दिल के टुकड़े रखे थे संभाल कर, एक टुकड़ा जाने कहा खो गया, कि दिल के टुकड़े रखे थे संभाल कर, एक टुकड़ा जाने कहा खो गया, दिल आज उसकी बात किये बगैर ही सो गया दिल आज उसकी बात किये बगैर ही सो गया, और उपरवाले ने मेरे हाथो मैं मोहब्बत की लकीर ही नहीं बनाई थी, मैंने जिससे भी दिल लगाया वो किसी और का हो गया
One of the greatest written stories ever. I could relate to Subodh's character so deeply. I have seen/ still see the same darkness in my life. I know what to feels like.
Great story sir, ❤❤❤👌🙏🙏ek hi pl m do zindagi jee li. Kahi na kahi ye such h ki hr kise ke andar ise prkar de 2 face h Or unme humesha yahi dwand chalta h ki zindagi ko kaise bahtr bnaye ya jaisa chl raha h chlne de... Lekin bdlav hum sb ko bdl jata h... 🙏🙏🙏❤❤👌👌
Well done deepak.. very sweet story it was yr.. I love the part where subodh asks maanvi regarding chai or coffee, it made me smile🤗 isi tarah sabke hothon par smiles dete reh❤️
Sir me aapki khaniyan hmesha sunti hun.aapki i awaj heart touching he.i am also writter.meri first novel ( subah) publish ho gai he. readers ne Like bhi Kari he.
wakai bohot pyari kahani thi. sun ke dil tak gayi. wakai do logo ki tanhaai unhi ke liye unke milne par mehefil ban jaati hai. ryt pyaar pada nhi jaata wo to jab rooh se guzare to mehesoos hota hai.
Mein aise environment me badi Hui jahan nadjik aur dur sare rishte aur logo se bas yahi dekha aur suna ki aadmi kabhi b aka aurat k sath nahi rahta,aur aurto ko pata hoti hai ki uska pati dusri k sath so kar aaya ya yahan tak ki ghar me v c*** girl aati thi,esliye mein ab jab dekhti ya sunti hu ki ak aadmi kisi ak aurat k liye samarpit hai to mujhe ye baat dusri duniya ki lagti hai
Story to acha tha par beech mein ad aata to imagination ki shrinkhla toot jati hai. The ads could come before it begins. Beech mein aapne Maanvi ko Manav bhi padha tha.
Subodh's character is actually me. I also had a breakup due to the same reason. That person was everything for me. 2 years have passed and still i m like subodh...and i hope someone like manvi comes in my life or i become my own manvi❤
Meri dost akanshya Jena ne bhi mujhe iss tarah 12 saal pehle tanah chodh diya tha 😞😟😟😞😟😞😟😟😞😭 💔 💔💔💔💔 💔 aur woh phir kabhi wafas nahi aayi 😟😞 😞 taqlif Hoti hai jab koi apna iss tarah hamhe tanah chodhkar chala jata hai hameshaa ke liye
Tera mera chhupana bhi kuch ek sa hai.Tu chhupa bhi leta hai mein jata bhi nahi pati.tujhe padh leti hoo ,tujhe pta kahan hai?.ki padhte padhte tujhe likhna sikh gayi hoo.tere bin kahe tujhe samjhna sikh gyi hoo. Sir, story kaise bhejte hai aapko?
Oh dear! Life is morose and sombre in it's daily run, as it is. Why must a story writer take us through those "reality shots," when he has the imaginative talent to write and create beyond the predictable?
*गुस्से में आके 1-2 दिन का प्रदर्शन करना,सोशल मीडिया पर 1-2 पोस्ट्स शेयर करना और फिर चुप कर के बैठ जाने का मतलब यही है कि आप उस चीज़ के बिना रह सकते हो और ये बगावत सिर्फ एक दिखावा था!* *बगावत या ढोंग?* th-cam.com/video/OlQsQ8NqRN4/w-d-xo.html
Please is platform ko bhi hindu muslim m mat bato...yaha kuch pal k sukoon k lie ata h har koi..literature ...nafrat failaane ki jagah kahin aur dhoond lo
Please is platform ko bhi hindu muslim m mat bato...yaha kuch pal k sukoon k lie ata h har koi..literature ...nafrat failaane ki jagah kahin aur dhoond lo
Khone ko to kuch orr nahi hai na....to krte hai ek oor khosish ....lets do it.......such a beautiful lines...thanks sir
अंधेरा इस बात का संकेत है,आगे उजाला है।बहुत सुंदर संकेत है,कहानी में।दीपक जी बहुत खूब।
दिल के टुकड़े रखे थे संभाल कर,
एक टुकड़ा जाने कहा खो गया,
कि दिल के टुकड़े रखे थे संभाल कर, एक टुकड़ा जाने कहा खो गया,
दिल आज उसकी बात किये बगैर ही सो गया
दिल आज उसकी बात किये बगैर ही सो गया,
और उपरवाले ने मेरे हाथो मैं मोहब्बत की लकीर ही नहीं बनाई थी,
मैंने जिससे भी दिल लगाया वो किसी और का हो गया
bht khoooob 👌
heartouching #charusaraswat
Wow ....😊😊😍
😍😍
❤️
दिल ना उम्मीद तो नहीं नाकाम ही तो है,
लंबी है गम की शाम मगर शाम ही तो है ❤️❤️
Dil Na umeed to nahi nakaam he to hai ,lambi hai gam ki Shaam Magar Shaam he to hai🙂
Hm inshtagram pr famous lines h ye
Kehna kitna asn h na
Yes 🙌
One of the greatest written stories ever. I could relate to Subodh's character so deeply. I have seen/ still see the same darkness in my life. I know what to feels like.
Yup...can feel it too
Wow 💕🌟 Absolutely speechless. You have given me hope with this story of yours, Deepak. Thank you for writing this. 🍃💫 You are magic.
😊
Humne aksar tumahri raho me ruk ke , apna hi intzar kya .........GULZAR SAHAB .❤
Kitni deeply leke chli jati hai apki awaj . ❤❤
Great story sir, ❤❤❤👌🙏🙏ek hi pl m do zindagi jee li. Kahi na kahi ye such h ki hr kise ke andar ise prkar de 2 face h Or unme humesha yahi dwand chalta h ki zindagi ko kaise bahtr bnaye ya jaisa chl raha h chlne de... Lekin bdlav hum sb ko bdl jata h... 🙏🙏🙏❤❤👌👌
Love doesn't hurt uh..loving someone who doesn't know how to love, hurts uh a lot!!
Neelesh paazi apki kahani bahut sukun deti hai ,bahut jyada💐👌
Well done deepak.. very sweet story it was yr.. I love the part where subodh asks maanvi regarding chai or coffee, it made me smile🤗 isi tarah sabke hothon par smiles dete reh❤️
Nyc story this story remember mine love story m also with someone with 3 years nd he was leaved in one second nd over everything 😔😔
Dil na umeed to nahi nakaam he to hai, lambi hai gum ki shaam magar shaam he to hai! 🙂
@@skyrunner3604 nyc lines
@@Kt2731-uk Just reminding you the lines you've already heard 🙂.
You are amazing sir. I like the way you read story I must say everyone can live your story.
ज़िंदगी के उस पार
एक और कोशिश...
मैं और तुम 🧡
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Amazing story sir❤
Very nice .I can't explain in words.
Life started with ur voice
Sir me aapki khaniyan hmesha sunti hun.aapki i awaj heart touching he.i am also writter.meri first novel ( subah) publish ho gai he. readers ne Like bhi Kari he.
Heart touching story bahut khoobsurat
Nice story👌👌👌👌👏👏👏👏
बहुत बढ़िया दीपक, हम भी गोरखपुर से है तो और अच्छा लगा।
Hum bhi 😍😍😍😍😍
Gkp me kaha ae?
@@poojasrivastava0629 Bawapar gaon naushad paar kar ke hai
@@poojasrivastava0629 aur aap
@@brijendra78 shah pur thana Aarogya Mandir
" दिल नाउम्मीद तो नहीं, नाकाम ही तो है
लंबी है गम की शाम, मगर शाम ही तो है "
पता नहीं आजकल मुझे क्या हो गया है, मेरा मन ही नहीं लगता है
Very nice story
Very good shayari
Bohat Sundar laga ...
And suddenly I cried....
Just waaooo 🥰🥰🥰🥰😊😊☺☺😊☺☺☺💞💞💞👌👌👌
I love your voice 😍 sir ........
🤗🤗🤗 me too
Where are you from alisha
wakai bohot pyari kahani thi.
sun ke dil tak gayi.
wakai do logo ki tanhaai unhi ke liye unke milne par mehefil ban jaati hai.
ryt pyaar pada nhi jaata wo to jab rooh se guzare to mehesoos hota hai.
Feeling heartbroken 💔😟💔💔💔😟💔😟💔😟
Shandar jabardast jindabad 👍 wo fazz ki sayri bahut acchi lagi sir ji
दीपक जी आप इसी तरह गुनगुनाते रहे और कहानिया बनाते रहे।
Bhut pyari kahani
Nice story 😊 sir
Osm Story sr
You hart taching khani nilis sar 😭😭😭😭😭💜💜💜💜💜👌👌👌👌👌
Bohot accha hai vedio
SUPERB SIR
Best story
Great story sir
Beautiful heart touching story
अति सुन्दर
जय शिव
1st view
Congratulations
An interesting story.
I like ur stories sir very nice stories
I love this too much sirrr
sir aap motivation story bhi sunaya kijiye bhut aahci lagegi aapke voice me
राम राम गुरु जी।
Love you sir 😘😘
Very nice
Heartbroken 😭😭😟💔😟💔😟💔
आपकी आवाज़ बहुत अच्छी है
O
Nice
Deepak ji
👌👍😊😊
❤❤❤
Everything in this ,i have feel already. 💕💕
Nice sir ji 👌👌🙏
❤️❤️😊
Too good
Sir ye story to purani h aur writter alg h aur aaj. 7 may 2020 ko v yhi story
Mein aise environment me badi Hui jahan nadjik aur dur sare rishte aur logo se bas yahi dekha aur suna ki aadmi kabhi b aka aurat k sath nahi rahta,aur aurto ko pata hoti hai ki uska pati dusri k sath so kar aaya ya yahan tak ki ghar me v c*** girl aati thi,esliye mein ab jab dekhti ya sunti hu ki ak aadmi kisi ak aurat k liye samarpit hai to mujhe ye baat dusri duniya ki lagti hai
Awesome
Story to acha tha par beech mein ad aata to imagination ki shrinkhla toot jati hai. The ads could come before it begins. Beech mein aapne Maanvi ko Manav bhi padha tha.
Thanx sir same stories my life
Nice sir g
Sir I also want to learn that how to write stories.. I am 15 year old my name-Gulshan prasad
Very good sir
Mai bhi Gorakhpur se ,😍😍😍😍 mere gkp se Deepak sir
Mai bhi hu ap kha se ho ?
@@Shri_Krishna_study medical road
@@poojasrivastava0629 Mai BRD medical k pichhe hi rhta hu please mujhe batao
Nice
Sir I love your voice
Make movie plz
Subodh's character is actually me. I also had a breakup due to the same reason. That person was everything for me. 2 years have passed and still i m like subodh...and i hope someone like manvi comes in my life or i become my own manvi❤
I hope🙂....
main aaj be manav ki zid krne per dr ki aaya tha.....yaha galti ho gye aapse ...manvi hai
Congratulations 🎉 sir for 500k subscribers.......
Sir aapki aawaj bhut gajb h
Plz koi bta do 7 may 2020 ko isme bich me old song aaya tha.doctor ke pas jane se phle plz name btao
Sir HORROR story upload kijiye na.
@Ankita Bhatia usme neelesh Mishra ji ki avaj nahi he but uska kya kare...🙄
Meri dost akanshya Jena ne bhi mujhe iss tarah 12 saal pehle tanah chodh diya tha 😞😟😟😞😟😞😟😟😞😭 💔 💔💔💔💔 💔 aur woh phir kabhi wafas nahi aayi 😟😞 😞 taqlif Hoti hai jab koi apna iss tarah hamhe tanah chodhkar chala jata hai hameshaa ke liye
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Beautiful beauty 😍
Meri kahani bhi mere pyar tk pahuchao😢
Tera mera chhupana bhi kuch ek sa hai.Tu chhupa bhi leta hai mein jata bhi nahi pati.tujhe padh leti hoo ,tujhe pta kahan hai?.ki padhte padhte tujhe likhna sikh gayi hoo.tere bin kahe tujhe samjhna sikh gyi hoo.
Sir, story kaise bhejte hai aapko?
Yaade h nhi jati h ek word Hi jo nhi bulta hai
Oh dear! Life is morose and sombre in it's daily run, as it is. Why must a story writer take us through those "reality shots," when he has the imaginative talent to write and create beyond the predictable?
*गुस्से में आके 1-2 दिन का प्रदर्शन करना,सोशल मीडिया पर 1-2 पोस्ट्स शेयर करना और फिर चुप कर के बैठ जाने का मतलब यही है कि आप उस चीज़ के बिना रह सकते हो और ये बगावत सिर्फ एक दिखावा था!*
*बगावत या ढोंग?*
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Please is platform ko bhi hindu muslim m mat bato...yaha kuch pal k sukoon k lie ata h har koi..literature ...nafrat failaane ki jagah kahin aur dhoond lo
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Haan
🥺🥺🥺🥺
Apka no milega
hey Neelesh ji can i give you story
Please is platform ko bhi hindu muslim m mat bato...yaha kuch pal k sukoon k lie ata h har koi..literature ...nafrat failaane ki jagah kahin aur dhoond lo
Mai bhi story likhta hu .please help kro
Ye kahani bohot karib hai mere....
This love is begging. Worthless. The girl is still mentally obsessed and spineless. Irritating character. No self respect.
One story marbha plz send karna
Nasur..... Karti hai aapki aawaj
I dont like the background music int this story. I dont know why this only this story giving me negetivity!
ज़िंदगी के उस पार मैं और तुम एक और कोशिश करके देखें, क्या पता सब पहले जैसा हो जाए...
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