I don't understand how people can supposedly fall in love so quickly. This makes no sense at all. It is like a story written by a child that never had a relationship at all.
When it comes to a later stage in life its more like out of fear of being alone. When it comes to getting married in less than a year in every damn story I dont know what to tell you, because it doesnt make sense. Its probably so that characters are not ancient when kids move out to college ;p
I did at 18. Although I have since learned it was Lust, love had nothing to do with it. Within 6 months of good times we decided to get married. Within a year I knew it was a huge mistake. When we were wed and the preacher asked her "do you" I should have asked "and with who" A major red flag was her incredible bedroom talent at the age of 18. But with that talent, smoking body and a face worthy of a magazine cover, what young man could resist, definitely not I.
Sorry, but as a father you should never say you like one child over a other. Everyone is loved equally. I know it does not work out like this, but at the end of the day, this is what it should be. Wonder if Carls wife had more then ine affIair. Would not surprise me.
In Kingdom Come games, an NPC remark that nobility family connections are difficult to follow. After listening to this story, I came to understand why it is so especially with cousins, blastgard, etcs.
The best way to listen to all of these at double speed. But YES, it needs editing. Now it seems every story needs to be 1 hour or longer. Most of it is repeating the same phrase over and over ad-infinitum.
So they have made you believe. How many centuries have people lived and not been concerned about medical history? It is not important at all. If it was you would need to know what your grand, grand, grand, grand, grand, grandparents medical history. After all history is history only when complete.
This was a pleasant story but it really needed some editing. The dialogue was stilted and sounded a bit like everyone had English as a second language.
This was an interesting story poorly executed. it's interesting to see how everyone reacted when the affair was unveiled but listening to Carl and Laura's interactions is very.... Disturbing they jumped into this too easily
I have a suggestion: Please use a female voice for female characters. This story had so many perspective changes that I lost track too often to really enjoy some later parts. With a different voice it would be far easier to realize a change of perspective at least, considering the lack of pause whenever the current voice announces it.
@@randysmith9636 Well that's not the point though; it'd be for better clarity when it comes to following the plot in cases like this story. Sometimes I find it difficult to follow switching the narrator when it's just announced with a half-sentence that blends into everything else every now and then.
Too many viewpoints too many words without need. Seems it is purposely long where not needed. It is a good premise for a story that is poorly presented.
Could you please limit the time on your stories to 30 minutes. I have listened to them for a long time, and find that you repeat phrases over and over. I will give a thumbs down on every story, even if it was an okay story, until I see them 30 or less minutes.
I don't understand how people can supposedly fall in love so quickly. This makes no sense at all. It is like a story written by a child that never had a relationship at all.
When it comes to a later stage in life its more like out of fear of being alone. When it comes to getting married in less than a year in every damn story I dont know what to tell you, because it doesnt make sense. Its probably so that characters are not ancient when kids move out to college ;p
Some confuse lust with love and not having the knowledge to know the difference. Of just don't care.
Because they don’t want to write “Months later …..”
I did at 18. Although I have since learned it was Lust, love had nothing to do with it. Within 6 months of good times we decided to get married. Within a year I knew it was a huge mistake.
When we were wed and the preacher asked her "do you" I should have asked "and with who"
A major red flag was her incredible bedroom talent at the age of 18. But with that talent, smoking body and a face worthy of a magazine cover, what young man could resist, definitely not I.
Are there enough names in this story? Maybe another dozen characters… 😂😂😂😂
The way the talking is written does not coincide with normal English.
Expected a drama movie... Ended up with a documentary... These many characters!!!
This one’s not so good
Sorry, but as a father you should never say you like one child over a other. Everyone is loved equally. I know it does not work out like this, but at the end of the day, this is what it should be. Wonder if Carls wife had more then ine affIair. Would not surprise me.
In Kingdom Come games, an NPC remark that nobility family connections are difficult to follow.
After listening to this story, I came to understand why it is so especially with cousins, blastgard, etcs.
Basic story was good but I think to much unnecessary details where crammed in towards the end.
This is my main complaint with the story. After the broken ankle incident, the story became unbearable.
I enjoyed the premise of the story. As others have stated, the story would have benefited with a bit of editing.
The best way to listen to all of these at double speed. But YES, it needs editing. Now it seems every story needs to be 1 hour or longer. Most of it is repeating the same phrase over and over ad-infinitum.
Emily deserved to know who her biological father so she at least has the medical history, that is very important.
So they have made you believe. How many centuries have people lived and not been concerned about medical history? It is not important at all. If it was you would need to know what your grand, grand, grand, grand, grand, grandparents medical history. After all history is history only when complete.
This was a pleasant story but it really needed some editing. The dialogue was stilted and sounded a bit like everyone had English as a second language.
Lost love chronicals WHAT have you fone to your channel??????
Gave up after 4 mins.
bored
This was an interesting story poorly executed. it's interesting to see how everyone reacted when the affair was unveiled but listening to Carl and Laura's interactions is very.... Disturbing they jumped into this too easily
I have a suggestion: Please use a female voice for female characters.
This story had so many perspective changes that I lost track too often to really enjoy some later parts.
With a different voice it would be far easier to realize a change of perspective at least, considering the lack of pause whenever the current voice announces it.
I don't know if listening to a Siri or Alexa voice would be that pleasant.
@@randysmith9636 Well that's not the point though; it'd be for better clarity when it comes to following the plot in cases like this story. Sometimes I find it difficult to follow switching the narrator when it's just announced with a half-sentence that blends into everything else every now and then.
Too many viewpoints too many words without need.
Seems it is purposely long where not needed.
It is a good premise for a story that is poorly presented.
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Could you please limit the time on your stories to 30 minutes. I have listened to them for a long time, and find that you repeat phrases over and over. I will give a thumbs down on every story, even if it was an okay story, until I see them 30 or less minutes.
Why dont you try our other channel, Lost relation chronicles. It has short stories.
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