But should've yn give him chances too early I mean even tho they were in suger Bady-badfy relationship still he use other girls he didn't show up on her graduation day because he was busy with girls and in party tooo je said he love his childhood friend but still have so many suger babies behind her this is not what true love like
And what about yn... She was in love with jungkook then why the hell she kissed jhope.... If jungkook is at fault then yn is also at fault... You said he used girls but he have already told them at start all the rules and girls agreed with that rules for money so if girls fall in love with him it's not jk mistake , he already said them in start...
@@khushitiwari1127 when did she kissed jhope huh and girl and you didn't get my point girl look I was talking about his childhood friend too like this is what true love is having suger babies behind her and than say I love her
It's really amazing. I don't like junkook character much . He had a lot sugar baby in past . He also hurt y/n feeling . I would more happy if y/n make him regreat by not forgiving him easily. Thanks author for this ff. 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
Cam you please make this type of oneshot that he is innocent but you made him needy and he don't know what is happening to him 🤗😂 plzz it's a request plzzzz made it Iam waiting plzzzzzz
Damn this is kind of dark i mean she did not understand her self worth and agreed to be a sugar baby i mean i know she was struggling for food and stuff but it was not like the wealth was making her happy it was masking her problems of not finding love ,care ,loyalty ,stability just a contract . I mean it's good he did end of loving her in the end but she went through this misery by agreeing to this horrible living situation .
You did yr best author nim... But as fan of ff i would say we all still have lots to learn right so i hope u can improve a lot in making stories which will truly excite the reader... English may not be everyone first language but making the story lines existing and understanding is the most important thing I would say.... I have read lots of novels and many ff i also learn how story line goes and ends..... But author nim dont be discouraged at all... There's a long way to go and to learn.... The story line may not be the very best as yet but as time pass it will be... So fighting and hope this fiction of yours can be the best and yet to improve ...... As they say we improve by finding the mistake and by listening to once honest advice... So here I am being honest..... But author nim i love the thought of you giving your time and energy to make such stories.... 💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓
Author-nim I am sorry but I am disappointed with this ff like how can he love y/n? he used other girls while y/n was being his sugar baby like y/n have 0% of self respect . 🙁
![ค้างคืนโรงเก็บกระสวยอวกาศร้างกลางทะเลทราย [Around The World Ep. 3]](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/E5bWZQhABJE/mqdefault.jpg)
But should've yn give him chances too early I mean even tho they were in suger
Bady-badfy relationship still he use other girls he didn't show up on her graduation day because he was busy with girls and in party tooo je said he love his childhood friend but still have so many suger babies behind her this is not what true love like
Exactly.....I am sooooo disappointed 😔 I was a big fan of hers........
And what about yn... She was in love with jungkook then why the hell she kissed jhope.... If jungkook is at fault then yn is also at fault... You said he used girls but he have already told them at start all the rules and girls agreed with that rules for money so if girls fall in love with him it's not jk mistake , he already said them in start...
@@khushitiwari1127 when did she kissed jhope huh and girl and you didn't get my point girl look I was talking about his childhood friend too like this is what true love is having suger babies behind her and than say I love her
If it is a love then I am OK ...As SINGLE..🙄😑
😂
OFFFFFF GURL ATTITUDE 💀
Ofcourse we are OK because we are not JK 😂😂
@@Gotin_darkness it's not attitude It's called SELF RESPECT and SELF LOVE
Never gonna love a used thing or person either way liked your ff.
It's really amazing. I don't like junkook character much . He had a lot sugar baby in past . He also hurt y/n feeling . I would more happy if y/n make him regreat by not forgiving him easily. Thanks author for this ff.
😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
Cam you please make this type of oneshot that he is innocent but you made him needy and he don't know what is happening to him 🤗😂 plzz it's a request plzzzz made it Iam waiting plzzzzzz
Damn this is kind of dark i mean she did not understand her self worth and agreed to be a sugar baby i mean i know she was struggling for food and stuff but it was not like the wealth was making her happy it was masking her problems of not finding love ,care ,loyalty ,stability just a contract . I mean it's good he did end of loving her in the end but she went through this misery by agreeing to this horrible living situation .
You did yr best author nim... But as fan of ff i would say we all still have lots to learn right so i hope u can improve a lot in making stories which will truly excite the reader...
English may not be everyone first language but making the story lines existing and understanding is the most important thing I would say.... I have read lots of novels and many ff i also learn how story line goes and ends..... But author nim dont be discouraged at all... There's a long way to go and to learn.... The story line may not be the very best as yet but as time pass it will be... So fighting and hope this fiction of yours can be the best and yet to improve ......
As they say we improve by finding the mistake and by listening to once honest advice... So here I am being honest..... But author nim i love the thought of you giving your time and energy to make such stories.... 💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓
Author-nim I am sorry but I am disappointed with this ff like how can he love y/n? he used other girls while y/n was being his sugar baby like y/n have 0% of self respect .
🙁
Ok
It gave me depression instantly
If male lead is not Virgin tjen why u necessary to female lead to always has to be virgin
I’m support for you n I’m here for you
Dont you think we need bonus 👀
Hy i am your new subscriber hope we get long 💜
Thanks for subbing!
Yojssvvttt
'promosm' 🤷
Hey author new subscriber 🤗
Will you like if i sat something?? I am just obsessed with this ff??? Well who is agreed with me
You have many grammatical and spelling mistakes 🙂
I know.
@@kookieff493 don’t take it otherwise ur stories r great just work on it