Uffffff itni sad kiun sis mera to rona hi bnd nhi Ho rha apny to Mar hi diya itna rona arha hai pta hota my blkol b na prhti ab plz love me again ka aisa end na krna plzzz
Kash x ndagi utni hi Hoti Jo lamhy tery Sath guzr gy 🥺 Jungkook ne bht saha h or akir me is ko Dard hi Mila hr Sachi mhbt krny wali ko akir me Dard hi sehna h mj ptA HOTA sad ending me is ko read nai krti me ab cah k b sari Zindagi is ko bool nai paoon gee 🥺 nai bool paoon gee 🥺 sorry
Uff Mera to ro ro kr Bora Hal ho gaya plz per kubi bi kise story main taekook ka is tarha alg na Karna Hy Mera Jungkook or tae but sad ending na Karna kabi bi plz plzzzzzzzzzzzz boht dukh hota Hy plz
Sach bataoñ ye story lekhte waqt mai khud b kai Baar royi hoñ. Lekn ap bataeñ Kia hmari society mai muhabbat aor ana Ki jang mai muhabbat haar nhi jati...
@@zumaryousaf9510 aisa hi h lkn log marty nhi hn badl jaty hn..r mne aj tk koi parents itne skth nhi dekhe..lkn syd kahen na kahen aisa hota hoga...plzz and love me again ki ending achi kreye ga...r ik sawal or ik ap bura na manyen..aap hamesha kookie ko hi thra emotional,sensitive r mischievous likhti hen.. jb k Tae ka character strong hota h.. jo shoro m mujhe bht acha lga q k koi ff writer Tae ko as a man aisa nhi likh payi lkn kookie ko bhi thra change kren na jese jk apni real life m h.. quite ,multi talented thra friendly thra flirty
@@dimondeye55 you are right. Tae ka character zyada tar FF mai bht weak Hai. Es liye mai ne oss ke character pr bht kaam Kia.. K wo strong ho.. ye acha bhi raha.. jk K character mere FF mai bht composed Hai..wo expresssive nhi Hai.. matlab.. introvert Hai. Next FF mai try karoñ gi..K jk K character pr zyada focus karoñ.. lekn aik baat Hai . Jk aor tae K hawale se sb ka mind pehle se set Hai.. jb ap es mai change laate hn.. tu wo pr readers k liye acceptable nhi hota.. Lekn umeed Hai.. K aage chal kr ap ko change mile ga..
@@user-hm3pw9il2p I respect your opinion. Lekn mai story mai b kesi boy ko pregnant nhi dekha sakti. Es story K theme mai aik baby ko ana tha. Jis K sath Tae ko apni life guzarni ti.. baqi ap ki raaye ka Shukria...☺️
@@zumaryousaf9510 Api jaaaaaan please mind mat Karna ma tub tora gussa and emotional the esi Liye bil diya Lekin end par tu teakook he ek dosray ko piyar Karte the na Cha eo alag be ho Gye again api jaaaaaan sorry 😞
Sis ap itna sad sad ff banti hain plz aik happy ff bhi banayai 😊
Oooh God...... Author yh kya kiya itni takleef k bad taekook happy ending deserve kartay thy
Uffffff itni sad kiun sis mera to rona hi bnd nhi Ho rha apny to Mar hi diya itna rona arha hai pta hota my blkol b na prhti ab plz love me again ka aisa end na krna plzzz
Mujhy bht rona a rha hy abi b hyee etna sad nhy krna tha yrr kiya kr dya apny 😢😢😢😢😢
Yar ap taekook dono ko maar deti ya dono ko mila deti I really feel bad for both taekook.
Kash x ndagi utni hi Hoti Jo lamhy tery Sath guzr gy 🥺 Jungkook ne bht saha h or akir me is ko Dard hi Mila hr Sachi mhbt krny wali ko akir me Dard hi sehna h mj ptA HOTA sad ending me is ko read nai krti me ab cah k b sari Zindagi is ko bool nai paoon gee 🥺 nai bool paoon gee 🥺 sorry
Uff Mera to ro ro kr Bora Hal ho gaya plz per kubi bi kise story main taekook ka is tarha alg na Karna Hy Mera Jungkook or tae but sad ending na Karna kabi bi plz plzzzzzzzzzzzz boht dukh hota Hy plz
Autherrrrr😕😕,,
😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢 ma Kya ka hon mujay boht rona a raha ha 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢 so sad ap ko end sad nahi karna cahiya tha 😢😢😢😢😢😢🥺😔😔🥺😔🥺😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺😔😔😔🥺😔😔😔😔😔🥺😔😔
Jb first time ye story upload Ki ti.. tb bhi sb ka yahi reaction ta .
kuch ziada nhi hogya😢😢 sach batyen aisi ending likhte wqt apko dukh nhi hoa
Sach bataoñ ye story lekhte waqt mai khud b kai Baar royi hoñ. Lekn ap bataeñ Kia hmari society mai muhabbat aor ana Ki jang mai muhabbat haar nhi jati...
@@zumaryousaf9510 aisa hi h lkn log marty nhi hn badl jaty hn..r mne aj tk koi parents itne skth nhi dekhe..lkn syd kahen na kahen aisa hota hoga...plzz and love me again ki ending achi kreye ga...r ik sawal or ik ap bura na manyen..aap hamesha kookie ko hi thra emotional,sensitive r mischievous likhti hen.. jb k Tae ka character strong hota h.. jo shoro m mujhe bht acha lga q k koi ff writer Tae ko as a man aisa nhi likh payi lkn kookie ko bhi thra change kren na jese jk apni real life m h.. quite ,multi talented thra friendly thra flirty
@@dimondeye55 you are right. Tae ka character zyada tar FF mai bht weak Hai. Es liye mai ne oss ke character pr bht kaam Kia.. K wo strong ho.. ye acha bhi raha.. jk K character mere FF mai bht composed Hai..wo expresssive nhi Hai.. matlab.. introvert Hai. Next FF mai try karoñ gi..K jk K character pr zyada focus karoñ.. lekn aik baat Hai . Jk aor tae K hawale se sb ka mind pehle se set Hai.. jb ap es mai change laate hn.. tu wo pr readers k liye acceptable nhi hota..
Lekn umeed Hai.. K aage chal kr ap ko change mile ga..
Jaikook kiska beta h tae ka ya jimin ka please batao😢😢
Jiso aor jk ka
@@zumaryousaf9510 Api ye kese story ha jis me jiso aur jk ka ka baby ha bwkwas story
@@user-hm3pw9il2p I respect your opinion. Lekn mai story mai b kesi boy ko pregnant nhi dekha sakti. Es story K theme mai aik baby ko ana tha. Jis K sath Tae ko apni life guzarni ti.. baqi ap ki raaye ka Shukria...☺️
@@zumaryousaf9510 Api jaaaaaan please mind mat Karna ma tub tora gussa and emotional the esi Liye bil diya Lekin end par tu teakook he ek dosray ko piyar Karte the na Cha eo alag be ho Gye again api jaaaaaan sorry 😞
Api end per baby ka name teakook Rakh dete please api 🥺 @@zumaryousaf9510