Very nice! I have 2 things: Both cadenzas sound a bit off, I can't really tell what it is though, might just be limitations due to the keyboard. (And im used to playing the candenzas a bit faster.) And in the second B part I feel like the tempo should be a bit more rigid. Because right now it sounds like you're trying to go fast, but some of the jumps then have a really big slowdown, which is also used as an emotional thing in some parts of the piece, but, at least it's how I interpret it, that part is really going at it and shouldn't need those pauses of longing, just pure passion. (Idk I'm just rambling at this point) But you're doing great, already sounds amazing (especially considering the recording and playing equipment)!
Yooo this is amazing bro!! Technique and everything. ONE SUGGESTION THOUGH. Keep those inside arpeggio voices in the right hand quiet man, let that melody take over. At the beginning, the keychange to B♭ major, and also after that huge cadenza at 3:37. Other than that bro this is gorgeous, would love to hear you play this on a grand piano 🤟🏾
Very nice. I'm in a similar situation where I'm learning it on a keyboard with little touch response. The intro is one thing but it definitely makes the B major section awkward, lmao
This song is very beautiful. It expresses situations in which sadness and joy merge...
Very nice!
I have 2 things:
Both cadenzas sound a bit off, I can't really tell what it is though, might just be limitations due to the keyboard. (And im used to playing the candenzas a bit faster.)
And in the second B part I feel like the tempo should be a bit more rigid. Because right now it sounds like you're trying to go fast, but some of the jumps then have a really big slowdown, which is also used as an emotional thing in some parts of the piece, but, at least it's how I interpret it, that part is really going at it and shouldn't need those pauses of longing, just pure passion. (Idk I'm just rambling at this point)
But you're doing great, already sounds amazing (especially considering the recording and playing equipment)!
Beautiful!
Yooo this is amazing bro!! Technique and everything. ONE SUGGESTION THOUGH. Keep those inside arpeggio voices in the right hand quiet man, let that melody take over. At the beginning, the keychange to B♭ major, and also after that huge cadenza at 3:37. Other than that bro this is gorgeous, would love to hear you play this on a grand piano 🤟🏾
Yess bro, ik that one though my piano only has a little touch response so it still sounds loud even though i play it quietly. Thanks for the tips tho!
Amazing, how long have you been playing?
about 8 years but on and off and i started having formal training 2 years ago and im on my 3rd year on taking music course majoring in piano right now
Amazing, I’m trying to learn so hard but I just can’t get basics down
Very nice. I'm in a similar situation where I'm learning it on a keyboard with little touch response. The intro is one thing but it definitely makes the B major section awkward, lmao