Your ff is good but...plzzz don't use your language....bcz it's hard to international fan to read....and make we didn't know what meaning of that sentence....so .. it sometimes cut the mood... sorry... its my opinion...if you don't agree ...don't criticize....
I like your point author shouldn't done this it must be really hard for you if I see from pov of you🙁it also lose interest in ff. But Actually I can Understand what was written it's actually Hindi FROM INDIA
I also don't know this language is it Indian cause I can understand Indian language little bit but what was written in this I can't understand that .......
did you really like this? I mean bro this isnt even bare minimum that guy touched his wife and he just left him saying"how dare you TouChed MY WiFe" like wheres the beating scene,wheres the scene where he almost killed him!? GIRLIES DONT LIKE THIS BARE MINIMUM ACT
When taehyung said gajjab bejjati hai this line got me rolling on the floor. Damn this is really the best ff I have ever seen. Thanks for this great ff.
Godd!!!! The Hindi parts were amazing! Like literally tae speaking hindi hits different mann... Damn! It also has cursing... *You nice keep going..... 😊 Wanna say only one thing.. "ye kitti awesome hai yarr...."
The part at 2:32 and that line where yn was staring at him and saying his heart out hits me literally very different it brings all emotions in me awesome author nim keep it up🥰🥰🤧those songs hits different ahhh I'm crying now😭😭
This is my first ff video to ever watch... I literally used to watch these in shorts and thought that the videos would not be that interesting.... Thanks to this ❤
It feels like I have read this...???? I mean same lines are on sweet night channel too...and also if anyone don't believe go and check Hugging, crying on your cold husband shoulder after getting touch
Wow this ff is different first time i see a ff in English and also in hind i love this ff 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜. Please make ff like this 😊😊😊💜💜💜💜in hindi and in English .
You have copied this ff I have read it before only I don't remember well but I think soo it was from the TH-cam channel named sweet night? But I am sure that you have copied it !!!!
WTFFF, only she knows what she’s done. U can’t just assume “it was copied”. If u ALL had a brain u would know that on a planet called Earth… NOTHING is new here😠😠
11:32 Baal Baal Bach Gaye means oof im safe now 11:42 ye toh gajab bejjeti hai means wow the disrespect is reall 13:16 main to chut*ya hoon yaar ab kaam aur karna padega means i'm the dumba** here now I'll have to do more chores 13:27 aur ek toh ye ghar itna bada hai means and this house is really huge too 14:28 Achha jii means ohh really? 14:28 Haan jii means yess 😌 For everyone that didn't understand hindi here's your translator at work, you're welcome 😌💕💜
This makes me so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so emotional 😢
Good job do your best to make you own story. it’s good that sometimes we have copy others stuff 😅 but it’s okay 😊 you know I have copy my bestie’s homework 😂 I know one you will make your own story 😊all the best 🎊
Stop copying others work, what you think people are fools. Try to make your own storyline maybe good or bad at least you can speak up, that's your orginality and hard work.
Its really good but what u need to know is using so much of hindi is a lil weird. You know the fan fictions isn't only limited to india..but it goes to other countries too... So the international readers shouldn't be able to get it and that's destroy the fun. U can grow pretty well and also will get nice responses. Hope you consider my thought.. because im also a ff writer in here and ig and wattpad too.. you its better if u take it as an advice ... Rock sweet heart~✨🤧 make me (indians) proudd !!!✨😩🤧🤙🏻
I love this ff but pls don't use ur language again because it is not everyone that reads this ff that is from Indian or Pakistan , someone pls interpret what she wrote I don't understand 🙏🙏🙏🙏🥺🥺
It's good that u are using hindi language but when there is am english language and hindi language interupt it's not so satsifying . By the way your ff is mindblowing
I want this intro in my gallery 😭😭😭 Please author can you send me this video on my other social media acc??? Cause I'm obsessed with the intro edit or can you just post it in your yt channel as a short video please???
I wanted to laugh for no reason infront of this ff but then I remember it wasn't funny but then I remember that somoene already touched me innaproprietly so I laughed I'm crazy💀 sorry
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The last line by author was amazing 🤣🤣, also it's so great when they both speak in Hindi 🤣🤣🤣
Same brain cells 😂
That "accha jii" nd "haa jii" is a emotion😭❤
Sammeee
True❤
Your ff is good but...plzzz don't use your language....bcz it's hard to international fan to read....and make we didn't know what meaning of that sentence....so .. it sometimes cut the mood... sorry... its my opinion...if you don't agree ...don't criticize....
I like your point author shouldn't done this it must be really hard for you if I see from pov of you🙁it also lose interest in ff.
But Actually I can Understand what was written it's actually Hindi FROM INDIA
Yeah, and I didn't even know that tae can speak hindi, so it kinda makes me even more confused
I also don't know this language is it Indian cause I can understand Indian language little bit but what was written in this I can't understand that .......
@@Dreamytae_ he said *what a great insult*
@Zafirah Mushtak he said what a great insult
All ff was very good but that hindi part is omfo
All i can say is 'ye toh kmal ladki hai ❤'
English +hindi words make it very funny 😂😂😂
Mannnnnn!!!
How can it be soooo good!?
The music❤️
The whole FF
It's so calming ❤️
hey triggered army hello! wassup bro
@@Siaaesthetix04 eelo
Hey triggered army
How are you 🥰
did you really like this? I mean bro this isnt even bare minimum that guy touched his wife and he just left him saying"how dare you TouChed MY WiFe" like wheres the beating scene,wheres the scene where he almost killed him!? GIRLIES DONT LIKE THIS BARE MINIMUM ACT
When taehyung said gajjab bejjati hai this line got me rolling on the floor.
Damn this is really the best ff I have ever seen.
Thanks for this great ff.
😂😂 thank you army 😌💜✨
@Zafirah Mushtak same here please can someone interpret
@@vivianmomah4315 it means ' it is a fukin insult '
Soo true 🤣
Literally 1 year ignorance+ he said I can't except you as my wife ....just 1 week house work #wow🙂
still he have only done only 1day work and she end his punishment #toomuchwow
@@drama_idk_. yes!!! #whatalove!!!
Y/n ☕
@@twinkles5114 🤣🤣🤣goshhh this reaction 🤣🤣🤣🤣🔥🔥
Godd!!!! The Hindi parts were amazing! Like literally tae speaking hindi hits different mann...
Damn! It also has cursing...
*You nice keep going..... 😊
Wanna say only one thing.. "ye kitti awesome hai yarr...."
Ufffffff that last line 'not Y/n after some time * hmm jii* * ahh jii*' was totally something that cannot be explained
Imagine our TaeTae saying achha jii
The part at 2:32 and that line where yn was staring at him and saying his heart out hits me literally very different it brings all emotions in me awesome author nim keep it up🥰🥰🤧those songs hits different ahhh I'm crying now😭😭
They are spending there privatel time and saying some personal things and here we are 3rd wheeling 😁😑😑
The ending was amazing really babe got a good story... 😘😘
Thank you gurl 💜✨
Unnie you are my soul sis😂😂
Ch*tiya got me rolling on floor 🤣🤣🤣
Love youuu💜💜💜💜
💯😂❤
BTS is best , BTS is forever 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜 love you BTS ....
😌💜✨
Fabulously beautiful and adorable ff (ye cheez badi hai mest mest 😅👍😁)💜💜💜
This is my first ff video to ever watch... I literally used to watch these in shorts and thought that the videos would not be that interesting.... Thanks to this ❤
Really amazing one😍😍 love this one😘😘
Thank you 😌💜✨
I was laughing hard when I read continue with your crying 🤣
It feels like I have read this...???? I mean same lines are on sweet night channel too...and also if anyone don't believe go and check
Hugging, crying on your cold husband shoulder after getting touch
Sameee here to u too feel i have read this
Dude please report her she copied Sweet Night's ff yup, she is my bestie and she said to me please spread this message
Main toh Indian hone ke sare fayede utha sakti hoon. Yay mission successful 🙌
Wow this ff is different first time i see a ff in English and also in hind i love this ff 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜. Please make ff like this 😊😊😊💜💜💜💜in hindi and in English .
its copied totally from sweet night...... plz donot copy someone else's work
Yeah you're right
@@Amberfaisal81 bruh… “HATERS”
I don’t think ur her mother to tell her that😌😌
Exactly 💯
@@Seungah36 Gurl she was copying someone else's hard work, how would you react if someone copied your hard work like project, design,work etc etc
I can't believe how he can speak the hindi language!
Maybe he learn Hindi for y/n
BTS can do anything they can even learn her language
It was epic 🤣 nd yeah the last part 🤣😂 op
I loved the way u used some hindi lines gurl.. mera dil le liya 🤌
Mera bhi 🤌❤️
mera chain wain jo sab chura liya bts ne uska kya 🤣💜
The last 2 lines remind me of a movie💀
I love your font style its so clear❤babe🤭
It' s just fantastic man keep it up
the music and imagination giving me goosebumps 🥵🥵🥵
You have copied this ff I have read it before only I don't remember well but I think soo it was from the TH-cam channel named sweet night? But I am sure that you have copied it !!!!
Ff is just woow and songs 🎵 tooo❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
y/n: w-what are you doing? i can walk
tae: you can't just continue with your crying🤣
hmm jii n ahh ji was😁
btw kiddo is my dog's name🤣
Loved it and background song just made it even more amazing and it was fun ❤️❤️❤️
I literally started crying seeing this
me : (jungshook )How can you cryyyyyyyyyyyyy????
Ohooo💥
💜🌝👍
@@btskawaiiworld6934 😅😁😁
Iam dead by the in intro
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.btw you nice keep going ☺😏🌚
Do you know the song she used?
the first edit was so cool😍😍🤗
It's so good and the music was so good I love this one....
ff is very nice and the song you kept in background that was like omg love you soooooo much
I wanna be straight so I want say that I hv seen same story on any other channel so I just wanted to inform
Yeah I have also seen the exact same ff on another channel and this one is all copied, the storyline and everything
@@Amberfaisal81 it doesn’t have to be considered copying if it wasn’t really copied…. U don’t know so why say that???
Hey army 💜 my name is Pallavi 💜 I am also BTS army 💜 I am also Indian,that line baal baal buch gaye, sahi bat hee baal baal hi bacha hee taeyung 😂😂
(this is the profiles daughter) i cried during this because i keep thining no one will love me like tae loved y/n
Nobody
Me getting chills by the intro😵😵😵😵
Bro you got a great imagination hat's off to you love it 🤗❤️
Man please ily and the ff you make like literally 🛐🤌🏻slay
I just loved it saranghae
U gained a new subscriber😉
BABEEE ITS AMAZINGGGG😘😘
U copied the story too bad of you ..do you even know how hard it is to write and you all copy It ....
Yeah it's all copied and she didn't even gave the credit to the real author
WTFFF, only she knows what she’s done. U can’t just assume “it was copied”. If u ALL had a brain u would know that on a planet called Earth… NOTHING is new here😠😠
Guaranty we’ve all copied someone bcuz UR NOT PERFECT EITHER
@@Seungah36 right
They will never recognise the hardwork of real authors
Which app u will use for editing......plss tell me 🥲🙂
You are under arest to make this masterpiece
This is copied the original one is here 👇🏻
th-cam.com/video/iVqLBlQl-r4/w-d-xo.html
11:32 Baal Baal Bach Gaye means oof im safe now
11:42 ye toh gajab bejjeti hai means wow the disrespect is reall
13:16 main to chut*ya hoon yaar ab kaam aur karna padega means i'm the dumba** here now I'll have to do more chores
13:27 aur ek toh ye ghar itna bada hai means and this house is really huge too
14:28 Achha jii means ohh really?
14:28 Haan jii means yess 😌
For everyone that didn't understand hindi here's your translator at work, you're welcome 😌💕💜
This makes me so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so emotional 😢
Good job do your best to make you own story. it’s good that sometimes we have copy others stuff 😅 but it’s okay 😊 you know I have copy my bestie’s homework 😂
I know one you will make your own story 😊all the best 🎊
She copied this story'
I think tae, Y/N and A/N took classes from jiminaa 😏😏😏😉😉😉😉btw amaJIN ff unnie💜💜💜💜💜💜
Stop copying others work, what you think people are fools. Try to make your own storyline maybe good or bad at least you can speak up, that's your orginality and hard work.
Listen… U can’t tell her what not to do😆😆😆 ur not her mother I don’t see why u would care. Stop breaking others and fix yourself🙄🙄
Sure, she can’t tell them what to do, but this is a plagiarized work! That’s why they were just advising to stop doing it as they could get reported.
If I get TAE as my husband my life will be settled and I will not even care ge is cold, romantic, etc 🤭🤞🏻🤟😝
8:54 read it carefully!!!
bhai the last sentence made me scream so bad!!!
We love the Hindi line 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Don't put hindi in ff..bcz International fans also read it
But ur ff is very cute and loving❤
This is copy of other ff don't copy other's ff😒😒
Yes
just ignore themm u keep on going dogs barks on the street but we don't give them importance 👍
Ok but gajjab bejti got me 😭💀💀
That accha ji reminds me of someone...💔
Its really good but what u need to know is using so much of hindi is a lil weird. You know the fan fictions isn't only limited to india..but it goes to other countries too... So the international readers shouldn't be able to get it and that's destroy the fun.
U can grow pretty well and also will get nice responses. Hope you consider my thought.. because im also a ff writer in here and ig and wattpad too.. you its better if u take it as an advice ...
Rock sweet heart~✨🤧 make me (indians) proudd !!!✨😩🤧🤙🏻
It was so good and I am also India 🇮🇳❤️
I love this ff but pls don't use ur language again because it is not everyone that reads this ff that is from Indian or Pakistan , someone pls interpret what she wrote I don't understand 🙏🙏🙏🙏🥺🥺
Not all readers are Indian. you should not put Hindi words here. it's hard for those who don't know Hindi, to read it
True, but it’s her ff…. Her choice
Leave it😉😉😉
(Speaking from an Indian + American mix here)
Omfooo my back was the best 😂😂
Yeh to gajab bhejjeti hai very funny 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
I love hmm acha ji haan ji n gazab bezti aaaaaa my indian army lov u aaa
If I am not wrong then you copied this ff or maybe the another author copied this
Noooo!!!she copied Sweet Night's work
This was cute aacha jjii
Han jiii
After hearing that word from her am I not worthy to be loved if I have chance I would ask my parents to adopt her
Haye..... kya vdo banayi hai fan ho gye hum tumhare toh 💜💜💜( Sach main!!!!!!)
Dude you copied SWEET NIGHT's work
Don't say you didn't it's exaactly like hers😂
Just adding hindi words wouldn't make it any different
Isn't it copy of one of the ff of sweet night same tital same story lines this story is copied
It's good that u are using hindi language but when there is am english language and hindi language interupt it's not so satsifying . By the way your ff is mindblowing
Can you do one with suga.and make him sweet and happy
I have already watched this ff so Please don't copy of others
Omg yes I was like am I the only one??
@@Otakushine33 no ,love can you please report her channel she copied Sweet Night's work
@@Samriddhi_Das_2011 ur good at ur duty i think😂😂and yes I will report it💖
I want this intro in my gallery 😭😭😭
Please author can you send me this video on my other social media acc??? Cause I'm obsessed with the intro edit or can you just post it in your yt channel as a short video please???
Whatever you wrote in your language i agreed 😂
The song....... 😩🤌
Uff didi ye accha ji haan jii
Thanks for adding hindi
It's hindi i understood it as a Indian from AP (Andhra Pradesh)
This was my first ff ever
Cute 😘
I like this
This story is copied lol make yours don't copy others
This is not copied bro the storyline is different...I think he/she is inspired from the video
@@kanakkumar5866 yeah you're right
I was also thinking the same that I read this story somewhere else too
th-cam.com/video/iVqLBlQl-r4/w-d-xo.html here's the link that video
This is actually copied
Yes I also watched it
Is this FF is copy?
This achaa jii and haaan jii is from yrkkh
Just asking
ahh ji !! 🥲
The - this is already copied I have WATCHED this ONE hehee 😂
I wanted to laugh for no reason infront of this ff but then I remember it wasn't funny but then I remember that somoene already touched me innaproprietly so I laughed
I'm crazy💀 sorry
Please take into consideration that not everyone knows your language use ENGLISH