I DIED Today While Robbing a Bank - The Afterlife Wasn't What I Pictured
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That moment you feel zero sorrow for the protagonist in the story
The grandmother though was a bitch who traumatised him if she was his first kill then that’s what put him down the road to murder and theft
I bet the Angel lady was thinking, "Call me a B%^&# again...!"
"Manly screams" lol
Now imagine it as high-pitched as possible.
Thank you for narrating my story! I feel privileged. You surpassed all of my expectations 😊
Yeahhh I thought he did a really good job too :-) great story by the way!
Thank you!
It’s the *“Manly* *Like”* for me 😂😂😂😂
What's truly terrifying is Jordan's ability to write from the perspective of a sociopath so easily.
A bit too easily if you ask me... 😅
I can't take credit for this one, it was written by u/DawnToo on Reddit but thanks!
😂
You are still a puh Psycho, ia I am certain that I also love 💘 you and whatever Wendy go cave u called from. You imagine the darkness at the end of civilization. Your voice is the only one capable of induction of Nasea. Like enough for me to pause... you beautiful psychopath. 🎉
Like a duck to water. If nothing else I bet he is a major smart a$$ in person lol
It's your vocals that brings it up to that point where amazing awesome perfection buddy but very good story tho@@JordanGrupe
Divine judgment: sadistic, but for a good reason! ™️
Can't always expect to win a war with words.
Hey friends who is excited for another great story
Careful you might puss your pants.
Always!
I was born ready!!!🙃
Great story, U/DAWNTOO! Guy was none too bright... Thank you, Jordan... ⚘️🙋♀️
Thank you! I'm new to horror writing; it's been a spooky journey!
I'm not complaining about the story but the title says don't cut in line... blah blah blah. But during the story he is called and therefore he never cut in line and so anyways.....
Well he mentioned that he hated waiting.. I think the title is relaying that you MAY not want to rush your own judgement on the other side
This one was…just….brilliant!
Mr Grupe you are my fav narrator! I love the " ok we all knew this was going to happen ",
tone and the humor leading in to the climax and ending to a perfect dramatic ending. Thanks so much for your time !
Thanks Jordan, glad to see everyone here. Great narration as always ‼️
No rules for the pearly gates?😊
Cory infuriated me…real emotions😅
My, my, my, another great story. Thanks
"The Life, Death, and Judgement of a Psychopathic Narcissist"
Please bring back BIOHAZARD BILL
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE.
👍👍 exceptionally brilliant, I was totally captivated by this story. I got my chuckles.I loved and enjoyed this story. Thanks Jordan 😇💖
Well I am an official "citizen " here now.🦉
A most excellent story 🎉 many thanks 😊 😊😊😊
Wow 😮 great story!
Hate to say it, but kinda gotta give MC credit for just owning his faults. Clearly he had a horrible upbringing but didn’t blame grandma, life, etc. Definitely not a good person but he pretty much just owned his actions.
I normally don’t like afterlife story’s because they always betrayed heaven as worse then heII but I really enjoyed this story.
Wow, that was a great one.
I kinda agreed with the line regrets are for suckers. Never regret anything. If you did something wrong learn from it but don't be swallowed by regret. And most importantly face any consequences of anything you did wether it was wrong or right. Don't regret. I like this story. I'd like to listen another one.
If you lived a normal, good life, you should never regret anything. Mistakes are natural. The regret part comes in when you actually commit crimes you should never have done or chose a path you know ends badly for yourself and others. You do not truly learn anything after you are too old or too damaged to use it.
Wow.. can you imagine
I have got to say these stories been straight hitters lately! Not that they aren’t normally, it just seems like recently even my picky self has liked the topic of each story. Thank you Jordan for being so consistent & putting all the effort that you do to give us top quality stories daily ❤ YOU ARE SO APPRECIATED 🫶🏼
I've noticed that as well. Jordan's fastly becoming one of my go-to narrators.
I think Tank got better than she deserved. But other than that, Corey is an insufferable character and he got what he deserved.
Great story!
Great story and i love your narration. Thank you Jordan❤
Another fantastic storry..
Thank you.
Thanks again Jordan.
Yep. Good story. Interesting twist. Thanks for sharing this with us
Wahoo I made the beginning of a live ❤
Bumbersnout.
Dear God, who hurt you! Lolololol this is so much! But I won’t stop, no I won’t!
Way to lenient.
7 minutes in (spoiler warning)
What is this guy, a cicada?
From someone who's seen what ants do to cicadas 😭 poor babies
The scary part is the is my honest to God belief of what judgement will be...
I'm glad he went back to reality 😅
Greetings 🦉
Finally.
This hero was a moving disaster....😅
Enjoyable story
It really is true that some people just cant be saved. Great story though.
I respect that.
Bullet proof vests, outter garments,stay safe😅😅😅
lol by the end I was on his side 😂
are you restarted or acoustic
good one!!! 👍👍
late but here Thanks man😂
Hola ☺️
man why's it gotta be my name? 😂
Nothing personal! 😅
Hello
Is this part of the rules for standing in line? Or another story?
Dam... he's evil asf!
Hi ❤🇦🇺✌🏼
Some days itd be a blessing
I really am having trouble not laughing. I don't think it's meant to be funny 🤣. Then again, you can't expect normal people to be coming here 😅
I'm sew your mouth shut 😅
Where are the stories from?
I wrote this one. Jordan was kind enough to narrate it for me
❤👋
2 words im sorry but no----
Not my cup of tea....I'm trying to develop an interest
Spoilers.
Feel sorry for him. All those rooms mindlessly toruring him without any dialogue about forgiveness.
Imagine if those flaming people or the child he mentioned he killed said we foregive you and simply didn't hurt him like the others. His awnser might've been different.
Spoilers
I would normally agree, at least past the first two rooms. I believe the overall idea was for him to come to the conclusion that he needed to repent or be forgiven rather than others ask him about it or force it upon him. The ants couldn't do that, being mindlessly angry and afraid, and his grandmother likely wouldn't, given what we saw of her character and the way she was presented. The doctor's room was his real chance and he blew that with his remarks towards the doctor and his general attitude on the entire situation, starting from his death.
I'd feel bad for him if he felt remorse or anything resembling empathy for the people past his grandmother(or other people in general) and the punishments continued. I don't think his answers or reactions would have changed, even if directly asked by the angel at the start while his mood was good, if sleazy as all can get(after all, regrets are for suckers by his words). Rather he realized why he was being punished and, rather than try to repent or muster an apology, he would just consider the punishments ironic and/or mouth off to those who were punishing him. Even after receiving his final punishment there was no sign of his thinking changing and because of that I don't believe he met the criteria for forgiveness and a lighter punishment, if one would be given upon repenting.
Great Story 👍👍👍 the end though 🫤
Nice!