Paper 1 Question 4 Edexcel English Language GCSE - Evaluation

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  • @its.blessings171
    @its.blessings171 6 ปีที่แล้ว +70

    best evaluation walkthrough on youtube..please do more videos!!!

    • @claresclass1142
      @claresclass1142  6 ปีที่แล้ว +19

      Thanks so much for your comment!! I am planning to do more as the current ones were a bit rushed ... wanted to do them in time for the November resit but hope to do better ones soon too.

    • @AlexStafford11
      @AlexStafford11 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@claresclass1142 hey Clare! I’m a student doing English language and I have an examon the November 2nd 2020 and I want to know if this is the same way to answer question 4 on paper 1 ?

    • @darthjarjar696
      @darthjarjar696 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@AlexStafford11 this is Paper 1 q4

    • @hope987
      @hope987 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@AlexStafford11 I have the exam tomorrow :((

    • @RandomClipz210
      @RandomClipz210 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@hope987 lol ik this is a 6 months old comment but i have it tmrw too

  • @shadikhalil3957
    @shadikhalil3957 5 ปีที่แล้ว +43

    I didn't revise until last second and this vedio helped me pass. Actually insane

  • @kayra1907
    @kayra1907 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This is the best evaluation i've ever seen Thankyou so much

  • @hamzahqureshi8324
    @hamzahqureshi8324 5 ปีที่แล้ว +45

    use CASE IT
    Character
    Action
    Setting
    Event
    Ideas
    Theme
    Also, use evaluative phrases e.g. the writer judiciously/ cleverly/ skilfully/ successfully etc
    You're Welcome

    • @Emma-ie4dx
      @Emma-ie4dx 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      thank you, this is so helpful

    • @jjkirbyy
      @jjkirbyy 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      :))

    • @jellyjoplays9855
      @jellyjoplays9855 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      I prefer to use site
      Settings
      Ideas
      Themes
      Events

    • @vipermufc1589
      @vipermufc1589 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Bro, it's SITE not this trash thing u made up

    • @vipermufc1589
      @vipermufc1589 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @Thivanika Uthayakumaran what is wrong with ur name

  • @suziemcdon6721
    @suziemcdon6721 6 ปีที่แล้ว +14

    brilliant explanation really helped

  • @A10-g9x7y
    @A10-g9x7y 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Iam going to year 11 and THIS is helping me so much thank you clare

  • @mustyshorts9880
    @mustyshorts9880 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Thanks love u made me pass,these videos benefited me alot and i just wanna say thanks .

  • @primroseinmypocket
    @primroseinmypocket ปีที่แล้ว +2

    1: Look for bits in the text that relate to the question
    2: How does the writer create this?
    3: How well did they do this?
    4: Show the evidence.
    Notes: Write anything, settings.
    Evaluate: successfully, outstandingly, advanced.
    References, evidence.
    Tone
    P Creates this by____ *Add evidence quote* How? It makes the reader feel..
    Specific words used: explain___
    Do 4-5 of these
    Connotations
    *GO DEEP INTO THE EXPLANATIONS*

    • @claresclass1142
      @claresclass1142  ปีที่แล้ว

      Sounds like a plan! good luck tomorrow!

  • @MrClean-vz6zu
    @MrClean-vz6zu 5 ปีที่แล้ว +33

    As a man of Jesus I approve very good

    • @vish_n9684
      @vish_n9684 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      none asked a hole

  • @franksaunders1960
    @franksaunders1960 6 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Clare I love the vids keep it up

  • @anitabluee
    @anitabluee ปีที่แล้ว +3

    tysm 2hrs before ahah

    • @snyvy
      @snyvy ปีที่แล้ว +1

      we got this

    • @anitabluee
      @anitabluee ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@snyvy how was it?????

  • @rockstarvolkov4256
    @rockstarvolkov4256 4 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Can you make videos for students aiming for 7s 8s and 9s too please

  • @m2akvlogz352
    @m2akvlogz352 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Do we have to talk about language and structure? Or can we just talk about one of them

  • @elliebolton9263
    @elliebolton9263 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Thank you so much for this vid, extremely helpful ❤️

  • @unknownhijabi1882
    @unknownhijabi1882 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    would this be grade 7-9 level

    • @unknownhijabi1882
      @unknownhijabi1882 ปีที่แล้ว

      and im guessing not so what do we change to make it 9 marker quality

  • @muhammadumer2490
    @muhammadumer2490 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hi Clare,
    I have written my response down for this question and other question, but I am unable to get any feedback on them.
    Can you please help me out.

  • @samiroebadi7614
    @samiroebadi7614 ปีที่แล้ว

    how many paragraphs to answer this question?

  • @user-pe3kg4ju8x
    @user-pe3kg4ju8x 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Really helpful, thank you!

  • @serebe4358
    @serebe4358 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    very well explained and helpful for someone starting edexel english language.

  • @rudytube3153
    @rudytube3153 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    these are very helpful thank you

  • @taosnishat1
    @taosnishat1 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thanks very much for the great video!. Please could you do some more video like this will really really appreciate, I have been looking around cant find videos like yours at all.

  • @yiliachen188
    @yiliachen188 6 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Thats so helpful! But how many points and paragraph should we write for this question?

  • @chaoticartist1305
    @chaoticartist1305 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    great video! you sound like my teacher

  • @melissamelodies3729
    @melissamelodies3729 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This is amazing

  • @JohnSmith-mu8zo
    @JohnSmith-mu8zo 5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    can we mention language and structure points to show how this is achieved

    • @claresclass1142
      @claresclass1142  5 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Yes! As long as it's relevant to the question then writing about language and structure would be great!

  • @neoclassica2700
    @neoclassica2700 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you! :)

  • @heartssmiles9032
    @heartssmiles9032 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    🙏 this vid helped soo much. By the way will this get u a grade 8 or 9?

  • @youtubeacc8925
    @youtubeacc8925 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Do u have to use
    S I T E
    To get full marks?

    • @aaronrajimon312
      @aaronrajimon312 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Nah you dont have to

    • @youtubeacc8925
      @youtubeacc8925 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      Aaron Rajimon lovely

    • @claresclass1142
      @claresclass1142  5 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      You don't have to... if they are useful then use them (setting especially may be useful in Paper 1) but don't look for SITE examples if they are not there. Just use whatever is relevant to the question

    • @youtubeacc8925
      @youtubeacc8925 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Clare's class thank you clare

    • @sxmz-7284
      @sxmz-7284 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      My teacher uses that to

  • @merveilleekalakala9870
    @merveilleekalakala9870 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    how many minutes do you spend on this question

  • @yd_priv1640
    @yd_priv1640 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    amazing

  • @serebe4358
    @serebe4358 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    can you do revision tips for english language/litrature

  • @AlexStafford11
    @AlexStafford11 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    Does anyone know what SPITE stand for? i need to know before friday

    • @arismanolov9927
      @arismanolov9927 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      do you have ur exa,m?

    • @AlexStafford11
      @AlexStafford11 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@arismanolov9927 yes

    • @kemiashiru9004
      @kemiashiru9004 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      setting,people,ideas,themes,events

    • @AlexStafford11
      @AlexStafford11 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @Massimilians Valdes Quinteros Lol.

    • @AlexStafford11
      @AlexStafford11 ปีที่แล้ว

      @Massimilians Valdes Quinteros passed 2 years ago… You’re too late

  • @cubby184
    @cubby184 5 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Who's ready for tomorrow?

  • @haz1788
    @haz1788 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    What about students aiming for 6/7?

  • @vipermufc1589
    @vipermufc1589 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Can you stop saying 4's or 5's. Like, excuse me but some people are tryna get a 9??? if u know what i mean?? 9 is the highest everyone should be aiming for??? not flipping 4???

    • @omarthestick9758
      @omarthestick9758 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      Stfu u bitch

    • @xd4mii
      @xd4mii 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@omarthestick9758 they’re right. Some people want to aim higher.

    • @vipermufc1589
      @vipermufc1589 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@omarthestick9758 man's rattled and shocked by the mere mention of a grade he'll never get, a 9.

    • @kitwalker4722
      @kitwalker4722 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      a level 5 is a grade 9 you’re obviously an idiot

    • @user-ms2bl4gg7h
      @user-ms2bl4gg7h 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      depends if you're higher or lower tier. if ur on lower it's impossible to get a 9 in the exam. it also depends on ur target grades too. if someone's barely passing why would they try jump to a 9, they need to master the basics too. and is it that hard to believe that some people are just trying to pass 💀

  • @nothing-ti7ps
    @nothing-ti7ps 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    It thing you should talk about line 45 too

  • @russellprice8065
    @russellprice8065 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    anyone in my english class here?

  • @tayyababrar6766
    @tayyababrar6766 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    so boring