Your thumbnail - "From gun to fun" - reminds me of something that I heard in boot camp: "This is my rifle, and this is my gun. "One is for shooting and one is for fun."
@theloneranger8725 The name might come from the new boots issued to each recruit and the amount of marching they have to do in those new boots. And not every boot camp focuses on weaponry. The Navy camp is focused on training recruits to accepting orders without question, teaching them the basics of being a sailor, and physical fitness.
A tale of the perfect warrior discovering that everything doesn't have to be perfect and finding your own way of doing things. Also, protecting people rather than just giving orders and killing people.
Good story. One of the best I have seen. I've noticed that your stories appear to be better and more coherent than the others on YT. However, is the supposedly orphaned girl at the end of the story the same one Jack rescued in the station? If so, what happened to the girl's mother, to whom the girl was returned after the rescue? If this is the same girl, you have a big error in your plot unless her mother was killed after the rescue.
Love her colour, nice change from luminescent pale blue.😅😅
Your thumbnail - "From gun to fun" - reminds me of something that I heard in boot camp:
"This is my rifle, and this is my gun.
"One is for shooting and one is for fun."
I love it hehe
Good quote. Makes me wonder why they call it Boot Camp instead of Rifle Camp.
@theloneranger8725
The name might come from the new boots issued to each recruit and the amount of marching they have to do in those new boots.
And not every boot camp focuses on weaponry. The Navy camp is focused on training recruits to accepting orders without question, teaching them the basics of being a sailor, and physical fitness.
Great story. Thnx!
Thanks a lot!
A tale of the perfect warrior discovering that everything doesn't have to be perfect and finding your own way of doing things. Also, protecting people rather than just giving orders and killing people.
Absolutely! It's a powerful journey of growth and realizing that true strength comes from compassion and connection, not just combat skills.
Good story. One of the best I have seen. I've noticed that your stories appear to be better and more coherent than the others on YT. However, is the supposedly orphaned girl at the end of the story the same one Jack rescued in the station? If so, what happened to the girl's mother, to whom the girl was returned after the rescue? If this is the same girl, you have a big error in your plot unless her mother was killed after the rescue.
Thanks a lot. I'll check with the gang regarding the girl and the mother
Enjoy the story! Would you date the killer machine?
Depends on which killer machine…
He went in back door