memories of all the primes before, which is the reason why nemesis was able to experience everything. Does that mean that Optimus as well contains these same memories, and if so, is prime aware of the threat of unicron?
Kinda getting the feeling of a redemption arc with Nemesis Prime here, with him sacrificing himself in a Doc Ock "I will not die a monster" end for his character... Now watch as I end up being completely wrong! 🤣
Wow you replace galvatron with nemesis prime as a ksi drone plus that’s makes perfect sense and you also replace stinger with nightbird nice take knight realm
Funny enough someone else’s rewrite for this movie actually had Wheeljack in KSI’s possession before being freed during the Autobots raid, also I see that Thundercracker possibly lived to tell the tale and who’s voice the KSI Drones?
@@LordBumblebee1238 Peter's Nemesis as well. Jetstorm, Tom Kenny. Nightbird, Grey DeLisle. Stinger, Charlie Adler. Breakdown, Kevin Michael Richardson (as some fun parallels with Bulkhead in Prime).
@@KnightsRealm98 I see, also you know something about these five? You could have these guys as the Bayverse iteration of the Stunticons, even though of them is a jet.
@@will5554 It’s on Wattpad and made by AnimalX23, I recommend checking out his other rewrites first before reading AOE, The Last Knight, and what is currently a to be continued thing for Rise of Unicron
@@KnightsRealm98Also, if I did the casting for the KSI Bots or “Suto-Autobots”, Nemesis Prime and Jetstorm would stay the same, Stinger would be voiced by Scott McNeil, Nightbird would be voiced by Michaela Jae Rodriguez, and Breakdown would be voiced by Adam Baldwin.
@@KnightsRealm98 Makes sense I guess, also since Ironhide is dead, doesn’t that technically mean that it would be two of the bots fighting five of their counterparts? Since you said Breakdown was based off of Ironhide not Bulkhead
I know that a certain someone will be playing a significant role in this story but I honestly love the idea of a transformers series without the decepticons as the villains. It opens up so many more possibilities
Will Wheeljack get some new upgrades or a new vehicle form? Also if i was in the story, being one of the few to confront Aintiger, I would say this, "Well Aintiger, if you like being a roman so much. Then perhaps you should roman these nuts!"
Why aren't you the head writer of Transformers?? 😔😔😔 Also i can see that Rod is slowly taking that young guy rookie role that Bee had in the first 🎥 11:39 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Drift had him all like "Boy you betta shut yo dumb a-!" 24:24 Woah, woah woah, wait is that who i think it is?😲😲 Holy- you made Shockwave the main villain of the film genius move!
Sorry if this question has asked before but is Galvatron gonna be appearing in a future film? And if he is then what’s going on with Cyclonus since Skywarp is no longer around to be reformatted into him? Also I tried to post this comment before and it seemingly didn’t come through. In it I posted a link to Pinterest where I saw a redesign of Optimus(knight mode) and was curious about your thoughts on it.
@@heisenburger9950 1. Maybe. We'll see how future Rewrites go. 2. I have Cyclonus always being his own bot, like in the comics or pretty much and continuity that isn't G1. I prefer it that way.o 3. Can't comment as I never saw the link.
@@stephenhounsell7257 The Dinobots and Maximals are two separate factions. If they are to feature, they will not be together. Saying whether they will or won't is also a spoiler.
Not trying to be rude or anything like that but if nemesis prime replaces galvatron...is the evil optimus from tlk still gonna be a thing or it's gonna be staight up removed?
@@Venomguy43 The entire premise of TLK was awful, so I'm throwing it all out. There's literally nothing from that movie that I have *any* desire to address. The others all had a good premise at least, together with some genuinely good scenes here and there, but TLK is an incredibly painful movie to sit through with no redeeming qualities that I could see. So no, no evil Optimus.
Dude. Do you need help writing these things? I'll gladly help, I wanna flex my writing skills for my hopeful future as a Free Lance Writer. Also I am a Transformers fan too :)
@@callumcrane241 Writing is the one area I'm good in. I like to write. Only part I don't enjoy is editing (and recording if my allergies are acting up).
Bruh the fact that this man can write a better script in a few months than Hollywood writers come up with in years is insane
Shockwave being the main villain Age of Extinction makes better sense than Lockdown. It bugs me how Michael Bay wasted the Decepticon mad scientist in the 3rd movie just to kill him off, when he could’ve been much more in the Bayverse.
Oh my god I love Joshua’s reaction to The Autobots.
“Hey! This is private property! You are tre- OHHHHHHHH.” 😂😂😂
@@YourLocalFriend0410 All that sass goes out the window when a giant katana is being pointed at your face
@@KnightsRealm98fr tho. Also I love the plot twist when it comes to Nemesis. I thought it was just gonna be a dark reflection of Prime. Then it cut to Cyclops
Also that line “Oh Primus not him.” Is so chilling
I feel like once Lockdown is introduced he should have minions of his own
Also, would Lockdown’s minions have names like Doubledealer, Bug Bite or Flamewar?
@@stephenhounsell7257 I don't know it depends on who The Knight's Realm uses
The glimpses of Unicron and other memories Nemesis Prime gets from the matrix when it grants him a spark got me so hyped! Same with Shockwave transmitting to him! I loooove a good TFA reference and that’s such a good way to go about it
@@claymore4935 I'm excited for where Nemesis's story is going to go. There's a lot of ground to cover, both with him being a darker Optimus and kind of a Frankenstein's Creature (one of my favorite fictional anti-heroes)
@@KnightsRealm98 your take on Nemesis gaining sentience has me so intrigued! His desire to learn more of his creation and what he is rather than learning more of the world and life around him from Optimus just leaves me dying in anticipation to see how more of his story unfolds and how he’ll react to Shockwave and his intentions! (If he truly shares them at all that is)
Ngl kind of crazy to me how there hasn’t been a mainstream variant of Nemesis Prime portrayed like a Frankenstein’s monster like this! Brilliant
Babe wake up, Knight's Realm posted again!
Yes dear
I love how you wrote the scene at KSI labs. In the movie it was so underwhelming when they broke in and just left. The rescue mission was a great addition. Also how you gave nemesis prime life was awesome!
In 8:42 drift should said in his charge “DRIFT” if you know what reference is that
5:50 absolutely agree
I do think nemesis prime is the superior choice, but i think a simularly valid candidate could've been motormaster. Breakdown is already on the roster, throw dragstrip in there and incorperate nightbird and stinger into the roster and you have your stunticons. Killing optimus prime becomes designated operation "king of the road". I don't think its logical that a human faction would figure out combining, so that would be doxxed points, but imo is still a neat setup for the stunticons, who were originally created with the sole purpose of beating the autobots at their own game.
@@supercanadaeh9483 Definitely a good argument for the Stunticons, but I've always been a sucker for Nemesis. And, well, evil clones in general
@@KnightsRealm98 same! I'll be curious to see if there's any survivors among their ranks for this one.
On the top of the breakdown and bulkhead rivalry, I like the analogy of Wrecking Ball vs Hammer. Bulkhead is round like a wrecking ball and Breakdown is blocky like a hammer.
I had a feeling shockwave was the benefactor ever since part one. The voice seemed too familiar
Bro had a vision
Crazy how you’re turning AoE into some top tier Transformers storytelling and utilizing characters and lore to the fullest when Hollywood can’t come close 👏 can’t wait for more
Hasbro needs to hire him ASAP
Knight's Realm is back!!!
well we’ve seen Wheeljack, just need to see Mirage, Arcee and ol Jetfire
Now I'm fully on board with this rewrite and i can't wait to see nore of this New trilogy
24:24
Chaos will reign soon...
Shockwave is on some palpatine ahh behavior
@@3000bigrandy Goooood, Nemesis, gooood
@@KnightsRealm98 Shockwave is Palpatine. Tensions between the autobots and the human antagonists are brewing. Optimus has been captured. A new planet sized threat is on the horizon. Whatever next?
Can’t wait to see where this is gonna go!
Somehow I had a hunch that the “benefactor” had something to do with this. No one else would have knowledge on Cybertronian tech and overall functions.
the benefactor is now revealed to all I can guess shockwave is trying to rebuild the cons army to reignite the war also its interesting seeing nemesis prime here I wonder what you will do with megatron/galvatron in this re write project plus I guess now things will change for KSI now and what drift did there is very much like how I think prime Arcee would act seeing this stuff
so shockwave is the main villain of transformers 4: age of extinction
Once again, this guy makes a banger of a rewrite. Always looking forward to these. Wish the actual movies were as respectful well written as these, and honestly I feel like you captured more of the horrific feeling the autobots should have had towards the idea of cybertronian corpses being melted down and turned into drones. Keep it up, man!
Got a silly idea, nemesis prime could combine with jetstorm to mirror optimus' combination with jet fire.
I like nemesis primes origin because he is not fully evil, he is a broken person and primes hate incarnate, only feeling the negative parts of primes life, entropy, dark thoughts, death, shadow and his inability to accept that he is alive, looking for purpose(like a identity crisis) and being manipulated by others making him think it's his purpose.
He is a tragic, broken villain.
Hey Night, if you ever want the KSI bots, Nemesis Prime, Stinger, Nightbird, Breakdown, and Jetstorm, to combine into a Menasor-like combiner I have a configuration that may be interesting.
Nemesis Prime: Main body
Stinger & Nightbird: Arms
Breakdown: Legs
Jetstorm: Jetpack
@@LordBumblebee1238 Not a bad concept
@@KnightsRealm98 Indeed, and it would give the Menasor more danger to the Autobots cause he has the might of five robots, with one having the ability of teleportation and flight, making this Menasor a danger to anything and everything.
The writing and voice acting is 10/10 someone hire this guy for a show or movie!
Really happy to see more of this Story it is Really cool
Great rewrite again. Perfect way to spend my birthday
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Wait, so did optimus prime witness unicron consuming a planet at one point?
@@3000bigrandy Some bearer of the Matrix did. Likely Prima
@@KnightsRealm98 so the matrix contained the memories of all the primes before, which is the reason why nemesis was able to experience everything. Does that mean that Optimus as well contains these same memories, and if so, is prime aware of the threat of unicron?
@@3000bigrandy He is, though Unicron hasn't been seen since the Golden Age
@@KnightsRealm98 I’m very intrigued to see how your version of the transformers mythology will play out
Man I WAS MIND BLOWN BY THIS!
Kinda getting the feeling of a redemption arc with Nemesis Prime here, with him sacrificing himself in a Doc Ock "I will not die a monster" end for his character...
Now watch as I end up being completely wrong! 🤣
Or maybe a herald of unicron
Right on the money.
I bought snacks just for this moment
jazz was gonna appear in cyberverse as a female but was cut, jazz was a male in the cyberverse toyline
9:22 "ERM what the siGma?"
Jokes aside this is a really good rewrite!! 🙌🏻
This is amazing
Awesome Rewrite so Far!👏✨
Drift is like Dinobot from Beast WARS.
Nemesis vision
1. Megatron’s rise 24:15
2. Sentinel’s betrayal 24:17
3. The Fallen’s conquest 24:19
4. Unicron 24:25
Who’s Darcy? All I hear is a good rewrite.
Will we get to see Arcee, Mirage, and Jetfire again?
@@LordBumblebee1238 Maybe
@@KnightsRealm98 I see
Cool
part 3 part 3 part 3 part 3
Wow you replace galvatron with nemesis prime as a ksi drone plus that’s makes perfect sense and you also replace stinger with nightbird nice take knight realm
@@gfuelmonster5415 Stinger's still there. It's him, Nightbird, Breakdown, and Jetstorm along with Nemesis
Lets goooooooo!
If these were the transformers movies we got, these movies would have become more popular than the mcu
UFFF BROOOOOOIIIIIIIIIIIII
It was Shockwave all along!
@@benjamingibbons3593 Someone should make that parody
@@KnightsRealm98 Yeah.😁
Funny enough someone else’s rewrite for this movie actually had Wheeljack in KSI’s possession before being freed during the Autobots raid, also I see that Thundercracker possibly lived to tell the tale and who’s voice the KSI Drones?
@@LordBumblebee1238 Peter's Nemesis as well. Jetstorm, Tom Kenny. Nightbird, Grey DeLisle. Stinger, Charlie Adler. Breakdown, Kevin Michael Richardson (as some fun parallels with Bulkhead in Prime).
@@KnightsRealm98 I see, also you know something about these five? You could have these guys as the Bayverse iteration of the Stunticons, even though of them is a jet.
Which rewrite is this? Going to have to take a look
@@will5554 It’s on Wattpad and made by AnimalX23, I recommend checking out his other rewrites first before reading AOE, The Last Knight, and what is currently a to be continued thing for Rise of Unicron
@@KnightsRealm98Also, if I did the casting for the KSI Bots or “Suto-Autobots”, Nemesis Prime and Jetstorm would stay the same, Stinger would be voiced by Scott McNeil, Nightbird would be voiced by Michaela Jae Rodriguez, and Breakdown would be voiced by Adam Baldwin.
How did I miss this? Edit: Nemesis Prime perfect choice
If KSI were going to base off a transformer from Arcee why didn’t they just make Flamewar?
@@LordBumblebee1238 I like Nightbird more
@@KnightsRealm98 Makes sense I guess, also since Ironhide is dead, doesn’t that technically mean that it would be two of the bots fighting five of their counterparts? Since you said Breakdown was based off of Ironhide not Bulkhead
@@LordBumblebee1238 Bulkhead is essentially Ironhide's replacement in KSI's eyes. To them, they may as well be the same
@@KnightsRealm98 Yeah that’s true, wonder what the other KSI Bots will do if they realize there on the wrong side?
Wonder what star screams up to
I’m kinda shocked that they chose Galvatron to be the failed clone of Optimus instead of Nemesis Prime
I know that a certain someone will be playing a significant role in this story but I honestly love the idea of a transformers series without the decepticons as the villains. It opens up so many more possibilities
Will Wheeljack get some new upgrades or a new vehicle form? Also if i was in the story, being one of the few to confront Aintiger, I would say this, "Well Aintiger, if you like being a roman so much. Then perhaps you should roman these nuts!"
@@josephburbank7293 He'll probably switch to a different mode to be further in disguise. Like a sports car instead of an Italian race car.
Based on Prowl's anger at Attinger's words, did Prowl never questioned Optimus sending the Allspark off-world?
Wheeljack with 1 leg
Remake this unlikely film is 😋
Wheeljack alive! :D
Wheeljack ,prisoner 😔
Why aren't you the head writer of Transformers??
😔😔😔
Also i can see that Rod is slowly taking that young guy rookie role that Bee had in the first 🎥
11:39 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Drift had him all like "Boy you betta shut yo dumb a-!"
24:24 Woah, woah woah, wait is that who i think it is?😲😲
Holy- you made Shockwave the main villain of the film genius move!
Will cyclonus be in any rewrites
@@Babo_S23 Maybe
The Knight's Realm do you like animals with weirdly long hooves?
Aoe is the best tf movie
KSI reminds me of MECH from Transformers PRIME.
MECH is his favorite human villain for the Autobots to face, so he probably did that on purpose
Sorry if this question has asked before but is Galvatron gonna be appearing in a future film? And if he is then what’s going on with Cyclonus since Skywarp is no longer around to be reformatted into him? Also I tried to post this comment before and it seemingly didn’t come through. In it I posted a link to Pinterest where I saw a redesign of Optimus(knight mode) and was curious about your thoughts on it.
@@heisenburger9950 1. Maybe. We'll see how future Rewrites go.
2. I have Cyclonus always being his own bot, like in the comics or pretty much and continuity that isn't G1. I prefer it that way.o
3. Can't comment as I never saw the link.
Breakdown created by MAN.
Will we see the Dinobots as part of the Maximals if they come up in the future?
@@stephenhounsell7257 The Dinobots and Maximals are two separate factions. If they are to feature, they will not be together. Saying whether they will or won't is also a spoiler.
Not trying to be rude or anything like that but if nemesis prime replaces galvatron...is the evil optimus from tlk still gonna be a thing or it's gonna be staight up removed?
@@Venomguy43 The entire premise of TLK was awful, so I'm throwing it all out. There's literally nothing from that movie that I have *any* desire to address. The others all had a good premise at least, together with some genuinely good scenes here and there, but TLK is an incredibly painful movie to sit through with no redeeming qualities that I could see.
So no, no evil Optimus.
@@KnightsRealm98 ok but you are keeping Megatron and having him be remade into galvatron in that movie I bet
Great video. 😁. Do you know metallo from super man? I just wanted to know.
@@Me.Winter Yes, I do. Pretty interesting villain
Nemis prime no fucking way
I would probably base Nemisis Prime's personality on the original Bayverse Prime.
24:39
30:17
Dude. Do you need help writing these things? I'll gladly help, I wanna flex my writing skills for my hopeful future as a Free Lance Writer.
Also I am a Transformers fan too :)
@@callumcrane241 Writing is the one area I'm good in. I like to write. Only part I don't enjoy is editing (and recording if my allergies are acting up).
@@KnightsRealm98
Fare enough.
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