bro I love the content and the message being your music, you are good, but TBH with you, stop using the title of the song to rhyme so you avoid the repetition. it makes it whack, I see the talent, you just need to build a solid flow, rhyme schemes, avoid repeating same words. and stick to the beat, chop your bars to be smaller so you won't go off beat! but besides that, you are a good artist. in fact that's just my opinion and advise, you can take it if you like.
Just like I said bro, that's just my personal opinion it doesn't really matter that much. Again, I think he's a good artist, and he can rap way better than me with this style of rap so it's up to him to take the advice or not but FYI I used to be interested in rap too, even though I never recorded anything. It's just on my phone. Point is, I know the importance of building creative rhyme schemes, flow and chopping bars so you don't go off beat. We want to hear the message yes but we also want to see the creativity. Throw a few Punches, Wordplay etc. if he's interested in those. That's just from a fan perspective... Anyway I hope the homie will continue doing what he does best, I will support a brother out.
Kasi anthem 💣💣 grootman
Ndlulamthi bra u dope bra🔥🔥🔥...love the beat
This is deep man. I wonder when will they recognize you
Yonela Plaatjie that's true by ghetto
Very true man... We live in a Country where silinda umntu afe kqala before we act and pretend like we loved and cared for that someone
Sizom' recogniza njani singay' funi inyani😢.
Kukthini uku recognizer?
Man dont have ears for this kind of music but this bro is talented
shoutout to him✌️
Hola Ndlu "Zi endangered spieces iimofi eNew Cross" I wish ingasulela zonke iindawo ngalo nto iNew Cross.
Ndlu ukwenye ilevel uyibetha ngathi yeyakho le beat. I'm pretty sure ebenoyenza iofficial remix uScarface if ebenosiva isiXhosa.
2025
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👊🏼😡🔥🎵. Unzima bro 🔂💯
Ola bhuda yam 🤛🤛
How can i get the original track bro!!!
bro I love the content and the message being your music, you are good, but TBH with you, stop using the title of the song to rhyme so you avoid the repetition. it makes it whack, I see the talent, you just need to build a solid flow, rhyme schemes, avoid repeating same words. and stick to the beat, chop your bars to be smaller so you won't go off beat! but besides that, you are a good artist. in fact that's just my opinion and advise, you can take it if you like.
He rhymes the words before the repetitive word though.
Just like I said bro, that's just my personal opinion it doesn't really matter that much. Again, I think he's a good artist, and he can rap way better than me with this style of rap so it's up to him to take the advice or not but FYI I used to be interested in rap too, even though I never recorded anything. It's just on my phone. Point is, I know the importance of building creative rhyme schemes, flow and chopping bars so you don't go off beat. We want to hear the message yes but we also want to see the creativity. Throw a few Punches, Wordplay etc. if he's interested in those. That's just from a fan perspective... Anyway I hope the homie will continue doing what he does best, I will support a brother out.
I feel like u should have taken your opinion and stuck it up your ass. Ubatyiwe