My workplace was Area 51. Through the gate to another world, they sent me.| SCIFI-creepypasta

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  • เผยแพร่เมื่อ 22 ธ.ค. 2024

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  • @kellyturnbull3257
    @kellyturnbull3257 วันที่ผ่านมา

    You have to get better method of storytelling, your punctuation is completely wrong and absolutely off-putting. It's disjointed and sounds very much like you stopped taking English in grade 2.