Soniya, not interested in marriage, meets Rajveer for an arranged marriage proposal. But this turns out to be "not just another proposal"!! mykhwahish.com/
Good attempt and unexpected twist in the climax , need more intense story narration and punch dialogues in the concept. Editing ,screenplay, background score,actors expressions , punch dialogues, will enhance the concept Am not criticising or advising you , I jus expressing my opinion as writer
Iss types ki ladkion ky unnesarry nakhdra bahut hota hai .. Woh kahete hain na Khaahli bartan mein awaaz bahut hota hai v.. So I think before to propose this types of girl think more than hundred times .
Director's vlog channel, please checkout : th-cam.com/video/OMzRij9YpEM/w-d-xo.html
amazed but need more clear audio
Wow what wonderful doctor. Love the story- Watching from Sri Lanka
6:30!!😀🤣
Bad acting by the girl ,need to improve a lot.
I liked the concept, little different. Actores were good. Thoda Voice clarity hona chahiye tha. Nice movie
I liked the way credits were given to everyone who were a part of this short film!
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Nice work Saima..! expecting more to come. All the best
By the way I'm still bachelor.
ladki ko sone ki jarurat hai , lagta hai need lagi hai
bura na mano holi hai....
Good attempt and unexpected twist in the climax , need more intense story narration and punch dialogues in the concept.
Editing ,screenplay, background score,actors expressions , punch dialogues, will enhance the concept
Am not criticising or advising you , I jus expressing my opinion as writer
Thanks for valuable comments :-)
Lovely curtains and sofa covers..good interior too🤩Handsome boy and pretty girl. Climax super!
Bhaii...Kuch improve baad me karanaa pahale voice quality improve kro.
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Good job saima wow Fauzan is also into it that’s cool guys keep it up
Ranjita Mandal thanks, Aditya, Dipti are also part of this, you can seek them in credits
Hahahaahaha money is power
This era N sachha pyar. Awkward.
who all immediately tried to check 'khwahishen.com' ;)
Very nice 👌 when will next one come
Very nice
Niiccee 😊😊
Rajveer s voice is impressive
What a twist
Awesome
"Halla bol".. Kartik...
Girl have very attitude
Awesome work kartik.
Iss types ki ladkion ky unnesarry nakhdra bahut hota hai ..
Woh kahete hain na
Khaahli bartan mein awaaz bahut hota hai v..
So I think before to propose this types of girl think more than hundred times .
Totally overacting
Try to improve