[Important] JAPANESE PRONOUNS: I forgot to address this in the video, but watch out that you don't use the wrong pronouns from what DeepL gives it to you. In my case, while I freely used "boku", it is a pronoun mostly used by young boys. But in the song, the singers are 15-year-old girls. The appropriate pronoun to substitute is "watashi". However, "boku" can be used by them as well in today's age. My novel just gives another reason why it's alright for them to use "boku". You can also use "boku" if "watashi" is too long to sing. Whether you can also use the formal "wareware" instead of "watashitachi" depends on the formality of your song. In my case, there is public declaration, so it was alright. That said, my Japanese lyrics are said to be still off and somewhat inaccurate. It goes without saying. Don't worry about rhyming. There are only five vowels so most lines should coincidentally rhyme. Also, Hatsune Miku is technically not the very first VOCALOID, but it is for a generation of voice-characters.
[Important] JAPANESE PRONOUNS:
I forgot to address this in the video, but watch out that you don't use the wrong pronouns from what DeepL gives it to you.
In my case, while I freely used "boku", it is a pronoun mostly used by young boys. But in the song, the singers are 15-year-old girls. The appropriate pronoun to substitute is "watashi". However, "boku" can be used by them as well in today's age. My novel just gives another reason why it's alright for them to use "boku". You can also use "boku" if "watashi" is too long to sing.
Whether you can also use the formal "wareware" instead of "watashitachi" depends on the formality of your song. In my case, there is public declaration, so it was alright.
That said, my Japanese lyrics are said to be still off and somewhat inaccurate. It goes without saying.
Don't worry about rhyming. There are only five vowels so most lines should coincidentally rhyme.
Also, Hatsune Miku is technically not the very first VOCALOID, but it is for a generation of voice-characters.
You just started enhancing familiarizing and reading notes since like 10th Grade. Look what you've become now.