I like it a lot! The lyrics are really good and the general tune is catchy. The only things I think could improve is the instrumental a bit, since it's a bit flat at points and almost makes the song sound really sad despite the lyrics. The mixing is a bit bland and has a bit too much reverb in my opinion and the tuning is a bit bland as well. But for a second song, this is really good! Keep improving :)
About how long have you been doing this? For a beginner you're doing great. Would you be willing to look at some lyrics I've written? I'm considering buying Avanna but I'm entirely lost when it comes to music.
I really enjoy the sound, rhytm and feeling of the song, whereas the lyrics are what put me of. I think this would be much more interesting, if it wouldn't be just another sex-song. But thats just my taste.
Originally listening to these I was rather disinterested, giving more of your songs a go there is this underlying charm to them. It doesn't need to bust into a loud track at any point, it keeps low-key and still manages to bring a certain soul to the front. Its very soothing, very unique.
This is one of the best vocaloid songs i have ever heard. Divas singing is great and also the background music. She sounds a lot like a real human here, not like most of the other. Good work here.
I'm really late to this, but I really love this. My only real crit is that I wish that the chorus buildup led to something bigger, like a really good drop or something. Still amazing work tho, especially for your second song.
Me- finds out about cyber diva Me again- finds this song --video starts-- (Two seconds in) Me- I love this song. It ma fave Now I'm in love with this song
The artwork and the video are fantastically well done! And that's about the only good thing. I hope you'll focus now on practicing music, and work hard to improve.
Over all i def like this song has become one of my favs the only thing i really had an issue with is the parts where it says clockwork 5times back to back it just felt like was to many but other then that awesome song
Harley Gordon the majority of the songs lyrics imo seem to be referencing romance pretty clearly. "We're not going to sleep tonight" "Hurry up and turn out the lights" Usually there's only one thing you do with the lights off but not going to sleep XD. Just one example. As far as the "Never give up without a fight" Probably referencing something like a Romeo and Juliet situation where their parents don't want them to be together, or some other force maybe the guy is being drafted into the army that would explain the lack of time together. So they plan to fight for it as long as they can. Just my opinion though.
The instrumental in 0:56 and in the general choruses are A BIT flat. Everything else is REALLLLLLY catchy, but the instrumental in the chorus could use some improving, which is FAIRLY easy to do actually, all you'd really need to do is add a bit more drum beats , like snares and all of that :0, as someone who ALSO does music (But not Vocaloid music), that's the best way to make music sound less flat and more upbeat if that's what you're going for! Keep up the good work tho!! I can tell you're gonna get far!
Very good for the first try. I dont know if the minimal intrumentation is really a bad thing, i think its make this music unic. Maybe can choose better tone for certain parts of music, its like dont have much harmony, perhaps just a little musical theory can work it on.
I'm unique and special, because I speak Spanish in a video english, but I ask, Do you made the art? because is Beautiful! Sorry with my bad english. ;-;
Any kind of Vocaloid original song would be great, you can message me through TH-cam on my about page or any other social media I have and we can work on some ideas. : )
Hey, how about a collab? I've been making "music" for like 8 years (literally half of my life lol), and since last year I've been listening to more and more vocaloids (and I definitely don't have a crush on Len). The thing is, I'm not creative. Like, my creativity is... shit. But if we combined your creativity with my experience, we could make something amazing! What do you say? :o
ooh, I really like your music! (and len is life aa) I'd love to collab, but I'm quite busy at the moment aa :c feel free to contact me to discuss a collab, though!
I think I'd be able to do music like your two songs, so when you'll have an idea for a new song (and/or time to make a new song) drop me an e-mail (My channel -> About), with vocals, notes or something, idk howtocollab. You can add me as a friend on Discord too, I'm maak4422. Also what software do you use?
Oh... i like this, i love the effects you used in your video and the Cyva voice ♥ I think...Is there any chance we'll collaborate together for an original song? I loved your work very much >u
In all honesty, when I saw how the numbers were regarding your subs, likes and views, I wasn't expecting much, but I actually quite like this! It definitely surpassed my expectations! If you don't mind me asking, did you make the art used in the video? If not (or yes as well) is there somewhere I can find it?
Heya! Just wondering, do you have a place we could get the version with vocals, like you do the instrumental? It's great music, if there was a way to toss a little cash at you for downloads I'd be all over that!
this is mixed really well, what program(s) do you use to mix music with vocaloid? also the phrasing of this song reminds me of one of my favorite cruxshadows song.
I think that the songs sounds amazing because the music isn't as powerful or over powering the singer which is most starts mistakes it does need a little bit more music though but for this song it is great
this is actually really catchy! i think you can only get better and better from here!
I can already tell your going to be a great creator, for your second song this is really good. keep it up!
Thanks so much, that means a lot! ^^
Athena Z no problem! you really deserve it. :D
I like it a lot! The lyrics are really good and the general tune is catchy. The only things I think could improve is the instrumental a bit, since it's a bit flat at points and almost makes the song sound really sad despite the lyrics. The mixing is a bit bland and has a bit too much reverb in my opinion and the tuning is a bit bland as well. But for a second song, this is really good! Keep improving :)
Thank you for the feedback! I still have a lot to learn, so I'll keep it in mind for next time! c:
About how long have you been doing this? For a beginner you're doing great. Would you be willing to look at some lyrics I've written?
I'm considering buying Avanna but I'm entirely lost when it comes to music.
Thank you! I've just started writing songs a couple of months ago!
I wouldn't mind taking a look, though I'm not sure if I'll be of help--
Try miku, kaito rin or len, they are great for beginners like you!
I really enjoy the sound, rhytm and feeling of the song, whereas the lyrics are what put me of. I think this would be much more interesting, if it wouldn't be just another sex-song.
But thats just my taste.
Originally listening to these I was rather disinterested, giving more of your songs a go there is this underlying charm to them.
It doesn't need to bust into a loud track at any point, it keeps low-key and still manages to bring a certain soul to the front. Its very soothing, very unique.
another well made sing using cyber Diva?
wow
im so surprised :0
this deserves another like
Great!!!! I love cyber diva
This is one of the best vocaloid songs i have ever heard. Divas singing is great and also the background music. She sounds a lot like a real human here, not like most of the other. Good work here.
Starting from 1:00 It sounded so familiar to me unt I realised that the song sounds the same at "This is what you came for"
4 years ago? Jesus man. . ., still a favorite of mine though keep up the great work live it!
For a while I wasn't looking at the screen and I thought it kept saying "one word" instead of "clockwork"
XD
I adore your art!! The colors are so vibrant!! Your instrumental is fantastic, and Cyva sounds so clear!!
Excellent work!! :)
Thank you for the kind words! ; v ;
this was a great song!
Something about this is just so soothing, love it.
this art is really beautiful i love it so much
finally CyVa gets some goddamn
l o V E
aa thank you!!
and I totally agree, cyva deserves more love!
I just found another fantastic Vocaloid Producer..
I love this so much! Its so catchy! I find this so awesome, you're going to be an amazing song creator!
Thank you so much for the kind words!
I really wish you were more recognised this song is AMAZING!
Hey I loved it, congratulations for the great work in both songs!
Thank you very much! :- ))
You're my favorite vocaloid composer.
Thanks so much, that means a lot! ; w ;
I wish your work was on Spotify!! 😭
I love your songs!!!
CONGRATULATIONS on 100,000 views!!
thanks so much for the kind words!! it really means a lot :D
I'm really late to this, but I really love this. My only real crit is that I wish that the chorus buildup led to something bigger, like a really good drop or something. Still amazing work tho, especially for your second song.
You are talented....
HOW IN THE WORLD DO YOU ONLY HAVE 343 SUBS ?!?!?
You need more....
Keep making songs plzzzz they are currently getting me through Highschool sanity wise 🎶❤
Can we agree that Cyberdiva has the best Quality?
Her and cyber songman both have such realistic voices
It's great! I hope you make another song!
Well done, this song alone got urself a sub. Can't wait to listen to ur other music!
Me- finds out about cyber diva
Me again- finds this song
--video starts--
(Two seconds in)
Me- I love this song. It ma fave
Now I'm in love with this song
This was awesome tuning overall. I understand most everything and she sounds stunningly human, especially at the beginning and lower sections.
This is breathtaking really! Glad to see a new producer!
thanks so much! ^ ^
Love the lyrics and vocals! Song has an epic progression, very driven, stories feel to it.
usually I like songs with a strong bass beat in the background but this is awesome!
I love the beat and instrumental. The song's topic is great as well. Tuning is pretty good, needs a little work.
Cyber Diva is my favorite!
I'm in love with this song. I never heard of Cyber Diva before, so thanks for giving her a good introduction.
I'm so glad you like it, and that the song introduced you to her! c:
It's cool and pure, techno and splendid, very attractive song!!!!!!!!
I love the beat and the lyrics. Awesome work!
this is great again, you sound as if you have. lot more experience than you actually do.
i really like the vibe! a really “live fast die young” kinda feel, i love it heehee ^^
It sounds so smooth❤
Absolutely amazing!
I've loved this song since 2017!!!
i enjoyed!
This is amazing!!!!!
you're doing beautifully! I can't wait for more! XD
So underrated
This is actually really good!
This song was what made me fall in love with Cyber Diva
i love this so much
Your little sister Alice told me about you!!!
say hi to her for me :- ))
I love your art! Great job on the songs! :D
The artwork and the video are fantastically well done! And that's about the only good thing. I hope you'll focus now on practicing music, and work hard to improve.
Thank you, I am definitely practicing to improve my songwriting!
My favorite part is when she says Clock Work
Some of the tune sounds really similar to skillet's monster
I like it xD
Oh gosh, you're right, I didn't even realize LOL :' )
I'm glad you like it!
Huh I never realized that
Well done!
Hmm. I can't tell if this song has dark undertones, or if it's just erotic.
In the song it said "we're not going to sleep tonight" where I'm trying to sleep...
Damit you made to good of a song!
You are best in this, totally :3
Probably going to cover it soon ; u ;
I'd love to hear it if you do!
Athena Z I'll make sure to link you💞
This. This right here.
This right here is an orginal (I belive vocaloid?) song that I love
Omg love this !!! where can I find this art of Cyva: cyber diva!!!!💛
I've added it to the description c:
Athena Z thank u u love kaleidoscope haze by Cyva its one of my fav songs !!!💙💛
yes, it's a great song! ^ ^
This has grown on me so much over the years but I don't listen to music on youtube much anymore. Please add this song to Spotify I need it!
awesome! I originally only clicked this because the name reminded me of a cartoon character..
whao Goodjob !1 ;3
but it need more faster
Cyber diva is so underrated
The illustration reminds me of Luka's v4x design (this is a good thing)
i like the song!
since 2017 i kept listening it
1:41 Minecraft chat xD
Over all i def like this song has become one of my favs the only thing i really had an issue with is the parts where it says clockwork 5times back to back it just felt like was to many but other then that awesome song
Can you make the instrumental available I want to make an UTAU cover of this
(silently debating what the song means. Murder, torture, romance? idk)
I've added a DL link to the description c:
and I'll leave that up to interpretation--
Harley Gordon the majority of the songs lyrics imo seem to be referencing romance pretty clearly.
"We're not going to sleep tonight"
"Hurry up and turn out the lights"
Usually there's only one thing you do with the lights off but not going to sleep XD. Just one example.
As far as the
"Never give up without a fight"
Probably referencing something like a Romeo and Juliet situation where their parents don't want them to be together, or some other force maybe the guy is being drafted into the army that would explain the lack of time together. So they plan to fight for it as long as they can.
Just my opinion though.
anyone else reminded of creepypasta Clockwork
yeah
APPLE_NYAN6 haha yep that's what I thought too xD
I think cyber diva really fits right into this song. She has almost nothing to improve 💞💓💓💓😃😃😃😄
Wow she has amazing pronounciation!!
The instrumental in 0:56 and in the general choruses are A BIT flat. Everything else is REALLLLLLY catchy, but the instrumental in the chorus could use some improving, which is FAIRLY easy to do actually, all you'd really need to do is add a bit more drum beats , like snares and all of that :0, as someone who ALSO does music (But not Vocaloid music), that's the best way to make music sound less flat and more upbeat if that's what you're going for!
Keep up the good work tho!! I can tell you're gonna get far!
CLOCK WOOOOOPPY
Very good for the first try. I dont know if the minimal intrumentation is really a bad thing, i think its make this music unic. Maybe can choose better tone for certain parts of music, its like dont have much harmony, perhaps just a little musical theory can work it on.
OUMA OUMA OUMA OUMA OUMA OUMA-
I'm unique and special, because I speak Spanish in a video english, but I ask, Do you made the art? because is Beautiful!
Sorry with my bad english. ;-;
yes, I made the art o/
thank you!
All I can imagine is Jamtine getting horknee while singing this to her love Juice and I'm scared-
I don't like cyber diva but she sounds awesome! You have made me change my mind! 😄
ZA WORADO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
5 demos
3 formas de ser nombrada
varias canciones originales
esta CyBa/Cyber Diva/Cynthia no tiene llenadera XD, adoro lo bien que la recibieron
would you release a full version mp3 ? so i can hear this in my car ?^^ this song is awesome ^^
I was super impressed with your song and PV! Your art and animations stand out so well. Would you be interested in collaborating?
Thank you so much! ; v ;
I'm quite busy at the moment, but I'd love to collab sometime! o/
What kind of collaboration were you thinking of?
Any kind of Vocaloid original song would be great, you can message me through TH-cam on my about page or any other social media I have and we can work on some ideas. : )
Lyrics:
It’s in the video
every line is "suck", which is also a snip, from the past and of the future.
hair today, masculinity gone tomorrow
brreard
would you ever be willing to release the vsqx for this? o:
Hello! Unfortunately the vsqx file I made is a huge mess so I'm quite reluctant to upload it ;;
Athena Z oh, i understand!
Nice song man :)
I have to know... is that the DNC Orionstring from FL Studio? I use it all the time xD Super weird to hear it somewhere else haha.
Hey, how about a collab? I've been making "music" for like 8 years (literally half of my life lol), and since last year I've been listening to more and more vocaloids (and I definitely don't have a crush on Len). The thing is, I'm not creative. Like, my creativity is... shit. But if we combined your creativity with my experience, we could make something amazing! What do you say? :o
ooh, I really like your music! (and len is life aa)
I'd love to collab, but I'm quite busy at the moment aa :c feel free to contact me to discuss a collab, though!
I think I'd be able to do music like your two songs, so when you'll have an idea for a new song (and/or time to make a new song) drop me an e-mail (My channel -> About), with vocals, notes or something, idk howtocollab. You can add me as a friend on Discord too, I'm maak4422.
Also what software do you use?
Sounds great! c: (though I can't seem to send you a request on Discord... OTL)
I use FL studio o/
Hey, I use FL Studio too!
Maybe tell me your name on Discord and I'll try to add you?
Oh, awesome! c:
my discord is Des#2091 !
Oh... i like this, i love the effects you used in your video and the Cyva voice ♥
I think...Is there any chance we'll collaborate together for an original song? I loved your work very much >u
Thank you so much!! ♥
I'm quite busy at the moment but I'd definitely be open for a collab sometime!
Perfect!
it is not necessary to be immediate, I am also very
Do you have any facebook profile you can add?
You can send a message through my facebook page! o/
facebook.com/BitterCoffeeArt/
can you post the lyrics in the description please? :)
I've added them! c:
In all honesty, when I saw how the numbers were regarding your subs, likes and views, I wasn't expecting much, but I actually quite like this! It definitely surpassed my expectations! If you don't mind me asking, did you make the art used in the video? If not (or yes as well) is there somewhere I can find it?
Thank you! c:
yes, the art was made by me, though I haven't uploaded it anywhere else at the moment ^ ^
Awesome! It's very good!
*clockwork*
I think you should try remixing this with gummi or a duo of some sort i think something like that i would like better XD
Heya! Just wondering, do you have a place we could get the version with vocals, like you do the instrumental? It's great music, if there was a way to toss a little cash at you for downloads I'd be all over that!
0:08
*Hi this is amazing?????*
this is mixed really well, what program(s) do you use to mix music with vocaloid? also the phrasing of this song reminds me of one of my favorite cruxshadows song.
Jesikats thank you! I use fl studio : )
I would be greatly honored if you gave my new song frame shift a listen
I think that the songs sounds amazing because the music isn't as powerful or over powering the singer which is most starts mistakes it does need a little bit more music though but for this song it is great
Gosh that sounds JUST like the DNC Orionstring in Fl Studio.