Kahani behad sundar hai aur aapki madhur aawaz mein ye dil ko chu gyi per aisa laga jaise kahani adhuri h kaash iske aage bhi bhag likhti lekhika jii toh ye prashn mann mein nhi rehhta k akhir kha ho tum Seema??
Sach me likha to bahut sundar hai pr seema ki jankari nhi di ye bahut glt kiya itni pyari ladki ka is qadar dil tutna aur phir uske bare me na batana bahut glt baat mere bache nhi sunte kahani bolte hai ki apke kahani kar to kahani puri likhte hi nhi adhura likh ke mnn khatta kr dete hai aap hi suno
Pyar jatha kar dhokha Dene valon ko sabak sikhana chahiye. Apni keemthi prano ko thyag na galth hi. Practical logon ke sath practical ban ke dhikhana chahiye. Swarthy logon ke liye apne maa baap ko saja dhiya. Naa.
रुचिका जी आप की आवाज़ बहुत मधुर है सुनाने का तरीका भी कमाल है ।
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Kahani behad sundar hai aur aapki madhur aawaz mein ye dil ko chu gyi per aisa laga jaise kahani adhuri h kaash iske aage bhi bhag likhti lekhika jii toh ye prashn mann mein nhi rehhta k akhir kha ho tum Seema??
Bhut sundar kahani thi aap ke vachan ne kahani ko jeevant kar diya 🙏💞💞💞💞
Ab ek uljhan ho gai aur seema ki chinta ho gai mujhe bahut bura lg raha hai seema ke liye aur uske papa ke liye
बहुत अच्छी दिल को छूने वाली कहानी आपके मधुर पाठन के साथ 👍👍
Heart touching
Sach me likha to bahut sundar hai pr seema ki jankari nhi di ye bahut glt kiya itni pyari ladki ka is qadar dil tutna aur phir uske bare me na batana bahut glt baat mere bache nhi sunte kahani bolte hai ki apke kahani kar to kahani puri likhte hi nhi adhura likh ke mnn khatta kr dete hai aap hi suno
Bahut sunder khahai
Very touching.
इस तरह की कहानी को अधुरा छोडने का चलन बहुत खराब है। कहानी का रस और असर खत्म को जाता है। दिल तक नहीं पहुंचतीं ऐसी अधूरी कहानियां। सतही रह जातीं हैं
Kas iska second part b hota
Love story song tane nind aane ke liye ismein itna add kar dete Hain story to acchi rahti
Seema ka kya hua ye jan pane ki utsukta reh gai aisa laga ke kahani mein kuchh chhoot gaya.
Aapne kahani aadhi chhod di. Kaha hai seenma
Kya dusra part bhi aaye ga iska usme btao ge seema kaha gai
Nahi kamni ji ... Lekhika ka ne kahani ka yahin pe ant kar diya hai.. seem duniya se chali gai... Thank you kahani sunne aur pasnd karne ke liye ,🙏😊
Seema kaha gayi. Kaisi hi
Seema ab duniya me nahi rahi 🙏
Pyar jatha kar dhokha Dene valon ko sabak sikhana chahiye. Apni keemthi prano ko thyag na galth hi. Practical logon ke sath practical ban ke dhikhana chahiye. Swarthy logon ke liye apne maa baap ko saja dhiya. Naa.
अधूरी कहानी
Hame toh batate Sima kaha gai
Seema jindagi ki jung haar gai🙏