It isn't necessary to repest time after time the goal of the humans or the destruction suffered by the empire. Or that the empire faught in one way while the humans faught in another way. Explaining the difference in the empire wars and the humans wars isn't needed either.
"An Andorian 'acquaintance' of mine once said: Don't push the pink-skins to the thin ice." -Ambassador Soval of Vulcan, Federation Ambassador. You know, it rather would help if the author would refrain from hedging into their own IP the basic plot of 'Star Trek: Prelude To Axanar' and presuming no-one would notice. It's been handled before in other franchises and novel works but aside from the obtuse AI voice most of the HFY 'readers' employ, the present work's syntactic and contextual stings sounded absurdly parallel to Axanar's main tale, word for word in some cases, and that I reckoned was by the two-minute mark. One more for the road: "Creativity is hiding your sources." But you can't predict who'll read it. So generalize, merit the message and don't hedge on the medium. A third, since rulebreaking's the subject for the evening: "The hand is no different from what it creates." -A.A. Attanasio.
5/10 - Too much is repeated and there are some inconsistencies. The empire killed an entire colony until it was nothing but a smoldering world. Yet...the humans do it and it somehow different and the empire isn't used to that kind of warfare.
Wait the empire fights with honor and rules yet attacks and destroys a civilian undefended colony.. yea no honor there. AI generated story constantly repeating the same phrase many times.
Half of the story is "doctrine of total annihilation" repeated into infinity. Whoever wrote this should not repeat a statement over and over and over again
@@Dazza13Bravo Brothers in Arms have honour. On the field it is still horror. There is no honour in just surviving. There is honour in brotherhood alone. I guess my point was not explained well. The men in frilly coats and wigs (even if they are invisible today - i.e. every politician) claim the honor.
Describing a thing to death.
How do you attack a planet in the dead of the night?🤣🤣🤣
Solar Eclipse?
The dark side of the planet
Nice story, I like it
It isn't necessary to repest time after time the goal of the humans or the destruction suffered by the empire. Or that the empire faught in one way while the humans faught in another way. Explaining the difference in the empire wars and the humans wars isn't needed either.
Thank you! I was about to write the same. Only listened to half of it, and already got tired of the same thing narrated over and over again
Story was over by 10:00. The rest is just fluff.
"An Andorian 'acquaintance' of mine once said: Don't push the pink-skins to the thin ice." -Ambassador Soval of Vulcan, Federation Ambassador.
You know, it rather would help if the author would refrain from hedging into their own IP the basic plot of 'Star Trek: Prelude To Axanar' and presuming no-one would notice. It's been handled before in other franchises and novel works but aside from the obtuse AI voice most of the HFY 'readers' employ, the present work's syntactic and contextual stings sounded absurdly parallel to Axanar's main tale, word for word in some cases, and that I reckoned was by the two-minute mark.
One more for the road: "Creativity is hiding your sources." But you can't predict who'll read it. So generalize, merit the message and don't hedge on the medium.
A third, since rulebreaking's the subject for the evening: "The hand is no different from what it creates." -A.A. Attanasio.
Don't poke the tiger with a short stick, it may respond rather harshly!!!
Deadly Precision Deadly Precision Deadly Precision
5/10 - Too much is repeated and there are some inconsistencies. The empire killed an entire colony until it was nothing but a smoldering world. Yet...the humans do it and it somehow different and the empire isn't used to that kind of warfare.
Wait the empire fights with honor and rules yet attacks and destroys a civilian undefended colony.. yea no honor there.
AI generated story constantly repeating the same phrase many times.
One day AI will write good stories, but not yet.
Pride goeth before a fall!
Half of the story is "doctrine of total annihilation" repeated into infinity. Whoever wrote this should not repeat a statement over and over and over again
Good story, but I suspect it is AI generated
All of them are that's why they are all so similar and Sarah Chen saves the day 😂
most of this was just saying "it was not a war it was pure death" just say it once and move on could have either been much better or much shorter.
Artificial intelligence brother
AI once again runes a decent story.
Is this about Ukraine's war ❓
Just had to skip about 5 minute of a mishmash of words that said the same thing in 10 different ways.
Must have been the Canadians .
So repetitive. The whole story could be told in 1/8th of the time....had to fast forward a lot to skip the repetition.
No survivors all planets and people extermanated how very Russian
Interesting premise/start. Unreasonable and boring story.
Meh. Honour is for men in frilly coats and wigs.
Never served I assume.
@@Dazza13Bravo Brothers in Arms have honour. On the field it is still horror. There is no honour in just surviving. There is honour in brotherhood alone.
I guess my point was not explained well. The men in frilly coats and wigs (even if they are invisible today - i.e. every politician) claim the honor.
I had pizza and wings for lunch